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Something To Atone For. BtVS/AtS, Doyle SI.

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  1. Flightless Man

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    It's the 90's. The highschool really wouldn't like me living with a celebrity persona like Lorne.

    I'm trying really hard to get him to stop being a creepy loner.

    She just splashes them both and Lorne throws his own at whichever of us is still dry.

    I think early Wesley and this version of Fred could be really good friends. But she wouldn't be returning his crush for a few years.
     
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  3. Threadmarks: Chapter 24: Truth Comes Out
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    Chapter 24: Truth Comes Out
    “Do you actually sleep or should I just leave this on for you?” I give Liam a curious look and point at the TV with my elbow. “Ted only had basic cable. But we finally got an actual package a few days ago, you should be able to find something.”

    Clem left a while ago and Lorne went downstairs for his beauty sleep once the movie was over. With even Fred falling asleep halfway through the second one, her ponytail being used as a cushion on my incredibly bony shoulder.

    “I sleep.” Smirking at the drooling college student, Liam eventually climbs out of the orange armchair. “Just been a while since anyone else was in the same building.”

    The sun is high enough in the sky that the increasingly less broody vampire is stuck with us for the day. He stops me from waking Fred, a frown creasing his brow.

    “You said everyone has something to atone for.” Nodding slowly at his question, I can feel guilt pour into me. “Normally I wouldn’t ask, it’s kind of a personal thing.”

    “I found out I was a half demon and my wife left me.” No point wasting time with playing dumb. “I was busy looking for the safest town in America to start over in and my cousin Lucas came looking for help in the middle of my nervous breakdown.”

    Not realizing the conversation was loud enough to wake Fred, I’m nearly shocked out of my skin when she interrupts with a quiet question. “What happened?”

    “I told him to deal with it himself and slammed the door in his face.” Both exchange looks of surprise as the guilt boils over. “Had my first vision a few hours later.”

    Hanging my head in shame, I can’t help but remember the child’s shoe. “But it was already too late. The Scourge killed everybody before I found the place.”

    “I spent the next week getting hammered because I was getting a vision at least once an hour.” A lie but the only way I’m going to be able to explain such long term knowledge. “Saw how much shit the world was going to throw at you and Buffy. Figured I may as well get off my ass instead of waiting four more years to be useful.”

    “Was that how long it took for me to get rescued?” Fred is starting to understand why I’ve been giving her so many outs and her face pales. “I was going to be in hell for four years!”

    “Five and a half.” No point in playing things close to my chest now. “But Liam is supposed to have that beat by a few centuries when Acathla swallows him. A few seconds after Buffy runs you through with a blessed sword.”

    His dark eyes widen at that news, Liam’s jaw clenching as he realizes the urgency of going to Africa. “When I lose my soul.”

    “Which is why I decided to tell you about the cave before that happens.” I’m pretty sure Angelus would come straight for me now. “I already got one Scourge to deal with. Don’t want you and the European variety after me until I’m ready.”

    “Want to share with the rest of the class?” Picking up that I have a plan, Fred starts poking me in the ribs with her index finger.

    “Curse was cast once already, just need to ask the creators for a translation.” Shoving a soul in Darla should be all the motivation they need. “They’re sending someone to watch over you. But since you’ll be in Africa, Janna will need something to keep her busy.”

    The conversation doesn’t last much longer, with both of us who have a pulse letting out yawns. W point Liam toward the guest room and head up the stairs, Fred hesitating outside her door.

    “When do you want to start checking out the churches? Should we wait for the sun to go down?”

    “Probably a good idea.” I seem to have a habit of getting hurt when I just charge in without a plan.

    A few giggles escape her lips and I can only hope Fred doesn’t catch me staring at them. “Are you finally learning to wait for back up?”

    “You’re the one who told me to start doing.”My comment doesn’t get the expected smirk, instead making Fred blush with embarrassment.

    “I already apologized for that.”

    She’s about to duck into her room and I realize I have absolutely no reason to stop myself. I told myself I’d make a move if I was staying in Los Angeles.

    “Hey Fred.” Well she came to Sunnydale with me and hasn’t run away screaming yet.

    Blinking at my suddenly intense stare, she stops outside her door with growing curiosity. “Yeah?”

    “Once we take care of this vision...” I’m just an idiot if I keep ignoring how I feel about her. “You want to go out for dinner?”

    “With everyone?” Suddenly wary, Fred’s eyes dart down to my now bare hand.

    “//i guess we should probably do that once Lorne can come with us. But I was thinking just the two of us.” Can’t start getting over you unless I actually get rejected.

    She doesn’t answer right away. But after a few tense moments, Fred’s lips curl into a smile. “About time you asked. I was starting to think Lorne would have a better chance.”

    It’s my turn to have a mouth gaping in giddy shock. But of course it shoots out a stupid quip before I manage to close it. “Not really my type, Lorne’s a little to talkative for me. I like my guys with more of a quiet confidence.”

    Intrigue fills her chestnut eyes at my off the cuff comment. “Interesting.”

    “I know I am. That’s why the Powers decided to give me the migraines after all.” Trying to ease myself out of the heat I can feel building up along my collar, I almost smack myself at the mention of the visions. Shit! “I should probably give you full disclosure about my condition before you give me an answer.”

    “Like what, are you going to get all spiky while we’re kissing?” Dammit, I didn’t even think about that.

    Deciding to worry about whether I’ll poke her eye out later, I shake my head with a scowl. “The aforementioned visions. They have the potential to pass to someone I kiss.”

    Still haven’t been able to remember what made them transfer to Cordelia in the show and I’m not willing to just experiment with everyone I know.

    “Oh...” Suddenly not as sure of the yes that was about to come out of her mouth only a few seconds earlier, Fred hesitates in front of her yellow door.

    “How about you sleep on it and let me know after we save the girls at the church. No hard feelings if you decide the splitting headaches aren’t worth it.” The sooner you say no, the sooner I can start picking myself back up again.

    “Do you know what kind of demon has them?” Fred tries to put aside the sudden awkwardness between us and stay focused on the vision.

    I could recognize his voice, that’s about it. “He was in the shadows sharpening something. The whole time just muttering to himself about apples.”
     
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    And it should be noted that while that binds the demon, it also tortures a more or less innocent soul to do so, otherwise there would be no point - the demon feels the soul’s suffering as its own, and an evil soul wouldn’t suffer. Anyone who casts that curse is destined for Hell, no other afterlife possible, unless they somehow manage to find a willing soul who gives informed consent in advance.
     
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    THE REPLACEMENTS ( BUFFY SUMMERS POV,HYPERION HOTEL) BASE! / THE TRUTH COMES OUT( SI DOYLE) REVEALING REVELATIONS) /"SOMETHING ABOUT APPLES SAID" SI DOYLE HMM!

