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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Rafin

    Rafin Not too sore, are you?

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    Ah.



    Anyway, once again I wonder what Jupiter will say to all this.

    Mr Zoat Where does Jupiter hold court anyway? A parallel pocket on the same mountain? Or a floaty place more easily reachable from Italy?
     
  2. liger0

    liger0 Getting out there.

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    Gar, in this context, is an internet term that arose from 4chan. It means someone that is so manly that even a normally straight man would go gay for them.

    https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=gar

    Zeus isn't referring to Eris in this instance but Cassandra Sandsmark, the future Wonder Girl.

    https://youngjustice.fandom.com/wiki/Wonder_Girl
     
  3. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Hellens are the people of Greece.

    Athena is a Goddess of War, though her domain is strategy and planning rather than getting in someone's face and stabbing them until they die. The SI is stating his belief that she can handle the whole thing.

    Us refers to the SI and the Ophidian.
     
  4. Whenever Possible

    Whenever Possible Versed in the lewd.

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    The "Or rather us" bit means that Paul is drawing on the Ophidian and (partially) merging with her in anticipation of dealing with Ares.
     
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  5. AR760

    AR760 Experienced.

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    Zeus not fighting in the Titanomachy would be a massive change to Greek Mythology.

    We know that's at least 10 years of front line experience there given his thunder and lightning were repeatedly said to be weapons he wielded against the Titans. He even slayed Campe as a young man, the Warden of Tarterus in order to free the Hekatonkeries, which is a being who is no joke itself.

    And then Zeus not overcoming the Gigantes and Gaia's anger at the Olympians in the Gigantomachy would be a great change.

    Moreover we know that the Gods attempting to overthrow Zeus, especially Hera, Poseidon, and Athena is a big part of his mythos. And Zeus won there too.

    Finally one of the ultimate trials he overcame and reasons he stood as King was in his defeat of Typhon, a monster said to be beyond basically all of the other Gods and capable of withstanding all but Zeus.

    It was essentially said that without Zeus taking the rapid action he did, Typhon would have ended up ruling over all the gods and mortals in Greek myth.

    I mean, I get it, Zeus has a lot of shitty traits.

    But to deny that he does have his areas of competence and that he does hold power, skill, and experience is to do the character and underlying mythology a vast disservice and would be pretty overt and heavy handed flanderization.
     
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  6. Ganurath

    Ganurath Apologizes For Nothing

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    All of Zeus's victories were at a time in history when humanity saw the sky as insurmountable, beyond them. In the modern era, technology has allowed the conquest of the heavens.
     
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  7. AR760

    AR760 Experienced.

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    I mean, I'm not really sure what you're getting at here?

    Humans developing more advanced technology doesn't exactly decertify the feats Zeus performed in the past, or mean that he is necessarily any weaker. It doesn't mean that stopping a Pantheon Killer by yourself or Slaying the Warden of Tartarus suddenly doesn't say anything about your power and skill

    The chapter even acknowledges he hasn't lost anything from back then and that most mortals would essentially be utterly destroyed even being in his mere undiluted presence.

    Sure, through the power of the Dreaming humans can shape Gods, but it takes a hell of a lot to do so.

    Sandman and other stories involving such entities even show that despite their lack of modern day prominence in the public eye and mortal disbelief being a thing that they still in many cases their power is still very real and chugging along just fine.

    And here Zeus is hooked up to the primordial forces underlying those conceptual elementals, which themselves still exist and hold power in the setting anyways.
     
  8. Ganurath

    Ganurath Apologizes For Nothing

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    If human perception of cats can power down a corporeal species, then human perception of the sky can influence the puissance of a god that draws power from Aether.
     
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  9. AR760

    AR760 Experienced.

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    This is not the same thing. I mean, even in that story it took the collective, concentrated effort of all of humanity at once focusing on making one specific change. It was directed and intentional and forceful.

    Moreover we know it's not a one way street because the Gods themselves come to influence the world of DC humans through their elevated existence. I mean look at New Genesis and Apocalypse. When Darkseid was winning heroes started to lose. Sure, you have As Below, So Above if there is a working on that scale, but you also have As Above So Below, meaning that the Gods to have power of their own.

