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There does seem to be a remarkable lack of Pauls all considered. We have 3 or 4 Paul's, compared to the number of possibilities from snippets that's tiny.
It's at the end after the "superheroes" attempted to take over America by attacking the White House and got their asses collectively kicked by the US military. Homelander or John lead the whole thing/tricked everyone into it and has just been killed despite Paul's apparent attempt to save him...
You're not though. You're stating your points in a really infuriating and judgemental manner. I mean lines like this:
This doesn't help anyone and it takes away from whatever points you're trying to make.
It strikes me that the King of Devil's knew that Zaid was missing before they even entered the Vault. I doubted something like him would have offered his permission so freely without a guaranteed way of screwing the other party over.
This was a really well done fight sequence. I love how you focused on how the fighters moved rather than what they did. Made it feel like a legit martial arts fight rather than two people beating eachother up.
Looks like a great start. Creative mode done well can really make for a better story. Helps avoid the pitfall of making your fic into "Powergaming- A jumpchain story".