    Well They took it better than I thought by Si Doyle standards for Si Doyle revealed long term knowledge( found out that his wife left him,and he was a half demon,) which had mentioned the Scourge along with last visit by Lucas with it already too late ( off screen) as he got of his butt on Next half 4 yr drama ( a fibbing half truth,truth, haha! )
    Already Si Doyle with more forthcoming Pylea arc world with Fred ( and giving her outs) on her 5 / 1 half year stay on Pylea and of course bff Si Doyle on losing his soul with Buffy Summers running through with an blessed sword ( on Acatha incident) beat by Fred Burkle time in the demon dimension.
    As Si Doyle clarified someone needs an additional watching over the brooding hero Angel ( Jenny Calendar) and the translation on African trials ( Janna? )
    Whilst our unlikely Si Doyle went back to ask for bff Fred on the date and bought up his spikes ( Brachen heritage) .
    Unfortunately Si Doyle had a be mood killer on kissing situation on possible passing on his vision ( freaking PTB Club rules) for somwhat ruining Si Doyle Sex life ) Oh! Things we do saving the world this not one of the those fringe benefits included for that in the vision ( seer) holder package ( but definitely worse & better for( or and for Si Doyle), besides Angel risking his own soul in the" perfect happiness "Schick if he locks down his soul in the long term I think, hmm?)

    Meantime, Buffy SUMMERS POV ( Interlude)was in Los Angeles with Gunn's Crew and recent renovation on the Hyperion hotel on second base for the Watcher council meeting with Buffy Summers new Watcher, As Merrick is still retiring ( Merrick cancer and potential vampire situation by Si Doyle) as Merrick went over the particular issue of werewolf bites vs the vampire bites in the conversation with Gunn's Crew ( besides his crew doing good work on the hotel prior)
    While we finally saw Rupert Giles and Wesley Price, Lydia Crowley( essay on Spike ( "William the Bloody") ( A Spike fan? ) , Gwen Post ( not be trusted by any one in the Buffy seasons yet) one of the Watcher headmaster arrived.
    Later on Si Doyle with Fred clarified that killer( human or demon) something about apples in Si Doyle visions .( another mystery demon from the tv show? ).
    We'll see how it goes next time for our unlikely Si Doyle with Fred, Lorne, and Angel in (Sunnyside)Sunnydale in "Something to Atone For " at the meantime.
    Catch ya later
    Best Wishes
    Cheers!

    P.S. I didn't know Fred would go for a cocky Wesley ( season ,2 ,3ish) but Fred wouldn't return the crush for Few years ( but vibes on best friends) surprisingly well ( People really can definitely surprise you on Btvs/ Atv verse world Haha? )
     
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    The possibility is good to be aware of. But we have agents of the Powers making pretty questionable choices on behalf of them. Who knows what the different higher powers in the Buffyverse would care about(intent/results/what kind of clothes you wear when you die). We know Osiris is/was real, so multiple religions seem to coexist in the Buffyverse.

    Casting the spell and going directly to a hell when you die, probably depends on the caster's spirituality. Willow was Jewish the first time she cast the spell and she probably would have gone to hell for doing so. But she transitioned into a Wiccan by the time of the second casting and they have the threefold rule. So She would have gotten her punishment on Earth (Would have been right before Tara died, Buffy was shot, cut off from magic for a year).

    Every champion gets relationship drama. It's a rule of the Buffyverse.

    Billy is the one with cancer and wants to become a werewolf (instead of a vampire like in season 3 of Buffy). Merrick just has really bad back pain now after getting backhanded by Lothos. I added the 1/3 werewolves go rabid, so it didn't become the way to cure any minor injury/become immune to vamp bites.

    Sirk was in Angel and he's only a slightly better person than Post. Lydia is the female Watcher from season 5, when Buffy got evaluated. Since I cut the Council down to less than 100 members, I felt it best to give the unnamed Lydia a last name connected to someone. So I made her the granddaughter of Nikki Wood's Watcher (who raised Robin after she died). I wanted a reason for why she did her thesis on Spike in canon, so her killing her grand dads slayer felt like a good one.

    Tying a offhand line in a side character's back story, to a threat that shows up some time after season 1.

    They honestly could have done any pairing in the sries and I would have probably bought it. Even something like Anya/Tara has chemistry and a foundation to build off of.
     
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    Which might arguably be backlash for casting the curse - losing her one true love to a random bullet that could easily have missed if Willow had less karmic debt.
     
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    Oh oh I fully think it was Karma, but I think Willow paid off the soul curse. Not sure how she can ever pay each slayer she called back three times each.
     
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  10. Threadmarks: Chapter 25: What’s In A Name?
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    Chapter 25: What’s In A Name?
    I’m left with my anxiety growing through the day, Fred still not having made up her mind by the time the sun is low enough for us to drive around. Not that I blame her, it’s a pretty big side effect I just dumped on her.

    The first eight churches are nothing more than overgrown messes and the next one is little more than some burnt timber. But when we only have a couple more addresses to check, Fred’s eyes light up behind her square frames.

    “It’s weird for a motor home to be here, right?” My brilliant friend points out the mud covered vehicle in front of the least run down church we’ve found so far.

    “It could just be people trying to save a few bucks....” But even as I make the suggestion, I know it’s not right. They would have been gone first thing in the morning.

    While Fred and the melancholy vampire discuss the odds of it being trouble, my eyes scan the dead lawn for any kind of clue. Why is the lawn dead?

    All the other ones we saw had been completely overgrown. But the only thing clinging to life here is a single crab apple tree.

    “Something’s going on here.” Liam points at the disturbingly perfect star of dead plants that takes up most of the churches property.

    “I’m kind of disappointed.” We still had two more churches to check. “It’s supposed to be the first or last place we check. This just feels wrong.”

    Chuckling at the comment, Fred reminds me that we did get lost for a while. “This was supposed to be the last one we checked. But you didn’t make the left turn on Burch.”

    Getting out of the car, both of us with an enhanced sense of smell start sniffing. Liam only picks up the general scent of people and I realize how much better my nose is.

    I can pick out a few different kinds of soap and while my team gets ready to go into the church, I stop them with a shake of my head. “Wait. One of them didn’t go inside with the rest.”

    It’s faint and even another hour would have left me without a trail to follow. But getting earlier lost pays off and we find a blonde girl sitting in a park only a couple blocks from the church.

    She looks up when I purposefully snap a stick under my foot. Looks about the same age as my students.

    Her plain white sundress gives her a sort of juvenile appearance and she looks ready to bolt. Wild eyes watch us and so I let Fred take charge of the situation.

    “Are you alright?” I hang back with Liam as she makes a slow approach, eventually reaching the wooden picnic table.

    “Did he send you to find me?” Terror is intermingled with resignation in the girl’s voice.

    “We don’t know who you are, let alone this ‘he’.” Confused at the pronoun, Fred keeps her words soft as she presses for more information.

