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Well I think it's just that Alessia sound far more like a name you'd actually hear in Skyrim over Alexandra which is more something you're likely to hear in modern US and then being shortened to Alex.
Large dogs - espacially the ones bred for fighting - are fucking dangerous. Don't even know why they're still legal to own without some proper licence.
Worst that happened to me was that one stepped on my foot. Bu I was young so nothing broke and it didn't hurt too long. But considering how easily a horse can accidentally kill you some healthy respect is warranted.
Heh. Yeah that might result in some trouble if you're not careful. I once heard that professional bikers can eventuell run into issues due to whatever the part between the balls and the butt is called in English being squished a lot. But then their issues could also just result from lifelong...
My very limited experience with horse riding when I was a little kid didn't get my nuts squished. And I haven't heard anyone complain about that problem ever. So I wouldn't be too sure about that "fact".
I think when having a main character with major issues it's important to have them actually work through them.
Otherwise you run into the risk of having too much "angst" in your story. Unless of course you're explicitly writing a drama.
That's definetliy something I haven't read before and would like to see more of. As long as the power fantasy aspect doesn't turn your SI into too much of an asshole that is.
So joinging the Blades would be where the story ends? Because thinking of a proper ending for a story is always the thing...
Did you want to pay any attention to the genderbending aspect of the story?
Or was that just going to be in the background and never mentioned again.
Was the SI going to hang around Ulfirc?
Because they barely talked to each other.
Was the whole scene supposed to be really chaotic?
I didn't...
You definetely put far more thought into your story idea than I ever did into one of mine which is not saying much but is definetly a good thing.
No need to apologise - I'm actually quite interested in how stories are made which of course then includes outlines and stuff.
Having read it I understand why you struggle. Your grammar and spelling is good but nothing has really happened yet in terms of plot. Intros realy are a bitch which is why people often recommend to just skip them and start at something more interesting.
And if you're having trouble with the glorious awesomness that is breasts I'd recommend a sports bra. Or using fantasy physics instead of real life ones. Really either helps a lot.
Now to go and actually read your story.
I feel you. I've been thinking about writing as well be it regular fiction or porn. Mainly because I'm annoyed by the incredible lack of consensual genderbending fics with a more upbeat tone. You don't happen to have any recommendations though? =)