    And the Titans themselves arose from the building blocks of human consciousness. The most primal elements. And those innate perspectives and patterns and power contained within is what Zoat has Zeus elevating his already great power with, which means that what you're saying is arguably even less potent because of that anyways due to how baked in to humanity they are.
     
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  10. Vaermina

    Vaermina Well worn.

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    Weapons of War not Weapons in War.

    Though... I do expect he got a rather large addition to his portfolio in the 21st century with the normalization of Economic Warfare.
     
  11. Fellow

    Fellow Know what you're doing yet?

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    I mean, it is in character with Paul.

    He loves to sing-a. About the moon-a and a June-a
    and a Spring-a.

    I do think this might've been the first time he's sung during a fight.
     
  12. Duke Long

    Duke Long Glomerulus

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    Maybe I’m wrong, but I don’t think that’s how it works for Old Gods in this story. Zoat seems to be going with the idea that a deity’s nature doesn’t change after creation, unless external stuff happens like just did with Hephaestus (now Hephaestaean). Either Ares always counted economic warfare as part of his domain (which I doubt), or he never has and never will. I could be completely wrong, though.
     
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  13. DrThoth

    DrThoth I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    I'm expecting Apollo will be called in or jump in of his own initiative as payback for the pigpen incident? I'm imagining a sniper barrage of golden sunlight arrows, if Paragon takes to the skies in fighting Ares. The Olympians who weren't involved in the anti-Zeus planning should have some kind of reaction, even if it's just to spectate in some fashion (though I suppose they could do so indirectly to maintain plausible deniability).

    One idea I'm not sure was discussed is doing what Zeus did to the Titans (taking advantage of the empowerment connection) and replicating it with his own link to Billy/Captain Marvel. The ethics of bringing a kid into the plan (not sure how old he is now) are a consideration, but it does seem like something that could be explored (the actual effects of this coup, if successful, on Captain Marvel have already been discussed, I know).
     
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  14. Darko

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    I wasn't talking about the Titanomachy, just the Gigantomachy and the rebellion.

    We know that the Titonomachy, or at least a version of it, happened in this fic, but the other things may not have happened and are purely myth.

    And even if Zeus did all those things; it may not matter since he hasn't faced any serious combat or action in the millenia since those things happened, so he's become rusty.
     
  15. Vaermina

    Vaermina Well worn.

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    Given what was said before about Zeus being a major deterrent for things, wouldn't the other gods know that "no Zeus" equals "really bad things happen to us" so act to help Zeus instead of hinder him?
     
  16. Duke Long

    Duke Long Glomerulus

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    If Zeus was being removed with no replacement then I think you’d definitely be right, but since it’s Hephaestaean doing it (and presumably becoming king if he wins) and he seems to have similar strength to Zeus, that might not be so much of an issue. Still, it seems likely that even if Hephaestaean is strong removing Zeus still seems like a risk to some deities, so they’ll side with him (similarly to Ares wanting to preserve the status quo).
     
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  17. Stsword

    Stsword Versed in the lewd.

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    Honestly I suspect the long standing beef with Heph is the only reason Ares would have for supporting Zeus.

    Loyalty to Zeus? Zeus treats him like dogshit stuck to the bottom of his sandals.

    Protect the status quo? He's the god of war, Ares and Eris go together like peanut butter and jelly, she's essentially counted among his entourage like Phobos and Deimos in mythology.

    If it were say Athena taking the throne, Ares probably would have cracked his skull open the moment Zeus turns his back.
     
  18. Darko

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    Fun information; the newest episode of YJ had Grayven with a speaking role.

    Granted, aside from just informing others of what Nightpain wants, he doesn't do much of anything else.
     
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  19. Vaermina

    Vaermina Well worn.

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    It very specifically wasn't Zeus's strength that was keeping things at bay, it was his reputation.

    So even if Hephaestus can match Zeus in strength, Hephaestus's reputation is that of the pantheon's bitch boy, so "things" are going to try for them, and who knows how many other Greek God's will die before Hephaestus can hunt down and destroy the "Things" that are attacking them.
     
