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    Sneaking His Way into the Multiverse (RWBY Jaune, WC-lite mechanics)

    Subversions of that trope are popular lately. Jaune gets there, finds that he needs to save the dragon from Lisa and her lethal wordbreath because she just. Won't. Stop. Talking. Cost-benefit analysis. An object hanging on the wall takes almost no effort to pick up as they go for the grand...
  2. LazyAutumnMoon

    Sneaking His Way into the Multiverse (RWBY Jaune, WC-lite mechanics)
    Threadmarks: Chapter 29: Frolicking Forest Foray

    Logy, the monster Hunter. That was their new acquaintance, and he proved to be as open as his first impression suggested. The young man responded well to their subtle inquiries, letting Jaune and Tattletale piece together the story of this land. Fanged beasts, leviathans (no relation), bird...
  3. LazyAutumnMoon

    Sneaking His Way into the Multiverse (RWBY Jaune, WC-lite mechanics)

    Nice, thanks for catching that. Phone+google docs+firefox= 3 different autocorrects deciding I'm wrong. Eh, that one generally seems fine going by other writings. In third person limited, the narration and the main character's thoughts can experience a certain amount of bleed-over without being...
  4. LazyAutumnMoon

    Sneaking His Way into the Multiverse (RWBY Jaune, WC-lite mechanics)
    Threadmarks: Chapter 28: New Day, New World

    "Huh? Waz dis…?" "Me." "!" The day opened with a crash, as Lisa, upon waking up to find herself lying sideways atop Jaune, tumbled off the air mattress in a none too adroit display of her natural dexterity. From there, their typical morning began. Albeit, with a little more enthusiasm. New...
  5. LazyAutumnMoon

    Sneaking His Way into the Multiverse (RWBY Jaune, WC-lite mechanics)

    Creepy is a good word for it. The scenes in the light novel dealing with September 30 had him smiling, being sarcastic, and finding amusement in things. Then, he'd just toss aside allies, abduct Last Order, let Kihara try to kill Accelerator, and so on. Something characters always mention is...
  6. LazyAutumnMoon

    Sneaking His Way into the Multiverse (RWBY Jaune, WC-lite mechanics)

    Maybe it would, but if not, it should also be a lot simpler a setting. Jaune Arc believes he can do anything he sets his mind to, so it will be absolutely no problem at all. Yup. Now, while I would want to, just to shove them all in a karaoke bar together, I was more referring to one of my...
  7. LazyAutumnMoon

    Sneaking His Way into the Multiverse (RWBY Jaune, WC-lite mechanics)
    Threadmarks: Chapter 27: A Certain Otherworld Huntsman - End_of_Day

    Ring. Ring. Ring. Ring. Ring. Ring. A phone rang into the night. On its screen, a name they did not expect to hear from again, but should have. Aleister Crowley. Jaune and Tattletale stared at it for a while, then shared a look. They just screwed the guy over, throwing in their lot with the...
  8. LazyAutumnMoon

    Sneaking His Way into the Multiverse (RWBY Jaune, WC-lite mechanics)

    Okay, I'm finally getting what's happening. "Hound Dog used tactics different to what he knew. Less Huntsman and more militia, but even then, there was something weird about it. They didn't mount a charge, they repositioned. Two squads were moving up, with both of them doing a maneuver where a...
  9. LazyAutumnMoon

    Sneaking His Way into the Multiverse (RWBY Jaune, WC-lite mechanics)

    Okay, turns out it was a problem with the title that got the story taken down on Spacebattles. Sneaking His Way into the Multiverse (RWBY Jaune, WC-lite mechanics) The WC part specifically. I added that so people aren't blindsided. A lot of readers have an aversion on the Waifu Catalog. Someone...
  10. LazyAutumnMoon

    Sneaking His Way into the Multiverse (RWBY Jaune, WC-lite mechanics)

    Dunno. Got the alert "Your thread Sneaking His Way into the Multiverse (RWBY Jaune, WC-lite mechanics) was moved to a different forum." Except it looks like the thing's deleted. Someone might have had a problem with it, I guess.
  11. LazyAutumnMoon

    Sneaking His Way into the Multiverse (RWBY Jaune, WC-lite mechanics)

    The main mission of the Atlas military in Remnant's modern age would be to fight Grimm, or to defend walls. Meanwhile, Remnant has four big cities, and they're not seeing the kinds of conflict that would give rise to the Earth tactics of today. For the most part, those guys are going to be...
  12. LazyAutumnMoon

    Sneaking His Way into the Multiverse (RWBY Jaune, WC-lite mechanics)

    Exactly that. And on Jaune's end, the last big war on Remnant they were using swords and bows still, and since then the cities never saw large scale urban warfare. Happy you like it! And yeah, the juxtaposition really livened up the character in a way I found engaging to write, and I'd have to...
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    Sneaking His Way into the Multiverse (RWBY Jaune, WC-lite mechanics)
    Threadmarks: Chapter 26: A Certain Otherworld Huntsman: Firing_the_Teacher

    The office building was no fancy thing. Were it an institution, some pillar of the city, the architect might have built it to look like a temple rather than a cookie cutter high rise. Had it held any sort of wealth or influence, a corporate headquarter let's say, they would have put actual...
  14. LazyAutumnMoon

    Sneaking His Way into the Multiverse (RWBY Jaune, WC-lite mechanics)

    Thank you for saying so. Writing Tattletale is a fun challenge. The biggest factor for me in regards to new party members, would have to be whether the character can be convinced to leave their world behind. This is closely followed by how their presence would mesh and clash with others, and...
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    Sneaking His Way into the Multiverse (RWBY Jaune, WC-lite mechanics)
    Threadmarks: Chapter 25: A Certain Otherworld Huntsman - Three's_a_Clique

    Under the intensifying rain, as the evening sun dropped below the horizon, three figures drove through the city in a hijacked black ops van. Jaune, in the driver seat, thought it a rather welcome reprieve. He didn't have to move much, didn't have to walk, only giving the occasional nudge to the...
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