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First thing first! Congrats! It's a pretty solid first chapter in my opinion, not a big fan of ROBs going full taking the role of a manager (or interacting much with the characters) but you're selling it well with the characterization.
Like a lot that you're using a younger Lelouch, cause while I bet he'll have a lot more petulant moments that his canon counterpart (that was already a raging drama queen) he'll be still young enough to learn and drop a bit of his pride, that any deity out there knows fucked him up a lot.
Looking forward for the next chapters! Watched, with ORANGE LOOOOOOYALTY intensity!
damn it, I would like him to have V.IV Rusty as a companion, also a brother in arms, it's a shame there is no AC 6, AC 4 and For Answer crossover to bring this beauty NEXT although it could easily surpass the world of Muv-Luv just for speed and agility can travel at around 300-450 Km/H at the standard boost speed with quick boost punching it up to 800-1200 Km/H for about a second hehe (although it's a double-edged sword only because of the Kojimah particles and that Lynx augmentations are needed so he doesn't die lol)
The list of harem members poll seemed kind of lacking. Like, from a cold-blooded perspective I'd want useful members, and from a warm-blooded perspective I'd want cute/sexy members, but beyond protagonist-class pilots, there are few options that felt 'correct.' Like, I don't want any mook or side-character pilots, and other skillsets have limited utility in an all-out war. On one hand it feels like the list is missing a lot of the top female pilots that are part of couples (or at least are in love) from most of the listed series . . . but then you have both members of the primary couple of Witch of Mercury. Do . . . do they not count because they are both girls? I am confused.
ahhh, a chapter full of politics lol, I can't wait for the heavyweight mechs that break the entire game or the augmented enemies (alaya-vijnana system) that reach the point of psychics (new-types) excellent work
ahh, so Claude used the trope that Yuuko used to send Takeru to an alternate line
I'll leave this here if you ever think about including a NEXTI love the smell of cancer educing Kojima Radiation in the morning!!!
good chapter there lelouch stuck and all uncomfortable in a corner while everyone releases their emotions XD, I was reading it while listening to this
View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lBmPvWyQ-HY&pp=ygUWbWVjaGFuaXplZCBtZW1vcmllcyAyMA%3D%3D