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Now you mention it, what's up with Talent system? I thought Talents show up at every 5 levels? Since he is now at level 31, he should have 6 talent points.
Noticed the part where they discuss about module swamps in future planning... that is Omnitechnology used by Clans. Imagine Wolf's Dragoons reaction when they find out that Federated Suns are using Omnitechnology for weapons only. Hehehhe.
Good chapter as usual. You included other POVs on...
Skin Walker, so you're making Twilight verse to be full blown supernatural world. Good, because Twilight was little bland in terms of supernatural community as there's only vampires, shapeshifters and werewolves. That's it.
This AU version of your story is better, as skin walker is nasty...
Bit better but you still will need to separate dialogues to separate paragraph. Your first few chapters did good job with that, made it easier to read the dialogue in flow.
Like:
"Let's talk about logistics, shall we?" A figure spoke as others in the room sharpened their attention at the...
Umm, you will need to edit your chapter 6 again.
My suggestion: when you copy your entire chapter from PDF file, paste it on google docs so you can edit it further to fix all formatting issues and whatnot then paste it again at here.