    Frantic fingers start drumming on the table as the worried girl tries to decide if we can be trusted. “My name is Sister Sunshine and I thought you wanted to take me back.”

    “Back to?” I can only assume she means the church but need to make sure.

    “Father Caleb and his lies.” Sunshine has tears in her eyes as she explains. “He promised we would be forgiven and could have a new start here in Sunnydale. But I don’t like the way he looks at us.”

    We learn about the four girls who apparently decided to go home in the week since the Daughter’s of Eve arrived. How Sunshine believes the creepy preacher did something to them and covered it up.

    “I found Dewdrop’s stuff in the dumpster and knew the Father was lying. But none of the other girls believed me.” As she wipes away the tears, I finally know why I recognize her. Anne!

    “We’ll handle the creep, don’t you worry about that.” Only one Caleb I know of and that name is sending off all kinds of alarms.

    Though if the First doesn’t have the power to touch the world until a champion is brought back... Considering the conversation, my growing smirk is kind of out of place. Caleb should be nothing more than psychotic human.

    I know the plan was to try avoiding any big names noticing me. But if the Powers are going to head this threat off at the pass, I’m not going to argue. Not like I can really make many more changes just dealing with filler.

    “Who are you people?” Sister Sunshine picks up on us being here on purpose and glances between us.

    “The real Ghostbusters.” The words are out of my mouth before I even consider the bad timing.

    It gets a few relieved giggles out of Sunshine and I decide the name could have been worse. Better than being called the Pin Pals or something even worse that makes reference to my Brachen half.

    Though maybe I should have gone with the Bloodhound Gang? I don’t think it’s in use yet and it makes sense for a seer to use a future band name.

    “If we aren’t back out in thirty minutes, start a fire and call it in.” Fred gives a stiff nod and escorts Sunshine to the Corolla. The whispered good luck feels like it’s just for me and I can feel my cheeks heating up.

    “Angel and Allen will take care of it, don’t wor-” She tries consoling the distraught teen.

    “You need to make up your mind about who you want to be.” Once the girls are out of earshot, I lead Liam towards the back door of the church. “I’m not wasting my time if you just want to be half a man.”

    So far I’m the only one he tolerates the name Liam from, with both of my roommates stuck calling him Angel. It might be easier for the guy. But it’s not going to help his social readjustment at all.

    “It’s just not something I ever considered.” He watches for onlookers as I snap the lock with a quick flick of my wrist. “Being treated like a man is something I thought I didn’t deserve anymore.”

    “You fight against your urges every second you exist.” I can feel my own instincts telling me to chase after random smells sometimes and can’t imagine how much worse it must be for someone cursed. “Apparently that’s the bar for being a decent guy.”

    Liam’s nose picks up the same scent of blood and his eyes narrow as we approach the stairs to the basement. “The girls aren’t scared. Why?”

    “Cult indoctrination is a terrifying thing.” He doesn’t argue, his face grimacing with more understanding than I want to imagine.

    “What’s the plan?” Waiting for me to open the door, Liam has his fists clenched with determination to make a positive difference.

    “I want this guy alive.” If it’s really the same Caleb, I’m bring him to Los Angeles tonight. Let the Watcher’s pull every damn secret they can out of the monster.

    Blinking at the sudden command, Liam understands I’m not saying everything. “You know something about this guy.”

    “The thing he worships...” Fear boils inside me and coats my rage with it’s toxic essence. “I have no idea how to even approach stopping it.”

    “That bad?” It seems Liam is better able to handle a hopeless situation.

    We follow the smell of blood and it gets strong enough to overpower everything else. When we find the source, the sight has me retching.

    The bodies of each girl have been arranged like runes. The blood used to trace symbols on every spare inch of wall.

    I’m disgusted with myself for being able to tell it’s fresh and Liam takes over the search for clues. “Each apple has a single bite. It must have put them in a trance for the sacrifice.”

    “But Caleb’s not here.” I hate stating the obvious and yet I have no idea where the preacher could have gone.

    He doesn’t move into the vineyard until everyone is fleeing Sunnydale in droves. I highly doubt we’ll find him digging.

    “Are you sure about that?”

    I have no idea how he did it without being noticed. But Caleb is blocking the doorway with a devilish smirk on his face and a bloody knife in one hand.
     
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    THE (FIRST)MAKES IT'S PRESENCE KNOWN TO THE ANGEL TEAM ( A CHILLING ENCOUNTER WITH THE PSYCHOTIC PRIEST CALEB)! OH BOY/ "YOU NEED TO MAKE UP YOUR ABOUT WHO GUY YOU WANT TO BE LIAM" ( ANGEL!) SAID SI DOYLE HMM?

    Whilst we discove( r an interesting chilling menace of( acolyte) worshiper and psycho killer by Father Caleb,Which Fred Burkle still hasn't given an unexpected answer to Si Doyle date with Fred about the recent kissing ( visions)yet, cause they're on a mission in Sunnydale for a somewhat killer in the vicinity.
    As one of the victims ( Anne) was found by the way side by Angel,Fred, Si Doyle doing his best We're the Ghost busters impression for Annie on the disappearing girls ( catholic) , As Si Doyle mentioned in passing that Angel needs to decide what kind of person he is and he 's still figuring it out ( comparing figuring against his vampire urges is a start of bar of being a decent guy ) of taking charge of his new life (start actually living instead of half a man.)
    While Si Doyle expertise on the (first ) is way above his league beside the Watcher intelligence from the council ( resurrection of champion) from. Visions.
    Meantime our unlikely trio( Angel, Fred, si Doyle) were caught flat footed by the killer Father Caleb at the church at the meantime.
    We'll see how it goes next time for our Si Doyle, Fred, Angel and the unexpected fight against the disciple of the First Father Caleb in "Something to Atone For " at the meantime.
    Continue on
    Catch ya later
    Cheers !

    P.S. Last minute post Author San ( cutting it close though) ,Anyway I'm meaning to say " We all have something to Atone For Liam " is the best new Buffyverse quote Why didn't they use that in the tv show ( such a good line) that Author ,HAHA!
     
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    Doyle doesn't need an answer right away, he knows it's a lot to decide. But it's a good thing he asked after the little arguement, so her hero worship was toned down to just friendship.

    While I was looking into Anne's backstory, I discovered she arrived in Sunnydale with 'some loser preacher'. So I knew I had to make the connection to Caleb.

    Since the a few of the first team missions had been exorcisms, I felt Ghostbusters was the perfect gang name.

    I live on the west coast of North america. So I still have 6 hours before midnight :p. It's actually a quote from episode 1 of Angel the Series. Doyle says it to Angel to convince him to work with him. The title was between that and "You Never KNow Until You've Been Tested."
     
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    You really should have her look into Faith even if he doesn't have a family name.

