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Thanks for your review man. Your points are all valid. I only work during my free time whenever I have some motivation. I usually finish a chapter in one sitting - so I the quality isn't perfect.
Gine has emotion though. However it's in the weird spectrum.
The version of this story in...
Appreciate that man. We’re just to enjoy - you may go to other fics to find something worth your time as I’m also writing for my own amusement. No worries - thanks for the patron.
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Cooler
He sat motionless in his command chair, the vast emptiness of space stretching beyond the reinforced glass of his warship's bridge. Stars flickered, distant and indifferent, while the quiet hum of machinery filled the silence. His fingers tapped once–just once–against the polished...
Goku and Vegeta changed. Gine tweaks the rules to indoctrinate a system wherein if they don’t follow they’ll be culled. The one who adapts to her will survives.
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Nion
The cup was warm. Warm against her palms. Warm against her skin. Warm in a way that settled, in a way that stayed. She inhaled. Slow. Deep. The scent curled into her lungs, thick and sweet, rich with something almost indulgent.
French Vanilla. The name felt foreign, felt distant...
Nion is just extremely smart. Not mutant. Basically she’s learning from Gine and from the three eminents a lot.
Bardock has foresight. The clue is Z Broly in Southern Galaxy. Fasha and Beets hmm, will see soon.
Nion is just a scientist from canon. She used to live in Tribal Savage World - completely different to the Emerald Empire. So in her mind it should not exist to a world like that.
The worker class and officers have risen due to constant tournaments and duels. They have better food and rest. They might be at mid class strength now. Nion is an exception because she trains with Gine - A saiyan with overwhelming power and precise efficiency.
A year timeship. It’s Age 715 now.
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Nion
This wasn't supposed to exist.
Not here. Not in this world. Not among a people who measured worth by what could be shattered, burned, or killed.
And yet, here it was. It wasn't stone.
It wasn't heavy. It wasn't coarse, carved, or chiseled...
that’s an interesting design. Though the protagonist might go for less alien/futuristic given her fashion style and earthly knowledge. It’s also important to consider that armors that protects them from direct combat lessen zenkai potential.