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My brothers Keeper, an SI as the twin brother of Stalin (Reworked)

The most frightening part is that, Mika makes sense. In both the alternate timeline and in our timeline. He wants his daughter to be safe, by her father-in-law reputation (our TL) and/or a good husband (this timeline... and I think Yakov is also a reasonable guy OTL as well).

Nice touch on having Yagoda in the scene as well. Would be interesting to follow his fate.
 
You know Mika is scary when that damn maniac Yagoda is terrified of being alone with him.
 
If the Westermarck Effect is true, and there's been a slow buildup of empirical data saying it is, Yakov and Kato are unlikely to feel any attraction to each other because of reverse sexual imprinting.

If they refuse, I doubt Mika would force them.
 
Vranyo, Vranyo, and god-damned Vranyo New
April 7, 1888
Gori
The Russian Empire


I had a rock clenched in my right fist and "Everybody Wants to rule the world" humming cheerfully in my head as I crossed the bridge connecting the east side of Gori to the west. Tears for Fears felt appropriate. Today was, after all, a day someone would feel fear and cry out tears.

"Are you sure about this?"

I glanced back. Joe was trotting to keep up with me, tugging at my shirt like a worried mother hen who had recently discovered existential dread.

"Yes," I said pleasantly, smiling and rolling my shoulders. "Didn't you tell me Eduard hit you? And called Mama a whore?"

"Bu—"

"No buts."

I kept walking. The rock was smooth, dense, perfectly weighted. God had put it on this earth for exactly this purpose, and who was I to argue with divine providence?

"I'm sick of this," I continued, in the same tone a man might use to complain about bad weather or undercooked bread. "Not just Eduard. Lado, Giorgi, Irkali, Levan — all of them. The whole scenic cast of little fuckers."

"Mama said th—"

"Mama said to turn the other cheek, yes." I nodded sagely. "Wonderful woman. Great theology. Not interested."

Joe made a sound of profound exasperation behind me — a sound I had come to know well over the last few years. We approached the field at the edge of town, the unofficial venue for Gori's less formal social engagements, and there they were. Eduard and his loyal supporting cast, arranged in that particular way boys arrange themselves when they believe numbers constitute an argument.

They saw me coming.

Eduard's face shifted through several emotions in rapid succession — confusion, recognition, the dawning awareness that something had gone slightly wrong in his day. "What's this?" he said, with the bravado of a man who has not yet noticed the rock. "Did little Soso come crawling to his br—"

I punched him in the jaw with my right hand.

Clean. Efficient. Personally satisfying.

Then I brought the rock across the left side of his head with the measured enthusiasm of a man who has thought about this moment for some time and intends to do it justice.

Eduard dropped.

What followed was approximately ten seconds of vigorous civic correction — foot applied to torso, repeatedly, with the kind of focused energy one brings to a task one genuinely believes in. I'm told I hummed during it. I cannot confirm this. It sounds like something I would do.

When I stopped, I was barely winded. Eduard was a great deal more winded, which felt appropriate given the power dynamic we were correcting. He started crying now, I spit on him.

I looked at the others. They had the particular stillness of boys who have just watched something recalibrate their understanding of consequences.

"I heard you assholes were talking shit about my mother." I gave Eduard a kick to the head as he started moving again. "Take this piece of shit back to his house. Tell his father, his mother, whoever answers the door — tell them I did this, and tell them exactly why." I let my gaze move slowly across the assembled faces, because theater matters. "And if I hear any of you bitches pulling the same shit again, I will come back, and the conversation will be shorter."

I turned to Joe, who was standing slightly behind me with the expression of a man attending a public execution he did not technically sanction but had also not walked away from.

"Let's go home," I said.

We walked. After a few seconds I glanced back, purely out of academic interest. Eduard was struggling to get on his feet — impressive recovery — he was now crying with the full commitment of a boy who had expected the day to go very differently.

I laughed. Not a polite laugh. A full, genuine, completely unrepentant laugh that I carried with me all the way back across the bridge.

Joe walked beside me in pointed silence.

"You're going to be insufferable about this, aren't you," he said finally.

"I have no idea what you're talking about," I said. "I simply resolved a dispute. Diplomatically."

He said nothing.

I kept humming.

