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Questionable Questing

Ranmabomb
Read it, it's a tad old. Interesting premise and prose, lot's of backstory sort of ended up skimming part of it.

Like your setting seems interesting, but the story isn't about the setting.
And the exposition is mostly out of character and clunky.

You could probably make a whole quest, or longer story series about a slave-gladiator hoping to get his country freed.

But, works well as an interesting short story.
Ranmabomb
Your skill at writing lewds could be better. They aren't bad lewds, but they also like weren't like that sexy to me.
I didn't get much sensation, or experience, it felt like it mostly was interesting dialogue, and ideas. The situations played into some fetishes, and the whole idea of lewd gladiators is one of my fetishes.
Still it was interesting.
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