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  20. Queshire

    Queshire Not too sore, are you?

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    Sure, yeah, take a tilt at the pantheon lead by a guy who can make god level nanomachines, kill sats and predictive combat AI. It'll be funny.
     
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  21. Vaermina

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    None of which exist in the minds of the "Things" that would be judging their chances in an attack on members of the pantheon.

    And yes, sure he will eventually build up a reputation by dint of killing stuff.

    But that won't save say, Hestia, from getting eaten by some "Thing" that's willing to chance it against the unproven new guy.
     
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  22. Tzeentch

    Tzeentch I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    APHRODITE: Wait, you're dumping ME?!

    HEPHAESTIAN: Well, after becoming the Titan-god of Technology and Ruler of Olympus, I gained enough perspective to finally realize how basically nonexistent our relationship is.

    APHRODITE: It doesn't HAVE to be an nonexistent relationship anymore, though! You, Master of Sciences, ME Mistress of Passion! We could be the perfect Power Couple!

    HEPHAESTIAN: YOU just want to be Queen of The Heavens so you can gloat about it to Venus, and boss Athena and Hera around.

    APHRODITE: Please, am I really THAT much of a shallow gold-digger? .....Don't answer that.
     
  23. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    PAVLOS AND ARES BOWL GET HYPE!
     
  24. Old Knife

    Old Knife Not too sore, are you?

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    It would be hilarious if Zeus was cut off from the titans and massively gained clear thinking, competence and skill during the fight. Losing his arrogance and hubris

    Enough so that the power difference ceased to matter because he essentially becomes a shounen protag again.

    Such a subversion would be a fun surprise especially since Zeus winning this way doesn't necessarily get a bad end.
     
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  25. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    It absolutely would. Zoat's not going to, sadly, but it would be outstanding.
     
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  26. Threadmarks: Coup Data (part 24)
    Mr Zoat

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    28th October 2012
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    Hephaestaean grips Zeus's wrists, trusting in his armour to survive anything less than a concerted effort. The turquoise gun comes around, only for a lightning bolt to disintegrate it.

    Zeus grins a rictus, shouting to be heard over his own winds. "I have you now!"

    "No."

    The remaining mechadendrites lunge for Zeus's forehead wound, and

    Sapping.

    dig.

    Ares frowns as his father's forehead bulges, then takes a firmer grip on the hammer and marches towards Hephaestaean with it raised high. "If I have to do this myself, then-"

    Hephaestaean releases Zeus's forearms and punches him in the chest, knocking him back as his head bleeds even more freely.

    "-I expect-"

    Ares swings at Hephaestaean's exposed back, striking-.

    The hammer stops in the air, Ares barely keeping his grip as it does.

    "-to-. What?"

    "Cursed Oathbreakers, your honour's in pawn,"

    "I hoped that I'd meet you here, Ares." Hephaestaean turns away from where Zeus is clasping his forehead to face Ares. "Did you really think that I'd forget what you can do? That isn't just a weapon; it's an engineering tool. Almost anything can be used destructively, but that doesn't make my forge hammer into a weapon of war."

    He holds out his right hand, and with a small flare of electrical activity the hammer flies to him.

    Detected.

    I look-. I watch a small fly crawl between Zeus's fingers and take wing, launching itself towards me.

    Thought.

    I just hope that she remembers how to be a person as well as a fly.

    "And worthless the vows you have made,"

    Ares grabs his sword and shield as Hephaestaean swings at him. Ares is easily able to turn aside the head of the hammer with his shield, but can only stare as the shield begins to rust away from the point of impact.

    "Things built-" Hephaestaean swings again and Ares steps towards him, catching the haft of the hammer on the rim of his flaking shield. The blow is stopped but now the decay is even faster. "-by the hand-" Ares stabs at the cleft in Hephaestaean's chest plate, only for the sword to be intercepted from the side by a mechadendrite. "-of man or god."

    The fly hovers in the air next to me and

    Actualisation.

    shimmers, shifting into a humanoid woman in her middle years, wearing what appears to be a leather and fur mini-dress. Rather than look as confused as I assumed that a woman in her position would look, she's focused on her surroundings immediately.