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June 16, 1921
Nikolayevsky Railway Station
Moscow, Russian Soviet Federative Socialist Republic


The station smelled of coal smoke, machine oil, and cheap tobacco — the holy trinity of Soviet infrastructure. I stood on the platform with my hands — hand, singular, still a recent grammatical adjustment — behind my back, watching a line of Cheka men haul crates of alcohol into the first of several waiting freight cars. Organized crime, nationalized. The revolution at work.

The destination was Petrograd. From there, a convoy of trucks would carry the cargo to the Estonian border, where a charming collection of falsified paperwork, strategic bribes, artfully applied threats, and a modest amount of blackmail would transform it, on paper at least, into "Estonian goods". From Tallinn it would sail to America, there to be distributed by organized criminals operating under the nominal supervision of my brother-in-law and a radical journalist traveling under another man's name.

I yawned. It was half past seven in the evening. I was supposed to be home.

I was in Moscow, so naturally I was not.

This was, I had come to understand after forty-two years of living in this country — almost forty-three, God help me — a fundamental law of Russian existence. If you wanted something done correctly, you stood there and watched it happen in person. If you left, reality would quietly rearrange itself into something more comfortable for everyone except you. This was not laziness, not malice, not even stupidity, though those were all present in varying quantities. It was something more specific, more cultural, more uniquely infuriating.

Vranyo.

The word deserves a moment of appreciation, because there is no adequate English equivalent, and the English language is poorer for the absence. The closest translation I could manage — forty-plus years of life in Russia having failed to make me fond of it — was this: "my men lie to me, I know they're lying to me, they know I know, and they lie anyway." Not from malice. Not really. More from a deeply embedded social instinct that the comfortable version of reality is more useful than the accurate one, and that everyone present will do them the courtesy of pretending otherwise.

The first time I encountered it after waking up in this body, I had assumed it was an individual character flaw. The second time, a pattern. By the hundredth time, I had arrived at something approaching academic resignation, which is the closest thing to peace a man with my temperament can manage.

It was everywhere. The army. The party. Procurement. Daily life. The factories that reported record production while the steel was discarded due to being low quality. The farm that met its quota on paper while the workers hadn't been paid in six weeks. The officer who assured me the barracks were secure while the barracks were, at that precise moment, on fire. A whole civilization organized around the mutual performance of convenient fictions, maintained by everyone simultaneously, challenged by no one, and silently understood by all parties to be fiction.

No wonder we lost the Cold War, I thought — then caught myself using we, which meant I had internalized the national identity completely. Wonderful. The new Soviet man, born in 1878, died in 2025, reborn in the rubble of the Russian Empire, fully assimilated. Za zdarovye.

This was also, in no small part, why I did what I did. The patrols. The surprise inspections. The interrogations I conducted personally rather than delegating. The battles I led from the front. People assumed it was ideology, or ruthlessness, some cultivated mythology of personal terror, the desire that I wanted to die. They weren't wrong, especially about the part where I wanted to die. But at the practical level — the logistical, administrative, keep-the-actual-trains-running level — the honest answer was simpler: if I wasn't physically present, someone would lie to me, and then something would go wrong, and then someone would lie to me about that too, and the whole enterprise would collapse in a fog of comfortable fictions while everyone nodded and assured me things were progressing satisfactorily.

I had tried to work around it. I promoted people who were honest, or at least more honest than their colleagues, or at least honest enough to tell me the truth when I made it sufficiently clear that the alternative was worse. I cross-referenced everything. I cultivated the reputation of a man who already knew the answer before he asked the question, because half the time the reputation was load-bearing.

And yes, fine, I had deployed vranyo myself, when the occasion demanded it. I was not proud of this. I was also not surprised by it. A man shapes himself to his environment or he doesn't survive, and I had chosen survival, repeatedly and at significant personal cost, so intellectual consistency on this particular point felt like a luxury.

I stared at the crates and thought, for perhaps the ten thousandth time, about that passage from a novel — not one that had been written yet, from a life I could no longer fully access — where the narrator stands in a street in the capital of his country and asks: In what moment had Peru fucked itself up? In what moment had he fucked himself up?

I had never been able to answer the Russian version of that question. At what precise moment had this country bent itself into this particular shape? 1613? 1861? The Mongols? Ivan the Terrible, who was terrible in ways that went well beyond the nickname? I could construct arguments for all of them. I could also construct arguments that the shape was simply native, that Russia had been exactly this since before anyone was recording it, and that the Romanovs and the Bolsheviks and whoever came after were less causes than symptoms.