    Faith, somewhere between age 12-16, dark hair, boston probably is only a couple dozen girls at absolute most.
     
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    The problem is, he doesn't know if Faith is even her real name. And it's 1996, so I can't look he up herself. He can really only look up her parents in a phonebook.

    It also becomes a whole lot harder to convince Faith to listen, when she doesn't have super powers yet.
     
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    Chapter 26: That Bites
    I know the knife dripping with crimson is the least dangerous part of the scene and yet it’s where my eyes are instinctively drawn to. Not the blood splattered black Geneva gown or Caleb’s manic sneer beneath a mop of brown hair that wouldn’t be out of place on one of the Beatles.

    “Now what are two fine lads like yourselves doing here in our master’s home?” Caleb’s smug words are punctuated with each step towards us. “A vampire and a half breed should begging me for a chance at salvation.”

    Keeping my eyes locked on on of the most dangerous people I know of in both series, I don’t see the bodies begin to writhe behind me. All I can focus on is how completely unprepared for this I really am.

    “You did all of this?” Noticing my own hesitation, Liam takes charge with a growl full of of deadly intent.

    “From such an exquisite artist as you Angelus. I’m touched, really.” Mock gratitude flashes across the preacher’s face. “But I’m afraid I can’t take all the credit. I only showed my brothers how to perform the sacrifice.”

    Brothers? Does he mean the blind guys? “The Harbringers?”

    Caleb’s eyes snap onto my own, his eyes shining with curiosity at such knowledge. “Well aren’t you well informed.”

    “And aren’t you a psychotic creep.” Getting a hold of my panic before it completely takes over, I reach for the bladed bat on my back.

    “So quick to reach for violence...” His eyes follow my hands and his tongue clucks with disappointment. “Just remember you brought this upon yourself.”

    Hissing from every direction follows his mocking words and I turn around just in time to see the horror. Slithering out of the mouth of each body, is a variety of venomous snakes.

    I recognize only a few, the king cobra and diamond back in particular. But I’m pretty sure the red, yellow, and black one is called a coral snake and the bright green one a boomslang.

    “First to bring sin is first to feel the sting.” Mocks Caleb as the snakes lunge forward and I’m forced to throw myself across the room.

    “Don’t let him get away!” Roaring at Liam to catch the preacher, I smash my bat into the black mamba’s snapping fangs. “I’ve got this!”

    Giving me a final glance to make sure, the vampire charges through the snakes after Caleb. With his temperature being the same as the room, only a couple of the snakes even bother going after him.

    Roaring over the sound of rattling, I force my demon half to the surface for the added strength. It’s not a second too soon as I feel my leg burn with the bite of a bright blue serpent.

    It’s almost instant pain that floods my entire body. The sensation of lava pouring through my veins is almost enough to drop me to my knees in agony.

    But instead of giving in like I would have only a few months ago, I force myself through the searing pain. Swinging at everything that hisses, I lose count of how many bites I receive by the time I fight my way to the stairs.

    The bodies haven’t stopped vomiting new ones since Caleb worked his horrible magic. But somehow I manage to close the door behind me, panting as my lungs burn more and more with every movement.

    My entire body feels like it’s simultaneously on fire and coursing with electricity. Every beat of my heart just pumps the cocktail of venom through my body and brings me closer to the end.

    Somehow I find the strength to force my legs to keep moving. With my vision already blurry like I’m swimming with my eyes open, I can only hope I’m stumbling towards an exit.

    It’s kind of funny because I’m not scared of dying. This is a world where I know some form of heaven actually exists.

    I’m not sure what it takes to qualify for a good afterlife. But I’d like to think I’ve managed it.

    Even as that realization strikes me, I’m still not satisfied. If I die today, how much did I really change?

    Stumbling past the pews, my sight fades until everything is just blobby shadows. Only the glow of the moon leads me forward and toward the crack in the door it filters through like a beacon towards life.

    No! Gasping with panic, I stumble to the floor and find my legs unresponsive. I’m so close.

    Refusing to just lay here and die, I use my shaking arms to pull myself the last few feet to the door. But no matter how hard I try, I can’t quite reach the handle.

    It’s only a few inches out of reach and yet every attempt leaves me even weaker. I don’t feel peaceful as the coughing begins to wrack my body, only overwhelming anguish at my failure to do more than rock the boat of fate.

    “How arrogant was I?” My vision has gone dark and soon my hearing begins to follow it. “Thinking I could make the world a better place all by myself.”

    To my surprise, I feel a pressure wrap around my chest only a few seconds after I mutter to myself. “You aren’t by yourself.”


    The voice is faint and sounds miles away. But I recognize it instantly as Fred’s and feel her start to pull.

    Swimming with delirium, I can barely comprehend the two pairs of arms dragging me to safety. “Angel?”

    “He took off after some guy.” Fred explains, her voice ringing with a thousand bells. “I’d call him a preacher. But all that blood doesn’t really make me believe it.”

    “My hair hurts.” For some reason, that’s all I can focus on right now.

    Fred doesn’t answer right away, her voice finally coming out with a stilted wince. “Don’t worry about that right now. We need to get you to the hospital.”

    “Shouldn’t we call him an ambulance?” Confused at why I’m being stuffed into the passenger seat, Sister Sunshine thankfully doesn’t raise a concern over my face full of blue barbs.

    “They don’t go out after sundown. We need to bring Allen in ourselves.” The adorable brunette fills Sunshine in on the oddities of Sunnydale and I realize this may be the last chance I ever get to tell her this.

    Reaching over once Fred buckles herself into the driver’s seat, I tap her on the cheek with a wobbly finger. “Did you know you’re as cute as two buttons?” I lean in a little bit closer so Fred isn’t so blurry and realize how wrong I am. “Maybe even three.”

    “You really are making it hard to say no.” Her muttered response is low enough that I’m not even sure I heard it properly.

    “Should I wait for your friend and let him know what happened?” Realizing we’re leaving without Liam, Sunshine is the one to mention it with a worried voice.

    “He’ll put things together and meet us at the hospital.” Fred’s explanation is vague as she speeds towards away faster than I’ve ever pushed the Corolla before. “He’s got a nose for these kind of things.”

    Once we arrive, Fred has to talk me through reverting back to my human appearance. I’m not able to do it all at once like usual and so she gets me to take it in stages.

    “Let’s take it slow. Just one thing at a time, alright.” Fred grabs my hand and squeezes in support. “Can you pull the barbs in first for me?”

    Anything for you. “I’ll try.”



    Notes: It’s a shorter one, because I’m also going to do an interlude today (I’m going to start spacing them between episodes, so every 2-4 chapters.).​
     
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  18. Threadmarks: Interlude 3: Get Well Soon
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    Interlude 3: Get Well Soon
    Two awkward teens roll up to one of the tables outside the mall, hopping off to join the pair of girls already waiting with open books. Xander and Jesse pass the orders and grumble at having to miss out on such a nice afternoon.

