ThunderBasilisk
Well Worn Bastion
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A damn good chapter as always
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Call it by its original name you coward! Lol
Hah! Jatz is a genre that predates Jizz! The Jizzers will rule the galaxy from the shadows two centuries from now, Jatz is what Darth Plagueis' parents listened to. Although afaik there is no description of what it actually sounded like, I like disco because I feel like it fits the bill of "good but horribly outdated music", but given the name it's obvious that it is also supposed to be jazz-related.Call it by its original name you coward! Lol
diners and dive bars are truly the most favored of the Force when it comes to getting its entertainment.
I have, sorta! The issue is I've lost my log in credentials, so I'm working on that. Ao3 is really slow to get anything done but, if possible, I'll have everything uploaded there, too. Might end up having to be on a new account. Ugh, reuploading everything...Damn I was hoping Nerim would win.
This was great! Have you considered posting it on archive of our own?
I have, sorta! The issue is I've lost my log in credentials, so I'm working on that. Ao3 is really slow to get anything done but, if possible, I'll have everything uploaded there, too. Might end up having to be on a new account. Ugh, reuploading everything...
I actually only uploaded it here on a whim the first time, and I have little idea of where else fanfiction is uploaded. This fic is the first time I've been in the scene since like 2011, I don't even know if fanfiction.net is still up, let alone used. Obviously it can't go on fimfiction...
Also, are you a clone?
Wasn't Tetha just extolling the necessity she feels to learn from the Holocron even though it's super sus? So she's willing to destroy it for lying to her or altering the deal, but that would leave her with no teacher, so I guess she isn't that desperate then?Her eyes gained that steely, intense quality again, glaring with deep foreboding energy. "A box more concerned with lying than teaching? I have no use for that. I'd sooner help Nerim slice you in half."
He's also kinda wrong about this, though it is arguably true the order has fewer combat focussed Jedi "duelists" than in previous eras... the prequel era jedi are generally the order at its peak, with some of the strongest force wielders and duelists in its entire history, it's just that until the clone wars there isn't as much of a necessity for combat focussed jedi.Machina placed a hand to his chin. "I've gathered that the Jedi have lacked foes in the Force for many centuries, and have grown soft in the ways of dueling.
I can understand the preference for her. She's an OC, I made her as a counterpoint to Nerim, specifically early-book Nerim. I can also understand disliking his character development, as it's made him more mellow and Jedi-like. The fic is in large part a story about Nerim slowly becoming in-tune with the Living Force, so as time passes he becomes less neurotic and more confident. Tetha serves as a counterpoint by being more neurotic, but also being more confident, as well as having been powerful in the Force but uneducated as opposed to Nerim being stunted but spending his entire life being educated in it. This was at no point intended to be an isekai, but Tetha is intended to be a more traditional protagonist for sure.Is Tetha a canon character or just some weird super duper special OC who is seemingly more driven and interesting than the MC? Maybe it's just been a while but while this story started out very strong, the MC has thus far been less compelling and interesting to read compared to Tetha in the last 2 chapters. She might as well be the isekai character not him.
An interplay of mutual interests and threats is integral to Sith master/apprentice relationships. Her threatening to destroy him serves as a warning that if their mutual interests diverge too broadly, their relationship will fall apart. It's similar to how Nerim chides Arwain on not following the Code and stresses her responsibilities to him, but where their relationship is built on trust and generosity, the Sith relationship is based on rational self interest. It's not directly a death threat in that she intends to kill him, it's a signal that she is ready to receive more respect. Machina accepts this as a proper display of her increasing power, and the fact that she's willing to make such a threat means she's drawing closer to becoming a Sith.Wasn't Tetha just extolling the necessity she feels to learn from the Holocron even though it's super sus? So she's willing to destroy it for lying to her or altering the deal, but that would leave her with no teacher, so I guess she isn't that desperate then?