I had even less clarity about the personal version.

At what moment did I fuck myself up?

The day I died? Unfortunately that wasn't it. The actual answer — the one about choices and compromises and the particular path from "I'll just keep my brother from getting himself killed" to "I am a senior official of a secret police organization watching contraband alcohol being loaded onto state railway infrastructure at half past seven on a Tuesday" — that answer remained, as ever, frustratingly unavailable. Maybe it was gradual, or maybe it was one specific answer. I'd never know, and I'd die never knowing.

I looked at Yagoda, who was standing beside me with the posture of a man trying very hard to appear calm in the presence of something he has correctly identified as dangerous. I understood. I would have been anxious too, if I were a functionary of modest reputation standing next to someone with mine. That was the reputation's function. I hadn't designed it this way, however, I was, in this specific moment, grateful for said design.

"How much longer until this train is loaded?" I asked. "I'm exhausted."

"It shouldn't take too long, Comrade Jugashvili," he said, in that particular careful tone that exists in the space between an answer and a non-answer.

I looked at him. "Not too long." I repeated the phrase back to him with the flat affect of a man cataloging its inadequacies. "How cute. Yagoda, don't bullshit me. We have several trains. This is the first one. We have, conservatively, several hundred crates remaining. So when you say "not too long*/" — what measure of time are we operating in? Hours? Days? Months? The lifetime of the current government?"

He opened his mouth.

"Before you answer," I said pleasantly, "let me remind you of something. First day Stalin introduced you to me. Do you remember what I told you? What I said was the one rule I expected from everyone who works for and with me?"

He winced. Not dramatically — he was a controlled man, Yagoda — but the wince was there if you knew how to look.

"That an ugly truth is better than a sweet lie," he said.

"Exactly." I nodded. "Beautiful phrase. I mean every word of it. So. I'll say it again. How long?"

He exhaled. A small, resigned sound. "We'll be here all night," he said. "Several trains to go."

"There we are." I spread my remaining hand in a gesture of mild benediction. "Was that so fucking difficult?"

"Comrade Jugashvili—"

"Genuinely curious. Why the hedge first? Why give me "not too long" when you knew perfectly well it was going to be "all night"? What did you expect to achieve?"

He had the slightly pained expression of a man being asked to explain water. "The truth is...... difficult," he said.

"To most people, yes." I conceded this freely. "I am not most people. I have a documented and extensively field-tested intolerance for being told comfortable bullshit. My methods of expressing this intolerance are, I am told, quite memorable." I tilted my head. "So when you run the calculation — "sweet lie versus ugly truth, which option produces better outcomes in close proximity to comrade Jugashvili" — where does the math land for you, exactly?"

"...Point taken, sir," he said.

"Good." I looked back at the freight car. The men were still loading. The night was going to be very long. "Send someone for dinner. Something warm, I don't care what. Have a cot or a chair or something brought down — I'm not leaving until this train is finished, and I refuse to stand all night on principle. Feel free to get one for yourself. We'll be sleeping in shifts."

"Yes, sir." He departed with the bearing of a man who was deeply grateful to have somewhere else to be.

I watched him go.

I watched my men continue loading crates of Soviet alcohol destined for American criminals, in service of a bootlegging operation designed by the director of the national secret police to fund the reconstruction of a country he had helped destroy, under the personal oversight of a man who had been reincarnated from a different century and still hadn't figured out how to open an envelope one-handed.

God, I thought, I fucking hate Russia.

I closed my eyes and sighed. And I missed Maria. And Elsa.

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June 17, 1921
The Kremlin
Moscow, Russian Soviet Federative Socialist Republic


I looked at the clock on my study wall. Five in the evening. I looked down at my desk.

The paperwork remaining was not insignificant. It was also, I had decided sometime around three in the afternoon, no longer my problem for today.

This was what delegation was for. So that a man who had spent the previous night standing on a railway platform watching crates of bootleg vodka being loaded onto freight cars could, at some point, go to bed. I was exercising this right. I felt no guilt about it whatsoever, which was itself a sign of personal growth.

I stood, yawned with my entire body, and opened the study door. Patruchev was waiting in the corridor with the practiced readiness of a man who had accepted that his commanding officer's schedule was more suggestion than structure.

"Tell Comrade Bokii to handle the remaining paperwork," I said, handing over the notes I'd written on how each item should be resolved. "I've left instructions. If he has questions, he can answer them himself — that's what deputies are for."

