Comments on Profile Post by Altrium

Um. He can damn well do what he likes with his stories. If he wants to genre shift from slice of life into action harem that's entirely within his right. The fact that you didn't expect or want the switch isn't HIS problem. It's YOURS. The unwarranted condescension and entitlement in this post is staggering.

you, didn't read the comment, did you? i didn't tell him not to write, or how to write, i suggested he not lie, about what the story is. even complimented him on his writing skills, and wished him luck.

Let's dissect this complaint, shall we?
>you lied about what it was
Nope. It's tagged as explicitly what it is.
>generic power fantasy
Have you seen Art go on any training trips or working on special moves to up his game?
Pretty sure I haven't written any training scenes, beyond his morning exercise routine.
In fact, every 'power up' Art's gotten has gone straight back into what he does best: whoring/sex.

>next time, don't lie about what your story is
Well, that's just plain rude and wrong, on all levels.
>both the name
>>[NSFW] How I Became the Male Equivalent of a JK
Is Art a DK?
Yes. Even still, after his harem have asked him to stop, he's still got exceptions he makes.

>and the tags
Okay, let's go through them:
>ara ara
Big tiddy MILFs? Check.
>Fusion
Multiple settings/series fused into one mostly cohesive setting? Check.
>loli
How many girls in Art's retinue could (technically) be counted as loli? Several.
>milf
Back to big tiddy milfs. Check.
>prostitution
Fucking check.
>scifi
I'd say so, yes.

>slice of life
Considering the story centers on Art and his exploits as a DK, with real life (i.e., the scifi espionage thriller) intruding on his slice of life exploits as a DK and how he and his women deal with it? Yes.
>just try not to be the qq equivelant of click-bait
This is just plain insulting for no reason and factually wrong.

All told, I'd rate this comment as: 2/10, made me reply.

lies of ommission, are still lies. i stopped reading once the s* started showing up(believe the last part i read had m, and explosions, was the "other sides" reaction to that.) also, it wasn't a "complaint", it was constructive criticism, and a complement on your writing skills, so nice job there. like i said, i don't like it, others will, your a good writing, i do hope you continue writing.

by your logic, if i write a story, where the character is male, and fucks milfs, white fighting in a fantasy war, his family dies, theres a bunch of tragedy, adventure, death, angst, and the like, just having the tags "milf", "male mc", "fantasy", and calling it, "how i fuck milfs on the daily", wouldn't be lying.(again, by ommission, since you didn't seem to realise thats a thing).

as for the power fantasy part, you characters dick gives people superpowers. congrats, thats literally, a power fantasy. you fuck chicks, they get superpowers to protect you, you fuck more chicks.

your a good writer. i hope you continue writing as other people obviously do, and will, enjoy it. just try not to to lie about what it is.wish you luck, again, with your stories, . oh, also, really enjoying predatory, keep up the good work.

sorry about the many comments, had to split them for space. also, not commenting right here again, as thats really all that needs to be said.

So... this shitshow basically because OP just take first few chapters as:
"That's all there is about the world. Im sure as hell there's nothing else to build upon them in the future, and other foreshadowing element is not valid because if those are valid, that means the author is lying"

WTF???

lol "rin likes this", after removing their own comment. had to point out raiden, that you know that's not what it is. nice try though.

My comment is right there. It hasn't gone anywhere.

Three different people have called you out. You've argued to each of them (including the author that you insulted) that they're all wrong and you're right and they must obviously know it. Maybe, just MAYBE, that should trigger a little introspection?