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Just to note one thing. The only things he got took by surprise with was the hardlight (He knew it was possible, but from his knowledge of her she simply doesnt use it) and the metal manipulation, again he didnt contextualise it at all. He's kind of stuck in a weird mindset where he wants to...
Hmmm, you might be hitting the nail with the issue that caused me to keep rewriting this over and over, struggling to interlink the three main beats of the chapter. After reading your comment i gave it a quick reread and you are spot on. I'll think on it.
Definitely something i need to work...
The penultimate chapter of the Arc and this one really fought with me. A lot of this was planned since the prologue, i'm sure some of you were wondering what was going on with this as i never touched on it again previously so there you go. This should have been out on thursday but it's been...
Extras: Power Scaling Info - As of Arc 1 - Chapter 6
A few people have asked about power scaling, both here and elsewhere so i thought i'd just summarise where we are at Chapter 7.
Hopefully this answers any questions about powerscaling differences, but if you have any questions at all then please, drop them in the thread and i will answer...
Thanks so much for the feedback, once I get home from work I will do a readability pass again, alway appreciate your feedback I might need to just add you to my live doc hahahaha
Really appreciated!
Regarding the energy you are on the right track, I'm leaning heavily into some of the works...
Thanks for the review :) I'm going to do an info post later tonight about rough power scaling just to put a few people's minds at ease about where things areso I'll summarise it better there.
Love interest i am going to allow to develop through dialogue rather than pre plan it and make it feel...
Ahhh, the main reasons are a major plot point that should be answered around arc 5ish so I can't go in to it too much, but there will be a semi explanation of some of the issues in the next chapter when Itachi brings in his 'outside help' that he mentioned previously. Chap should be up by...
Yeah shes *much* more advanced with her semblance than in canon (Plus, AU tax) the main limitation she has in my iteration is range, she can only use it in a certain range around her and every extra object she adds and the further away they get is hellish on her aura. What she did with Itachis...
I've buffed a lot of mid tier RWBY characters through butterfly effect. There are ripples going on in the background, Winter will also be a beast.
She had a hell of a lot more motivation to push herself this time. In canon, she was winning too easily. Here she's actually tasted defeat and it...
Triple chapter release warning! Go back two chapters
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Chapter 6 - Warrior
The day of the fight arrives and my class have been almost vibrating in anticipation.
In a few short moments I will be facing off with possibly the strongest student in the school, a duel of pride and respect...
Interlude – Rival
I’m interrupted from my weekend training by a loud beep from my scroll.
Not many people message me on the weekends. My sponsors know better, and my friends…
Well less said about that subject the better.
‘Pyrrha, meet us in Ruby HQ for a strategy meeting!’
Maybe this...
Chapter 5 – Partner
The passing weeks have been a whirlwind of lessons and training my own body to make up for lost ground.
As time has passed and I’ve had a lot more free time than usual to work on training my Chakra, instead of solely working on Aura or assisting Qrow with missions...
Chapter 4 – Teacher
“Weiss Schnee, Jaune Arc, Lie Ren, Nora Valkyrie, the four of you retrieved the ‘white knight’ pieces. Going forward, you will work together as, Team Watermelon. Lead by Weiss Schnee.”
Weiss looks over at him in shock.
“Congratulations young lady, fine work.”
“And...