"Yes, sir." Patruchev saluted.

I left him to it.

The walk back to my room was quiet, which I appreciated. I had chosen to work remote today — having today's paperwork delivered here rather than going in — a concession to the fact that I had slept approximately four hours and my capacity for maintaining the performance of professional functionality was operating at reduced capacity. I could have taken a full day off. In theory. In the same theoretical universe where the sun rises in the west and Soviet subordinates file accurate reports without supervision.

Gleb Bokii, my temporary deputy while Yagoda was managing the first shipment, was easier to work with than Yagoda in the specific sense that he lied to me somewhat less frequently. Whether this was a product of his character or simply the result of some sort of divine intervention, I hadn't determined. Either way I'd take it. Progress is progress. The man only deployed vranyo on perhaps eighty percent of his interactions with me, which by the standards of the institution I ran was practically disarming honesty.

But even that required supervision. Even a man who lies to you less than most will lie to you when the stakes are high enough and you're not watching. This was not a character judgment — it was a structural reality of operating inside a civilization that had organized itself around the comfortable management of inconvenient facts. You didn't fix it by finding better men. You fixed it by making the cost of lying to you worst than the cost of speaking the truth, and then you verified anyway, because you can't trust anyone in this country.

I collapsed onto my bed with the undignified relief of a man who has been vertical for too long.

I did not dream. This was, increasingly, a mercy.

My dreams these days were a rotating inventory of things I would have preferred not to revisit — bodies arranged with the particular geometry of mass execution, Maria's face in configurations that ranged from memory to accusation, Elsa's expression in the moment she read the letter, the ice between Petrograd and Kronstadt rendered in the specific hallucinatory detail that fever and blood loss had burned into whatever part of the brain handles unwanted archives. My subconscious had apparently decided to curate the complete collection rather than edit for comfort, which I found both artistically ambitious and deeply inconvenient.

I woke to lamplight.

Someone had come in and turned the lamps on while I slept, which meant I had been out long enough for the daylight to fail. I checked the clock. Eleven in the evening. Six hours. Longer than expected, shorter than ideal. My stomach announced itself with the kind of rumble that made abstract concepts like diplomatic policy feel significantly less urgent than bread.

I got up, ran a hand through my hair, decided this was sufficient grooming for a midnight kitchen raid, and left the room.

The Kremlin's corridors at this hour had a particular quality — quiet in a way that institutional buildings are quiet when they're never fully empty, the silence of a place where things are always happening somewhere, just not here, not right now. I turned left, then right, heading toward the nearest kitchen. I wasn't planning to wake anyone. Bread and milk. Possibly cheese if the cheese was accessible. Then back to bed and the curated trauma exhibition.

I turned the corner.

Stalin was standing in the corridor.

He was, of course, awake. Stalin's relationship with sleep had always been more adversarial than restorative. He was dressed, coat buttoned, which meant he had either not been to bed yet or had been to bed and decided against it, both of which were equally plausible.

"Hi, Joe," I said. I yawned. "Sorry. Just woke up."

He looked at me with the particular expression he reserved for people who had done something he already knew about and was waiting to discuss. Not anger. Assessment. The ledger face.

"I heard you were at the station last night," he said. "Overseeing the shipment yourself."

"I'm guessing Yagoda informed you."

He said nothing. Which was, of course, an answer.

I had known about Stalin's parallel reporting channels through my subordinates since roughly the first week of the Lubyanka appointment. He had recommended Yagoda. He had recommended Bokii. He had made a point of expressing confidence in several other members of my immediate operational circle, which was his version of personnel placement — not direct assignment, just strategic enthusiasm. I had accepted this without comment because the arrangement was both entirely predictable and, on balance, useful. Men who reported to both of us were men who had to maintain consistency across both reports, which made them less likely to lie to me and more likely to lie to him about things that didn't concern him, which was a configuration I could work with.

"Come on," I said, shrugging. "I wasn't born yesterday. You recommended practically everyone in my inner circle. Yagoda, Bokii — I could keep going."

He continued to look at me in silence, which was his version of confirming without confirming.

"You have a habit of speaking too much," he said.

"Someone has to. You're the serious one. I'm the one who actually talks." I considered this. "Almost like we're one soul distributed across two bodies. The soul in question being damaged, but still."

He rolled his eyes. This was, by his standards, an expression of warmth.