    Which means that she gets to see Ares's sword crumble to rust as Zeus pulls himself upright, wiping the blood from his eyes.

    Ares stares at the bladeless hilt-

    "That-."

    -as Hephaestaean's hammer comes around in a full swing and smashes him in the side of the head, sending him crashing to the ground!

    There's a quiet groan, then Ares lies still.

    Preparation over Passion.

    "Yaagh!"

    Zeus charges Hephaestaean from behind, wind blades coating his hands once more. But he's just rushing right in, not evading or flying. Hephaestaean raises his hammer and jabs with the butt of the haft right in Zeus's forehead wound.

    "Gah!"

    Zeus staggers back as Hephaestaean advances, head of his hammer hitting Zeus in the ribs, stomach, arm and face. I nod in satisfaction as Zeus's nose is flattened across his face, but otherwise remain silent as Zeus finally collapses to the ground. He's conscious but insensible.

    "Justice shall see you where others have gone,
    Delivered to those you betrayed."

    "Hm." Hephaestaean plants the butt on his hammer on the floor and with his left hand and two tentacle mechadendrites explores the cut in his chest. "Reasonable. I'll improve it for next time."

    Metis takes a few steps towards him, more curious than cautious.

    "What are you?"

    "I'm a god infused with the power of a nascent titan. I am Hephaestaean, God of Technology and Artifice. And you are Metis." He gestures to the door. "You are free to leave or remain as you choose. Your daughter Athena is looking forward to the opportunity to get to know you properly."

    "I will stay."

    Hephaestaean nods, then marches up to Zeus and grabs him by the neck with his left hand.

    "Nygh."

    "Don't worry, Father. I don't intend to kill you." He moves his hammer so that the head of it is touching Zeus's bloodied face. "But I find the concept of a weather god who doesn't understand thermodynamics positively offensive. I cast you into exile until such time as you graduate with a Masters in Meteorology. Only then may you return to Olympus. Do you understand?"

    Zeus manages a very weak nod.

    "Good."

    He bends, slamming Zeus into-. Through the floor, which ripples like water to allow his passage and then returns to stone.

    Hephaestaean then hesitates, taking a deep breath. Then he takes off his helmet, a quiet hiss sounding as the seal is broken. His face is still recognisably his, but the oddly metallic hair is far shorter and the expression is… Sharper. Not stronger exactly, but far more focused. More determined.

    He reverses the hammer and slams the head into the floor.

    "By the might of my arm and the power of my soul, I declare myself Hephaestaean, King of Olympus." He looks at me and he doesn't smile. But he does give me a respectful nod. "This was a dream, once. And as for the rest…" He turns and walks towards the fallen Ares. "I dismiss you as God of Battle. I don't know who I'll replace you with… Hippolyta or Kratos, probably."

    Now he smiles, and it's not a pleasant expression.

    "But that means that I need to give you a new job, doesn't it? I can hardly leave you to your own devices."

    He lifts the head of his hammer a little way off the ground.

    "I think… God of Eunuchs."

    He brings the hammer down.
     
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  27. Massgamer

    Massgamer I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Heh, so Heph focused on Zeus' head to free Metis? Clever.
    Pffft, Heph basically kicking his dad out of his own house to go to school.
    Oh boy, I mean... not like Ares didn't have it coming, but oh man.

    Will Attis be annoyed by this development?
     
  28. TodaBruh

    TodaBruh Fiction is life's spice <( ̄︶ ̄)↗

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    Ouch. Will he do sth to Aph? Cause this feels if he only punshes him for the cheating.
     
  29. BlueMangoAdea

    BlueMangoAdea Alive. For now.

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    Ouch. But millennia of grudges and all that.
     
  30. Brainwasher-Boy

    Brainwasher-Boy Flectere si nequeo superos, Acheronta movebo.

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    Ooof, that ending had me cringe in sympathy pain.

    Do we think Zeus will actually follow through with something for once in his life, or will he just decide to coast in the background to hide his shame?

    Either way, I can't wait to see the look on Wonder Woman's face when she learns about all of this :D
     
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