    “I just spent all week on those essays.” Scowling at the time already nearing noon, Xander reminds everyone he’s not supposed to be seen studying. “People are going to start thinking we’re brainiacs like you two.”

    “Well you might not have to hand them in.” Jesse McNally tries to make light of the news his father shared at breakfast. “Seems like Larry may have won the bet. Doyle’s came into emergency last night with over a dozen snake bites.”

    While Willow Rosenberg and Amy Madison wince, Xander slams his fist on the table with a frustrated growl. “That’s not fair! I actually did the assignment this time.”

    “You’ve never cared this much before.” His oldest friend wrinkles her brow in concern and reaches over to check for a fever.

    Shrugging in an attempt to play off his concern, Xander mumbles just loud enough for Willow to hear him. “Mister Doyle told me I reminded him of himself. If I don’t pick up my grades, I’ll end up in high school for the rest of my life!”

    The last part is yelped loud enough to get chuckles out of Amy and Jesse. Even Willow has to hold in a few giggles at the idea of Xander teaching.

    “How hard was it to write an essay praising Cordelia?” Prods Amy with a glint of something unspoken in her eyes.

    “Way easier after I wore myself out on the mean one,” Xander admits, shaking the untamed mat he calls hair along with his head. “Even decided to go back and soften up a few of the insults once I was done.”

    Giving Jesse a curious look of her own, Willow asks about his own week with Tucker Wells. “You still haven’t let me look at yours. Did you finish it yet?”

    “Yes Mom.” Reaching into his bag, Jesse pulls out a binder containing the essay with an unreadable expression. “Got it finished last night.”

    “He do something weird again?” Xander catches the look and pries like any ‘good’ friend would. “Cause the only thing I can remember about Tucker, is when he thought it would be funny to bark like a dog.”

    “It was second grade.” Reminds Willow, her lips curling in barely concealed amusement.

    Forced to side with Xander, Amy points out how bad it was. “Tucker did it for a whole month and half the class must have caught him trying to ‘mark’ his territory.”

    “Hey, take a look.” Jesse catches sight of two fellow students with trays from the food court and waves them over when they see no other empty spots. “Can you believe Jonathon got a date before any of us?”

    “She said it was a really nice essay,” Explains a grinning Amy as she sees the mentioned boy walking over with Marcie Ross. “No one had ever said such nice things about her.”

    “Doyle confuses me. He’s nice I guess and yet he seems to be the Troll’s only friend.” Adds Amy as she slide over to make room. “Doesn’t that make him evil by default?”

    “Snyder only gave three detentions this week.” Thinking back on the normally cruel vice principal’s behaviour, Willow is forced to admit he wasn’t quite so bad. “Maybe he was just lonely?”

    “Hey, thanks for letting us sit down.” Greeting the table, Jonathon Levinson lets his date sit down first.
    “The place is packed today.”

    Once the return hellos have been handed out, Marcie nervously tries to start a conversation with the teens who ignored her last week. “Have any of you been listening to the new radio show?”

    “Lorning all about Music?” Surprising Marcie with his enthusiasm, Jesse spins to face her eagerly. “It’s awesome! I’m going have every girl in school loving me after the talent show.”

    “Wait...” Amy smirks at Jesse, thinking back to last night’s show. “Did you call in and request ‘I’ve had the time of my life’ last night?”

    Blushing right to the tips of his ears at being found out, Jesse is forced to admit the truth. “It’s been Willow’s favourite movie since forever. I thought a girl would know what other girls like better than me.”

    “My dad came home complaining about it on Tuesday,” Admits a slightly uncomfortable Xander. “So I knew it was something I had to listen to. Jesse’s the one who got hooked.”

    The teens tease the blushing McNally for a few more minutes and only stop when Jonathon mentions the stranger parts of the show. “What about the other stuff? You know, the magic and demons he talks about?”

    “Jon, it’s just showmanship.” Confident in his words, Xander tries to ease the shorter boy’s nerves with a joke. “He’s like Elvira. But you know, without the boobs bigger than my head.”

    Amy watches her friends for any sign of being in the know and sighs when she fails to find any. But with the growing tension at home, she doesn’t have anywhere else to turn to.

    “What if it was real?” With trepidation soaking every word, Amy clenches her fists to stop them shaking.

    “I’d probably pee my pants a few times a day,” Jesse chuckles uncomfortably.

    “Amy?” Noticing Amy’s expression of torment, Willow realizes something wrong is being left unsaid. “Do you need to talk about something?”

    The blonde shakes her head and refuses to let her tears start to fall. “You aren’t going to believe me.” It’s completely crazy to even think about it.
    “People call me stupid all the time.” Xander raises a hand and smirks at the worried girl his friends have been spending more time with lately. “You can probably get me to believe anything you want. Like the time Willow made me think the pet store was shaving the naked mole rats every night.”

    “They don’t?” Between him and Willow, Jesse’s eyes bug out in betrayal. “But that’s what I’ve been telling my sister for years.”

    Reaching around him to smack Xander on the arm, Willow glares at him furiously. “You said you told him!”

    “I uh...” Xander tries to hold in a grin. “Forgot?” But he can’t even keep a straight face for the length of his sentence, breaking into a smirk at his several year con.

    “If anyone laughs, I’m leaving.” Preparing herself for ridicule, Amy starts to explain what her home life is like. “You know how strict my mom is, right Willow?”

    The redheaded computer nerd bobs her head in quick agreement. “Yeah.”

    “Well now she’s getting even worse. Mom has been reading Grandma’s old books and they really freak me out.” When the worst reaction is Jesse’s muttered ‘really, Amy almost sobs in relief.

    “Worse than making you live on chicken broth and carrots?” Remember many afternoons of baking brownies with her, Willow is worried it’s approaching Xander levels of bad parenting.

    “I think my mom is trying to steal my body.” The raw terror in Amy’s voice is enough to stop anyone from laughing.​
     
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    Hu so buffy will be barging in on the scooby gang for once neat
     
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    I was stuck trying to have Willow be the one who eavesdropped on Doyle trying to talk to Amy about magic and her body (being stolen). SoWillow and the scoobies thought he was a creep and tried saving her, showing up at his house to find Fred working on ted's body and Lorne trying to read Amy's emotions.

    Realized it was way too convoluted and went for this more natural approach instead.Scooby Gang might not even work anymore, considering the size of the group.