"You speak nonsense," he said.

"I speak continuously, which some people confuse with nonsense." I leaned against the wall. "We're twins, Joe. We came into the world together. Given what I know about how cruel destiny is, I wouldn't be entirely surprised if we left together too."

"Superstition doesn't suit you."

"I've always been a little superstitious. It suits me fine. It's everything else that doesn't suit me."

He exhaled quietly — not a sigh, just a controlled release of air that communicated something between dismissal and the decision to move on. "Enough. Tell me why you were overseeing the shipment personally. That's not your role."

"No," I agreed. "Technically it isn't."

I pushed off the wall and started walking, more or less in the direction of the kitchen, which I had not abandoned as a destination merely because I had encountered my brother in a corridor. He fell into step beside me. This was also his version of warmth — accompanying rather than confronting.

"I don't trust anyone outside the family," I said. "Yagoda. The rank and file. The men loading the crates. If I hadn't been there, someone would have skimmed. Possibly several someones, independently, without coordinating with each other, everyone fucking steals."

He walked in silence for a moment. "You think they won't skim on the Atlantic crossing."

"I think they absolutely will skim on the Atlantic crossing," I said pleasantly. "I'd be pleasantly surprised if they didn't. But I can only be in one place at a time, and I chose the origin point because that's where I can do something about it. If they skim in the middle of the ocean, I can't prevent it. What I can do is make sure we start off right, so that whatever arrives in New York, minus whatever disappears between here and there, is still enough to satisfy our order." I shrugged my remaining shoulder. "Damage mitigation"

"You can't fix everything yourself," Stalin said.

"You're absolutely right," I said. "I cannot. Which remains a consistent source of frustration given that the alternative is trusting other people to do it." We reached the kitchen corridor. "But what's the option? Accept the full loss? No. Do nothing because partial solutions are impure? Also no. A little is better than nothing."

Stalin said nothing for several steps.

"Do you think the shipment will reach New York?" he asked.

"It had better," I said. "Yagoda is competent enough when he believes his errors will be specifically affect him rather than dissolved into collective institutional failure. I have worked very hard to ensure he believes this. If the shipment arrives short, or late, or doesn't arrive at all — " I pushed open the kitchen door and located, with the satisfaction of a man who has earned it, a half-loaf of bread — "then Yagoda's wife will get a visit from me."

I cut a piece of bread. The knife was, as always, awkward left-handed. I had developed a technique. It was not elegant.

"He knows this?" Stalin said. He was leaning against the doorframe, arms folded, watching me with the mild interest of a man observing a process he has already analyzed.

"I only implied it," I said. "Which is why the shipment will probably arrive at approximately ninety percent of what it should be, rather than sixty percent. Yagoda will skim something — he always does, everyone does, but he'll skim at a level I can live with." I poured milk. "This is also progress. I have trained a man to steal from me at a personally acceptable rate. I have become a manager."

Stalin exhaled through his nose. It wasn't a laugh. It was the sound he made when something landed and he had decided not to acknowledge that it landed.

"Get some sleep," he said.

"That was the plan before you appeared in the corridor."

He turned and left. I stood in the kitchen with my bread, listening to his footsteps recede down the corridor, steady and unhurried, until the building settled back into its institutional silence.

I ate the bread. It was hard, stale, for a moment I was back in that Petrograd apartment with Maria. I sobbed a little, then calmed down.

God I missed Maria.
 
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Consider this latest chapter a sort of ret-con if you will. Mostly on Mika's psychology. I've read a bit on Vranyo, though I had never really thought about how I could apply it.

That and part of me wants to, I'm not sure how to put it, have the character blend into the culture more. A lot of fics that I read are good, though it's that's sort of lack of cultural integration/culture shock/frustration that kills realism for me sometimes which is what I'm trying to do with this.

It also adds a lot of potential comedic/absurdist humor. I've always tried to have a sort of death of Stalin like vibe to this fic. God I've rewatched that movie so much
 
Side story 4: Counter-attack New
A British Pathe newsreel released August 15 1941

BRITISH PATHÉ NEWS
"BRODY: THE BATTLE THAT CHANGED EVERYTHING"
Produced August 15th, 1941


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[Dramatic orchestral opening. Maps of Eastern Europe, arrows showing German and Soviet positions near Brody, Eastern Galicia]

NARRATOR: In the first weeks of Germany's invasion of Soviet Russia, the world watched and waited.

