Questionable Questing

Well it was more the juxtaposition of extreme gore/debauchery with zero emotion from Hurrik that made it special. The guy could step on someone's brains and get more annoyed at dirtying his shoes than where that brain came from. Which was also a nice juxtaposition with how loving and tender he could be very rarely with certain people.

Just constant extremes in all angles. But with the update, the explanation of how Investments work was cool but it's still a lot of ground work and world building so not the most interesting stuff. But still incredibly essential.

Was this update the one with the argument with Sergant Lousis?

Ah this is the latest. How was Lucan's pov? Fun to read and Bel and Seamus's argument?
Update before this

That was the last update. I'm pretty sure. It ended with Seamus saying something how I hope we never meet again like this or I'll have to kill you.

You Ninja'ed me. But Lucan made me hungry, while Bel's fight revealed that Seamus is shockingly a little insecure about his love/family life.

The link I just sent is him stabbing a dude in the neck I think

I'll be back, going to go make me some dinner.

How dinner and update link I sent the new one has Seamus making a guy bleed from the throat

I am back. Had some grilled cheese, also cooked some for my aunt and then helped settle the dogs in. Feed them, take them out, that kind of stuff. They should be good for the rest of the night now.

So what were we talking about again? Lol. I kind of got a little lost in the links and references.

https://forums.sufficientvelocity.c...ettlement-building-quest.144467/post-35559167 This update

Okay. So the update before the one I just read a little while ago. What are you wondering about this one? Just a general review or any character specific stuff?

General review and what you think of Seamus edge here and is the character interaction more entertaining then the magic talk of the latest update?

Just finished, the drunk guy was an asshole and I was shocked nobody interfered sooner. If for nothing else it was obvious he was squaring up for a fight that very easily could've escalated and the wedding was literally tomorrow. lol. But he did suffer for it. Not only got the shit kicked out of him, publically humiliated in front of everyone, but he called a very popular queen a whore.

Not going to have a fun time. Probably cost him a lot of honor and respect with that move. He probably spent a lot of his Invested too, keeping himself from dying. Don't know how that all works or how expensive that could be. But I stand by it. Hurrik would've probably killed the guy, but then again Hurrik had a lot of character growth behind him and had move on from his daddy issues a lot.

It kind of feels like Seamus is right at the beginning of his daddy issues character arc.

Oh he avoided calling her one. Stopped himself from saying it and getting fedual justice done to him

You can't spend Investment. Its a investing of the spirits influence into you. You don't have a limited amount you run out of. Hurik also wasn't just off a kingdoms ruining war where his dad commited magical war crimes. I'll note what you said for edge.

That is a fun part of characters I like to play with but it has to be done in a way that feels good to the readers. Do it willy nilly and its bad, doesn't add to the story. Pushing Seamus to the breaking point or having a moment where honor agrees he should crush someone will be a goal now.