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Recent content by Navrin

  1. Navrin

    Phantom Factor

    You're welcome. :) And sure, there's a difference... one is willfully risking danger while the other is actively seeking it out. It's especially egregious since she should know that Yuma is extremely reckless and will charge into dangerous situations. Ah, missed that it specifies it has to be...
  2. Navrin

    Phantom Factor

    Almost certain you want "excited" here instead of "exited". When addressing somebody like this their name should be set apart with commas. So "Hey, Yuma." (And if the sentence was going to continue there should be a comma after the name ends as well) excited here too. "too" instead of "to"...
  3. Navrin

    Phantom Factor

    I started watching a sub of Zexal. If you care I'll be putting some observations in a spoiler. (Hopefully it's an accurate translation)
  4. Navrin

    Phantom Factor

    Ah, playing singleton decreases consistency and power pretty considerably. Especially for most Ritual and Fusion decks. Does the deck even have any Ritual Spells? If not, I don't think Choju of the Trillion Hands can resolve, and it'd just give his opponent a free look at his deck...
  5. Navrin

    Phantom Factor

    Haru demanding a kiss is something I take notable issue with. Coersive affection is... rather unpleasant, imo. She also doesn't seem to be doing a good job reining Kari in. (Though who knows, maybe this is what Kari's like after Haru's moderating influence is accounted for) Decent for Zexal is...
  6. Navrin

    Phantom Factor

    Operational? There are a few other things you might mean. Almost certain you want "sweet" here rather than "sweat". Where did this come from? Wasn't it destroyed the turn before? Almost certain you want "wary" rather than "weary" here. This would more "properly" be "have to do this alone"...
  7. Navrin

    Phantom Factor

    You have more quotes split between two paragraphs with no opening quotation mark in the second. Is this a deliberate style choice you're making? Or a standard I am unfamiliar with, perhaps? I believe he means he's only special summoned this turn. The x 3 was replaced by a smiley here. I...
  8. Navrin

    Phantom Factor

    Are you running with Xyz monsters being the only known Extra Deck monsters? Or are there Fusions, Synchros, and maybe even Pendulums openly being used? Also, I'm hoping we get at least one good Ritual specialist.
  9. Navrin

    Phantom Factor

    Ah, missed that. Thank you. And bringing it back during Main Phase 2 like that means you need far fewer changes. Nice to see she has such a card; it'll be very helpful to her in general, I think.
  10. Navrin

    Phantom Factor

    I'm glad it was helpful. :) Not sure how you'll fix the opening to Dawn of the Numbers since the game state as it developed currently relies on Tori having a moderately powerful monster on the field. Add another set card and have it be something to recur Airknight? Though it'd probably have...
  11. Navrin

    Phantom Factor

    I am almost certain you want "whether" here rather than "weather". Silly Yuto, you don't need people Shark believes to be better than him, just ones who're vaguely near him in skill. I believe Rio qualifies? Not very familiar with Zexal, though. After all, a lot of decks would have a better...
  12. Navrin

    SALLY EX MACHINA

    As an uninformed guess: Omega might have all-the-explosives knowledge and cram the knowledge into the brains of every ally "worthy". If Rouge counts at this point she might have picked up a fair bit just from that even if she didn't care at all for some reason. I would also guess that, at...
  13. Navrin

    SALLY EX MACHINA

    Relying on security-through-obscurity with technical vulnerabilities against Eggman seems like a losing strategy to me. Especially with how catastrophic it would be to have exploited, and him having plenty of motivation to search for vulnerabilities if she starts openly opposing him. Hopefully...
  14. Navrin

    SALLY EX MACHINA

    Which form of defiance is Sally ex Machina more inclined toward: Using the weapon Eggman made her body into against him to thwart his plans, or spiting him by using her capabilities (or modifying her capabilities) for civilian purposes?
  15. Navrin

    With A Bared Sword

    Ah, Feddies and their fetish for military asceticism. :P Do you mean "startled" here?
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