Berlin's communiqués spoke of triumphant advances. Of a campaign proceeding precisely according to plan.

Then came Brody.

And the world received its first indication that this war in the east would be like no other war in the long and terrible history of human conflict.

[Cut to footage of burning landscape, columns of smoke rising on the horizon, the flat agricultural plains of Eastern Galicia.]

NARRATOR: The town of Brody lies in what was until recently Polish Galicia — flat farming country, wide horizons, roads that turn to mud in rain and dust in sun. It is not, in the conventional sense, a place that invites great battles. Geography offers no particular advantage to either side.

What it offered, in the last days of June and the first days of July nineteen forty-one, was a meeting point.

A meeting point between the full armoured weight of Germany's southern thrust — tanks, motorised infantry, dive bombers, and the accumulated confidence of an army that had not yet been seriously checked — and something the German High Command hadn't fully anticipated.

[Pause.]

A Soviet field army, led by Marshall Georgy Zhukov that came forward to meet them.

[Dramatic musical sting.]

NARRATOR: What the Wehrmacht encountered at Brody was a combined arms force of a sophistication and ferocity that, by the testimony of German officers subsequently captured or — in certain cases — willing to speak to neutral correspondents, came as a profound and unwelcome surprise.

[Cut to footage of Soviet armoured columns, infantry advancing, artillery batteries firing.]

Infantry. Tanks — in numbers that rivalled the German commitment. Artillery, conventional and rocket-propelled. And the weapon that has already become, in the short months of this campaign, the sound most dreaded by German soldiers on the Eastern Front.

The rockets the Soviets call the "Maria".

[Solemn pause.]

Named, it is reported, by the man who ordered their mass production — Mikheil Jugashvili, Director of the NKVD and architect of the Soviet military modernization programme alongside Peoples commissar for Defense Mikhail Tukachevsky— after his first wife, assassinated more than two decades ago. Whatever one may think of the regime that built them, there is a quality to that particular piece of information that gives one pause.

[Cut to footage of rocket artillery firing at night, the sky illuminated in long streaking lines of fire.]

NARRATOR: The "Maria" rockets arrived at Brody in their hundreds. German forward positions, supply columns, and armoured concentrations were struck by salvoes that witnesses — and there are witnesses among the neutral press — describe as turning night into a kind of terrible daylight. The sound, those same witnesses report, is unlike anything previously encountered in this or any previous war.

It is not a bang. It is a sustained roar. As though the sky itself has caught fire and decided, with some deliberation, to let the stars fall.

[Cut to advancing Soviet infantry, then to German positions under fire.]

NARRATOR: The German advance, which had been proceeding with the momentum of an army accustomed to rapid victory, was stopped.

More than stopped.

[Dramatic pause.]

It was, in the plain language that events demand, thrown back.

For the first time in this war — the first time, it must be said, since the opening of hostilities in September nineteen thirty-nine — a German army group found itself not advancing, but retreating. Disordered. Seeking reinforcement. Seeking, in blunt military sense, rescue.

[Cut to frantic German movement, reserves being rushed forward, supply convoys moving at speed.]

NARRATOR: Berlin scrambled. Reserves were committed. Formations that had been held back for the drive toward Moscow and Leningrad were redirected south with an urgency that neutral military observers — and there are several of considerable experience and reputation — describe as, and we quote directly, "the movement of an army that has received a shock it did not believe possible."

[Long pause. Tone shifts. Grave and careful.]

NARRATOR: And then — we must speak of this, though it is not easy to speak of it — came the weapon.

[Silence. No music. Only ambient sound.]

The Soviet forces at Brody deployed, in the opening phase of their counter-attack, a chemical agent of a type not previously encountered on any battlefield in the history of warfare.

It is not mustard gas. It is not chlorine. It is not the weapons that scarred and killed in the trenches of the last war, terrible as those were.

Military analysts and medical personnel who have examined — at considerable personal risk — the evidence available from the Brody sector describe what they have found in terms that this correspondent will reproduce faithfully, and without embellishment, because embellishment in this instance is neither possible nor necessary.

[Measured, very deliberate pacing.]

Men die within minutes of exposure. Not from burning. Not from choking. The nervous system — the mechanism by which the human body receives and transmits every instruction the brain sends to the limbs — ceases to function. The body forgets how to breathe. The heart forgets how to beat.