    In the show it was coined in season 2 while on the run from the order of teraka. Xander coined it, so the corelations will be from his mind. Buffy would be Fred (the leader), Willow would be Velma, Oz would be Scooby, Cordy would be Daphne(fits since in 13 ghosts of scooby doo, Daphne/Shaggy are 100% dating), and Xander would be Shaggy. Which would make Angel Scrappy (Xander hates him), Giles would be Vincent Van Ghoul. Which I guess makes Kendra Flim Flam (mainly since Xander knows nothing about her and both Flim Flam and Kendra basically get forgotten)

    This group has Xander, Jesse, Willow, Amy, and possibly Jonathon and Marcie. But since I went with the older Sunnydale gang getting the name Ghostbusters, the sequel (extreme ghostbusters) comes out in 1997. So that's the name I'm leaning towards.

    Not sure if the LA crew is getting something to do with the Twilight Zone(because of the hotel), or if I lean the joke into Gunn/Orderly/Watcher.
     
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    Whilst we catch back up with our Si Doyle with Angel still surprised by the appearance of the psycho killer Father Caleb at the church, but was another day in Sunnydale for the bff Di Doyle & Angel ( as Father Caleb was a cool as cucumber ( mocking praised( gratitude) by( Angelous) callback by the killer Father Caleb) and another sarcastic one by Si Doyle as he mentioned" Harbingers"( blind demons? ) .
    Unfortunately Father Caleb proved to be their most dangerous opponent yet according to Si. Doyle ( considering Angel not so much) though as Father Caleb pulling out the dangerous snakes( why is always snakes for the love a Gunn, Haha! ).
    As even though Si Doyle employed his Demon Brachen half ( which kinda should have just taken the edge of the snakes venom) and a minor healing factor too .including getting the snakes effects setting thinking he was gonna be before bff Fed showed with Sister Sunshine in corolla for quick getaway to the hospital ( As Si Doyle sometimes high mentioned Fred was as cute as buttons ( but really making it hard to say no by Fred's Pov, while Si Doyle only half heard the conversation before passing out.
    Next time ( interlude) We caught up with rest of the pre cannon Scooby gang ( Jesse, Xander, Willow and Amy , and Jonathan & Marcie) as Si Doyle ripple effects on Sunnydale high school, which had them listening to Lorne Radio show ( with surprise result and some not so much by bff Amy ) yet ( another time?) Unfortunately her mother trying to unsuccessfully ( drastically freaky Friday her own daughter's body for the future Cheerleader ( Buffy)episode) hmm?
    While Principle Snyder ( still being a jerk but not completely one with bff Si Doyle around on the Sunnydale roster) at the high school with the other faculty members( a surprising turnaround for the Sunnyside day students.
    We'll see how it goes next time for our Si Doyle ( recovery) from the snakes venom and how the killer Father Caleb( subdued or dead )is at on Angel 's side of event's afterwards for the Si Doyle, Fred, Lorne, and less than somwhat brooding Angel in" Something to Atone For "at the meantime.
    Best Wishes!
    Catch ya later
    Cheers!

    P.S .Thanks again for the heads up with the interludes between the chapters Author San !
     
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    Harbringers are blinded humans who spent to much time being influenced by a seal of Danzalthar. It turns them into mindless servents of the first a little bit stronger than a normal person.

    It's always snakes, because of the serpent and the apple in the garden of Eden. Sankes represent sin and since Buffy is about female empowerment, she has to kill a bunch of snake demons.

    Giles always gets knocked out, Xander has the whole bug people/demon dates thing, so I'm kind of thinking Doyle will get poisoned/bit a lot for his own recurring joke. Fred telling him "we can take it slow" was a double meaning and was her saying we can try a slow burn relationship.

    I think I'm going with the name Extreme Ghostbusters, since the show came out in 1997 and Doyle already called dibs on the adult Ghostbusters team. It's a way to get the gang introduced

    Snyder is trying to not scare his new friend off.

    And you as well, I always love hearing from you.

    No problem. The first 2 blocks of the story kind of covered two movies. But the Sunnydale stuff is more episodic and so it feels like it makes more sense to put them between "episodes". I'll even start taking suggestions for interlude PoV's. I know I'll do at least one for Angel/Liam when he leaves town.
     
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    Chapter 27: Slow And Steady
    Waking up to the steady beeping of machines all around me, I’m fully aware the bed isn’t the one I claimed for myself at Ted’s. How many times has Fred saved my life now?

    My head is still too hazy to actually count the times. But I’m pretty sure we’re even at this point.

    Ignoring the voices of nurses on shift as they filter through the hallway outside my room, my aching eyes are very grateful the lights are off.

    Catching sight of someone curled up in one of the green chairs that I know from personal experience are uncomfortable as all hell, I’m disappointed when she rolls over. Fred doesn’t have blonde hair.

    Liam at least gets to kiss. What did I do to deserve this kind of isolation?

    The grunt that sneaks out of me as I try readjusting, wakes an ecstatic Sister Sunshine up. Her sudden shout over me has me whole body filling with warmth.

    “Fred, he’s awake!” The girl I know best as Chantarelle rushes to my side and pours me some water. Get out here!”

    Sunshine’s wearing some of my spare clothes and she catches me staring at my signed KISS shirt being stretched. At least Gene seems happy about it.

    Muffled curses come out of the bathroom and are followed by a flush. “He was in a coma for three days, Allen couldn’t wait two more minutes?”

    Emerging from the bathroom is a completely exhausted Fred. The dark rings under her eyes are thicker than a raccoons and I can’t believe she’s still up and about.

    “Hey...” My croaking voice makes me blink in surprise and has Sunshine pouring me a refill.

    “The doctors said it’s a miracle you survived so many bites,” Explains the genius glaring at me. “They just had a few doses of the right anti venom on hand and only got two more from the zoo.”

    “I was the only thing warmer than the room. Wasn’t getting out without at least a few piercings.” Another groan escapes as my aching bones try to distract me.

    Just relieved I avoided getting a Prince Albert. That really would have been agony.

    “What happened with Caleb?” I was expecting him to beat the shit out of us, not the whole serpent summoning thing.

    “Liam chased him a few blocks.” Fred gives me a worried look, biting her bottom lip nervously. “But the creep vanished near Restfield Cemetery.”

    Well so much for staying unnoticed. “That’s not good.”

    Neither girl is aware of how big an understatement I just made and Fred tries getting me to look at the silver lining instead. “The two of you stopped the ritual from being completed and Liam called the cops.”

    “Hey...” It took a couple times for me to notice and I stare at Fred with bemusement. “You’re calling him Liam now.”

    “Said he didn’t need the name Angel anymore.” Smirking down at me, her chestnut eyes twinkle with relief.

    “He told me that I could have it if I wanted.” Sunshine lets out a light giggle and rejoins the conversation.

    “Huh?” Shocked into a stupor, I barely manage to vocalize a question.

    Ducking her head when I glance over with surprise, ‘Angel’ takes a few seconds to regain her voice. “You’re the bravest people I’ve ever met and I really just needed to borrow some of it for a while.”

    “What are you going to do?” Positive the runaway is still in her early teens, I find myself relieved when Fred answers for the shy girl.

