Since Necromancers are generally frowned upon, I'll put this here rather than in the story thread:
I've just caught up on Marissa's challenge, and I love the way you've written everything through the lens of her character, even the more exposition-heavy parts in the most recent chapter.
(Also, while I'm mostly into girls, I kinda want to suck Walter's dick now, but that's neither here nor there...)
Seriously, that's super encouraging to hear. I've been pretty demotivated for awhile, so that's a major confidence boost.
I'm not opposed to a beta reader or sounding board, (Honestly, I probably need one) but I've never really done anything like that either so...
I guess DM me if you're still interested?