Anakin did not have a positive or even neutral view of the Sith more than a decade into his grooming, either. Anakin didn't even have a positive view of the Sith when he became Darth Vader. Palpatine was a little unique in his insidious method of teaching (thus the name) but I imagine other Sith could use similar strategies of perpetuating their Order. Sometimes it's easier to manipulate someone if you don't directly attack their core beliefs first thing.Also damn Darth Machina fucking sucks if he can't manipulate a little kid into feeling at least morally neutral about the Sith lmao. Plagueis, Sidious, Bane, hell even the brotherhood of darkness who Bane shits on constantly have better rhetoric when convincing ignorant civilians to join them.
Admittedly I was a little caustic lol. However while I agree with your assessment of Sith relationships broadly, I also don't think it entirely works here with Tetha. Firstly, she is still a child, a child who seems very driven and desperate to learn to use her force abilities and gain autonomy... not someone who can actually confidently make threats to her sole benefactor. The mutual danger of Sith relationships only works well into that relationship, when the apprentice can actually afford to say "no" and needs to be cajoled by the master sometimes. Tetha is not that. Furthermore, comparing Tetha to Anakin is unwise since Anakin was an adult, and was far more desperate than Tetha, but he was also already indoctrinated in Jedi tradition and values.I can understand the preference for her. She's an OC, I made her as a counterpoint to Nerim, specifically early-book Nerim. I can also understand disliking his character development, as it's made him more mellow and Jedi-like. The fic is in large part a story about Nerim slowly becoming in-tune with the Living Force, so as time passes he becomes less neurotic and more confident. Tetha serves as a counterpoint by being more neurotic, but also being more confident, as well as having been powerful in the Force but uneducated as opposed to Nerim being stunted but spending his entire life being educated in it. This was at no point intended to be an isekai, but Tetha is intended to be a more traditional protagonist for sure.
An interplay of mutual interests and threats is integral to Sith master/apprentice relationships. Her threatening to destroy him serves as a warning that if their mutual interests diverge too broadly, their relationship will fall apart. It's similar to how Nerim chides Arwain on not following the Code and stresses her responsibilities to him, but where their relationship is built on trust and generosity, the Sith relationship is based on rational self interest. It's not directly a death threat in that she intends to kill him, it's a signal that she is ready to receive more respect. Machina accepts this as a proper display of her increasing power, and the fact that she's willing to make such a threat means she's drawing closer to becoming a Sith.
Anakin did not have a positive or even neutral view of the Sith more than a decade into his grooming, either. Anakin didn't even have a positive view of the Sith when he became Darth Vader. Palpatine was a little unique in his insidious method of teaching (thus the name) but I imagine other Sith could use similar strategies of perpetuating their Order. Sometimes it's easier to manipulate someone if you don't directly attack their core beliefs first thing.
Thank you for leaving the comment, it might be critical but it's fun to read!
i ship it…I think I have already said that once on this story hmmm I think about the cathar princessThat's..." Nerim glanced behind them to their pursuer, and then back to Tetha. He felt that fluttering feeling in his chest strengthen. "...What I'm here for."
I realized as I was writing this that Nerim has pretty much only met female characters, which probably gives the impression of a harem situation. I'm not too bothered by it, but in my head, none of his relationships were really romance-coded,i ship it…I think I have already said that once on this story hmmm I think about the cathar princess
Hmm! Reasonable! She definitely would've won in that engagement if this was a real fight. However, Nerim has more than one teacher, and perhaps he's taking to heart Jianno's words from long ago...Ha! Not the direction I expected that to go in. I'd give the win to Tetha though for that first hit to the torso. The description didn't specify how centre mass it was but I think it would have taken Nerim out of the fight for sure if the blade was in battle mode.
He shrugged. "Psyched my opponent out, I guess. She was so worked up to get me that she stepped out of bounds, and I won by default. She woulda killed me if it was a real fight."
"Sore loser talk," Jianno scoffed and fired another bolt. "Every fight has its own circumstances. If she failed under the circumstances, then she just failed. Is what it is."
I know I just like making the joke lol unlessI'm not too bothered by it, but in my head, none of his relationships were really romance-coded,except, perhaps this one