    “She’s staying in our spare room until Liam leaves town,” Explains Fred with an intent look I can’t quite decipher. “And I’m going to need you to get her enrolled when you go back to work.”

    It wasn’t a question and that makes me raise an eyebrow in response. “What happened to not telling me what to do?”

    “That was before you asked me out.” Staring me down, Fred makes it clear this is one of the conditions.

    “What grade?” Not actually bothered by the ‘command’, I roll over and give Angel my warmest smile.

    Shock fills her face at first and is slowly replaced with a grin as my acceptance sinks in. “Eleven.”

    After a few more questions about when she ran away from home, I have to let her know she’s probably better off repeating the grade. It doesn’t seem to bother her much though and she instead directs her questions towards how she can repay us.

    “Do your own dishes?” When I glance to Fred for any further direction, I get nothing but a shrug. You said it’s just until Liam leaves and that time table just got moved up.

    “That’s it?” Disbelief is pouring out of the girl with too many names for me to count.

    “I’m a teacher. It’s kind of my job to make sure you get an education.” But if that’s the case, I probably shouldn’t just let you go live by yourself in a city like Sunnydale. “But don’t worry about moving into Liam’s creepy apartment. We have a room and you can stay as long as you like.”

    Coughing to draw attention her way, Fred makes sure the newly named Angel understands. “He’s already given away his apartment and a whole hotel in Los Angeles. Lorne’s getting the whole basement rent free and I haven’t actually paid mine yet, so don’t even think about worrying.”

    “Thanks...” When she finally accepts the offer, Angel climbs to her feet awkwardly. “I’m going to go find the nurse and let him know they need to call Guinness.”

    While the runaway teen heads out into the hallway, I stare at Fred with wide eyes. “Is she serious?”

    “No. The doctor is already convincing himself you only got bit a couple times.” Shaking her head, Fred has to hold in a yawn.

    That just makes me snort at. “Probably be recorded as nothing more than a bee sting by the time I check out.”

    “If this is going to work out...” She walks over and stares down at me with concern. “You have to stop charging into danger like an idiot.”

    “Brain melting headaches aren’t going to scare you off?” Trying to keep things light, I’m surprised at her sudden scowl.

    “Not in the slightest.” Fred’s arms cross and her brow furrows intensely. “But having you maybe die every time you get a vision? That’s not something I can handle.”

    Missing the point, I fail at easing her worries. “I’m getting better at fighting.”

    “But you don’t care if you get hurt...” Squinting at me through watery eyes, Fred starts listing all my close calls. “You got bit by the Boretz, nearly killed by Lothos, and now this? It’s only been two months since I met you and you’ve almost died three times already!”

    “So if I promise to start being more careful?” Hope is rising inside me as I feel my cheeks heating up to match Fred’s own scarlet blush.

    “We can start taking things slow.” Uncrossing her arms, Fred reaches down to grab my hand. “If you can find a solution to Liam’s curse, we can figure out a way to lock down the visions.”

    The memory of two golden siblings flashes in my mind and I can feel a smile begin to grow. “I think I know where to start.”

    Next week when I go for my magic lessons with the Maclays, I just need to make a stop at the Oracles. Find out what will actually transfer my visions and if I have any kind of control over it.

    “Liam needs to start packing.” If the First is aware of me, I can’t risk it sinking hooks into the vampire.
     
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    You put Angel on the first’s radar, great job!

    very good fic so far, no regrets clicking ´´watch’’
     
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    DEFINITELY CAN'T LET THE FIRST ( SINK HIS/ HER CLAWS )INTO BFF ANGEL ( LIAM) , OH BOY! / LOCKDOWN ON VISIONS ( MYSTERY GOLDEN SIBLINGS)
    While we catch up with our Si Doyle and (Angel,Fred, Sunshine) most of them at the hospital for Si Doyle recent recovery , which had another surprise reveal for the extended
    "Ghostbusters " team by Si Doyle ,as Sister Sunshine joined the eletic group of friends " hunters of the supposed supernatural Buffyverse world " .
    As bff Fred Burkle still wasn't completely put off on Si Doyle ( visions ) package on dating requirements ( by PTB CLUB)rules) haha!
    Anyway Father Caleb is on the loose for now as the brooding hero Angel couldn't find or catch the elusive killer Father Caleb ( Bastard) yet,which ( the Father Caleb won't stay hidden for long but won't be an easy find yet for the unlikely(Angel, Fred, Si Doyle, ) team in the next Sunnydale adventures in the Hellmouth.
    While Si Doyle & Fred, and Sister Sunshine joining the team ( transferring to Sunnydale High school) for her burgeoning "supernatural "experience for our unlikely group,along with Si Doyle locked down his visions for a new supposed permanent basis by mysterious "Golden siblings " and Liam ( Angel) recent move to the next destination.?
    We'll see how it goes next time for our Si Doyle, Fred, Lorne, and Angel, Sister Sunshine in "Something to Atone For " after Si Doyle quite recent recovery at the meantime.
    Catch ya later
    Cheers!
     
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    Chapter 28: Waste Not, Want Not
    Turning to Angel and her new clothes courtesy of a shopping trip with Fred, I give her the most supportive smile I can. “You want to wait for a few more minutes?”

    “Liam said I could only have his name if I was brave.” Grabbing her jean clad knees to stop her hands from shaking, she takes a few deep breaths to calm herself. “It’s just high school. I can do this.”

    “Just come and find me right away if you see anything weird going on.” Reminding her about what I said last night, I get out of the car once she braves the student body by opening the passenger door.

    Nodding to herself, I can just barely her some mumbled words of self encouragement. When she’s ready, I lead her through the crowd very astonished by my return.

    “I’ll talk to my smartest student after class and see if she’s free to help catch you up.” Which also gives me a perfectly reasonable excuse to get the tech genius around the robot. “Just remember what we talked about.”

    It’s none of the students business what happened to the girl and I know Flutie isn’t the greatest at keeping secrets. So I’m just going to use his and Snyder’s expectations against them.

    “Witness protection.” Her lips curl in bemusement.

    “But only after we pretend to mess up the ‘public excuse’ first.” Even Flutie will notice something is up if I just blurt it out.

    “I’m Ted...” Angel frowns as she tries to remember the last name. “Buchanen’s daughter?”

    Nodding in relief, I remind her what the ‘connection’ to me is. “And I’m the son from his first marriage, here in Sunnydale to look after my little half sister. You know, since dad mysteriously disappeared.” Should cover any casual questions about why we look so different.

    A very happy secretary waves us right on to Flutie’s office and his morning meeting with Snyder. Both look visibly pleased at my presence and Flutie jumps to his feet to pump my hand eagerly.

    “Allen!” The relief on his face is encouraging until I realize he’s probably just happy to not need a replacement already. “Hope you bought us all some lottery tickets with that luck of yours.”