Jugashvili, in his usual terrifyingly theatrical and flamboyant flair, has described this weapon with a directness that requires no interpretation.

He calls it, in the official translation provided to neutral correspondents, a "doomsday weapon." This weapon is only the beggining, with him claiming with childlike glee that there are even more terrible, more terrifying weapons in the process of being developed and produced.

[Beat.]

The German High Command, to its credit in this single particular, did not attempt to deny that such a weapon had been used against its forces. It could not. The evidence was too abundant and too visible.

Germany's response — the deployment of its own chemical agents against Soviet positions — checked the Soviet advance. It did not reverse it. It did not undo what had already been done.

[Cut to aftermath footage — scorched earth, destroyed vehicles, the particular stillness that follows catastrophic fighting.]

NARRATOR: After a week of the most sustained and costly fighting yet seen in this war — and this war has not been short of either sustenance or cost — Soviet forces withdrew.

Not in rout. Not in disorder. In the deliberate, organised fashion of an army executing a plan, absorbing losses it had calculated in advance, and falling back to positions it had prepared for exactly this purpose.

[Cut to German forces occupying devastated terrain.]

NARRATOR: The Germans held Brody.

In the narrow, technical sense of that phrase — their flag flies there, their soldiers occupy its ruins — they hold it still.

But the cost of holding it is a figure that Berlin has been careful not to publish in full. And the territory beyond it — the roads, the villages, the farmland stretching east — is not, in any meaningful sense, held by anyone wearing a German uniform.

[Cut to footage of partisans moving through forests, armed civilians in village streets.]

NARRATOR: Because the Soviet government has done something without precedent in the history of modern warfare.

It has armed its population.

Not its army. Not its militia. Its population.

Men. Women.

[Careful pause.]

Children. The elderly.

Every village in the path of the German advance received weapons and a directive that neutral correspondents have had confirmed by multiple independent sources. The directive, in its essential substance, reads as follows.

[Very measured. Each word given weight.]

Resist. By every means available. With every weapon to hand. At every opportunity. The German occupier will not spare you. Therefore — do not spare him.

[Cut to footage of German supply columns moving through hostile countryside, soldiers scanning treelines nervously.]

NARRATOR: The consequence of this directive is a German army that controls, in the strictest sense, only the ground beneath its boots at any given moment. The roads it travels are watched. The billets it occupies are noted. The supply columns it depends upon move through country that is, from horizon to horizon, hostile.

Every kilometre of German advance requires German soldiers to guard it. Every German soldier guarding a road is a German soldier not advancing.

The mathematics of this arrangement are, to any student of military history, entirely familiar.

They are not, however, comfortable reading in Berlin.

[Final musical swell, grave and measured.]

NARRATOR: Brody was, in the official German communiqué, a German victory.

In the technical sense — ground taken, objectives reached — perhaps it was.

But the factories beyond the Urals, evacuated before the first German boot crossed Soviet soil, are working. American Lend-Lease — ships from a nation that has watched these events with growing alarm — is arriving in scale. The mobilisation orders have gone out. Men and women both. An entire nation, in the most literal sense that phrase has ever been applied, is being thrown at the line.

[Final beat. Almost quiet.]

A victory at Brody.

[Pause.]

One wonders what the German High Command makes of its victories, as autumn approaches and the Russian roads turn to mud, and the forests fill with armed and angry people, and the rockets the Soviets named for a dead woman keep falling on positions that were supposed, six weeks ago, to have been left far behind.

[Closing orchestral sting.]

Britain observes. Britain prepares. And Britain does not forget what it has seen at Brody.

[PATHÉ ROOSTER. END CARD.]
 
I'm not familiar with specific gasses in chemical warefare, what was the gas deployed against the Germans?
Nerve Gas - horrible, nasty stuff. Sarin gas is one example, Ricin gas is another. You need a full body suit like what the CDC uses to avoid exposure, and then the gas just sits on the terrain.
 
Nerve Gas - horrible, nasty stuff.
The description was incredibly disturbing. One last question: is the gas visible when it's deployed?

edit: you also mentioned that it just sits on the ground, how long does that inhibit habitation by people?
 
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The description was incredibly disturbing. One last question: is the gas visible when it's deployed?

edit: you also mentioned that it just sits on the ground, how long does that inhibit habitation by people?
No. Sarin is tasteless, odorless, invisible.
 

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