    “Found a troublemaker already? I don’t recognize this one.” Snyder peers at my ward with curiosity and seems to holding back a sneer.

    “Angel’s my uh...” Making a show of looking up, I pretend to mouth something. “Half sister.”

    The normally affable principal narrows his eyes. “Really?”

    I put up a token attempt to convince the pair. But once Snyder mentions seeing her face in the news, I let out ‘frustrated’ growl.

    “That was a mistake.” Now ‘forced’ to explain the ‘truth’, Snyder’s expression actually softens a fraction when I explain about the serial killer Caleb.

    “I was close enough to do something. But you can’t talk about this with anybody else.” My eyes lock onto Snyder’s and he definitely notices who I care about convincing. “The Mayor wants things orderly and I intend to keep them that way.” His back straightens in what I assume to be pride as I lie my ass off.

    “Well I can finish filling her application out and bring Angel to class.” Flutie points to one of the chairs in front of his desk. “You have a class to teach Mister Doyle.”

    Following me out into the hall with a half grin, Snyder wastes no time filling me in on what happened during my five day weekend. “We lost another four students and a bus driver. But no one important.”

    “Hey!” Suddenly stopping as I notice a commotion, Snyder has to go onto his tiptoes to see what drew my ire.

    The crowd parts as I stomp towards the water fountain and the bullying taking place. “Mister Blaisdell. You do know we live in California, correct?”

    “Yeah?” He let’s go of Jesse’s neck and allows the soaked teen to escape to his friends.

    “And you know we’re under a constant water conservation notice?” I’m not sure if it’s a difference between my old life and this one. But signs are all over the state and I saw plenty more on the way to Louisiana.

    “Um...” Larry stammers uncomfortably as my glare drills through him to Snyder’s glee.

    Nodding as if he gave an actual answer, I start pacing before the nervous jock. “Correct. So why are you wasting precious water on pranks, when you know expensive each litre is?”

    “But the water fountain is free.” Deciding he has some kind of a spine, Larry finally starts speaking up for himself with his usual swagger returning.

    “Is that so Vice Principal Snyder?” Turning to my coworker for support, I’m a little perturbed by his eagerness to punish. “How much does it cost the school to keep them all running for the students?”

    “I have a better idea Mister Doyle. Why don’t we let our waster of water figure it out himself during detention this afternoon.”

    I know it’s mostly misdirected frustration at Caleb escaping. But I let my pettiness take over and I return my scowl to Larry.

    “What a splendid idea. Only...” With a show of grimacing, I give a slightly kinder alternative. “I don’t think it’s fair for either of us to be forced to stay after school with him. So how about we give Larry here a choice, like the responsible adult we’re supposed to be turning him into.

    “What do you have in mind?” Watching me closely for any sign of sympathy, Snyder hover like an angry wasp.

    Grinning at the closeted bully, I wink as discreetly as I can. “Well Larry can do the assignment tonight and I’ll check it tomorrow or Larry can repay the school for the money he wasted.”

    “We aren’t allowed to bill the students, I already tried that.” Shaking his head, Snyder misinterprets my intent.

    “But we can make them do manual labour.” I point to the nearby library and allow my grin to grow the slightest amount. “You can spend lunch time helping the librarian or you can have some extra homework tonight.”

    “Ooh. I need to remember that.” The cackles inside Snyder’s head can practically be heard by everyone and I’m already fearing how this will go wrong.

    “I’ll help in the library!” Quick to make his choice, Larry scampers away with his friends.

    Snyder promises to save my ‘usual’ spot at lunch and stalks off to patrol the halls. But while he fulfills his strange obsession with enforcing the rules, I enter my classroom to the sound of groaning.

    “Fine, I guess he really didn’t die.” One of smoker kids pulls out a pair of crinkled twenties and hands them to his friends. “First time for everything.”

    Ignoring the blatant gambling, I point to the tray on my desk with a tired sigh. “Hand in the essays and we can get started.”

    I have to check the paper on my desk more than a few times to make sure I get all the boxes lined up properly on the chalkboard. But when I have the crossword transferred as neatly as I’m going to, I tell the class they have until the bell to solve the puzzle.

    When Willow gets the first four answers right with no one else putting up a hand, I pull her out of the game and give her the chalk. Once she’s out of the way, the rest of the class is forced to start thinking for themselves.

    While the students try to win the box of Oreos before the class ends, I go mark every essay with quickly raising eyebrows. Everyone always said the cast of Buffy was using dialogue to advanced for high school.

    But damn... these kids all have extensive vocabularies. I couldn’t justify giving a single kid a failing grade, even if I wanted to.
     
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  29. Lillie Jones

    Lillie Jones Versed in the lewd.

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    ANOTHER ANGEL( ANNE) JOINS THE TEAM? / VICE PRINCIPLE SNYDER ' S GLEE(RETURN OF SI DOYLE) TO SUNNYDALE HIGH , HAHAHA! / WASTE NOT, WANT NOT INDEED!

    While we catch up with our Si Doyle with new friend ( Sister Sunshine) Anne ( aka Angel) returns to the Sunnydale High, much to the dismay of the Sunnyside students of course.
    Which had Si Doyle & Angel ( Anne) working on their initial cover story fake family ( relationship)and public excuse for Princple Fluttie and Vice principal Snyder, while our Si Doyle somewhat explained that recent developments by Angel ( Anne)being Ted's daughter and first son from marriage.
    As that excuse didn't last long as principal Snyder recent ly saw her face on the news and Si Doyle forced to explain the unfortunate situation by serial killer Father Caleb missing whereabouts.
    Including Si Doyle stopping by a bullying situation with student Jesse and bully Larry ,much to Principle Snyder internal glee with bbf Si Doyle return to Sunnydale High school with putting the best screws ( punishment)( loss for catching Father Caleb ) for wasting water fountain by manual labor at the library.
    Meantime, Si Doyle returns the classroom for the essay written before his snake bites debacle and thinking still vastly underestimated his students vocabulary in the Sunnydale students roster as he was very much impressed with their initial homework.
    We'll see how it goes next time for our Si Doyle, Fred, Lorne, and on the move lesser brooding hero Angel in "Something to Atone For " at the meantime.
    Catch ya later
    Cheers!
     
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  30. Flightless Man

    Flightless Man Versed in the lewd.

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    I really wanted Anne to take Angel's name (since I was focusing on making him go by Liam anyway). She got Buffy's fake name in S3 and ended up on Angel's show, I just felt like it was perfect,

    The first excuse is supposed to be the cover story Flutie and Snyder help spread to the students, while keeping the second cover story about being in Witness Protection so Snyder and Flutie didn't try looking deeper. They think they 'discovered' the truth already.

    Critics used to say Buffy teens spoke like university students. So I wanted an in universe reason.
     
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