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  1. Spelloyal

    No problem, it's a great fic, it has some flaws but it also has immense potential. Besides, it's...

    No problem, it's a great fic, it has some flaws but it also has immense potential. Besides, it's always satisfying when one of my comments ends up being useful to an author.
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  2. Spelloyal

    Shirou, Blade of Emiya

    Thanks for the chapter, my only complaint is that Shirou didn't really discuss anything relevant with Caster other than saying he's friendly. He could have mentioned the corrupted grail and asked her to help purify it. A Caster and a Saint should be able to do that working together.
  3. Spelloyal

    Shirou, Blade of Emiya

    I love this fic, so that's a shame. But because it's a fate fic, instead of dropping it, I think it's worth starting the grail war and concluding the fic there. It's going to be a meh ending but it might be better than dropping.
  4. Spelloyal

    Shirou, Blade of Emiya

    This chapter was a Buzzkill, I was looking forward to reading EMIYA reacting to a Saint Shirou Saberface trap who really put his talent with the sword to good use. I was really hoping for a conversation like EMIYA asking about Shirou becoming a counter guardian and Shirou responding with...
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    Shirou, Blade of Emiya

    Thanks for the chapter!!! A member of the church, let alone one who has participated in hunts for dead apostles, should know better than to ignore this kind of thing even if they didn't know that Magus tend to use common animals as familiars for scouting.
  6. Spelloyal

    Dreams of Tomorrow (Worm/Supergirl)

    Ugh, I hate this kind of annoying plot where the villain steals the MC's technology and uses it to fight him. That and clones is always more irritating and frustrating rather than exciting. Other than that, great fic. Thanks for the chapters, I'm loving every point of the story (except Simurg...
  7. Spelloyal

    Fate Broken Dream

    Holy shit, this fic is incredible! I have no words to describe how incredible this was, especially the end of chapter 2.
  8. Spelloyal

    King Arthur's Quest of Dragons and Devils

    In fact, this can be a lot of fun. You can use good old Zelretch as the culprit for the isekai, it opens up opportunities to visit other worlds if you want and it can also create some really fun situations if you don't mind giving the MC a magical girl form even if the use be optional, perhaps...
  9. Spelloyal

    King Arthur's Quest of Dragons and Devils

    There are a few points I would like to mention, the first and most important is the system. My advice on the system is to focus on skills and skill descriptions rather than exact values, with most of them it's better to let the MC explore alone how effective the skill is and eventually he will...
  10. Spelloyal

    Of Souls, Swords, and Sorcery

    Blake obviously, Cinder have a trash personality. One question: Will Jaune eventually find a way to become stronger or will it be one of those stories where he depends on cheat (clock), technique and intelligence to face stronger opponents?
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    King Arthur's Quest of Dragons and Devils

    The initial idea is good, but the author was greedy mixing so many tropes (Outer God, Saber, UBW, Gamer System, Class Cards) and it killed the fic before it even started. It could have been a good story if the author chose just one or two. While the synopsis makes it look like King Arthur Si...
  12. Spelloyal

    Shirou, Blade of Emiya

    Not really, he's always had UBW since it's a prerequisite for using his absurd projections, what he's doing is learning how to use it without cheating with Archer's help or arm. Of course, because he is not Archer nor Shirou from one of the routes, it is expected that his UBW appearance will be...
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    Shirou, Blade of Emiya

    Thanks for the chapter!!! It's nothing too complicated, even a third-rate magus knows that the Aria of a spell can vary from one magus to another, with the most important thing being the meaning. I remember Rin explaining something like that to Shirou in canon. A Reality Marble's Aria is very...
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    Shirou, Blade of Emiya

    My advice is to try and practice this if you want to develop as an author, but with you being a fanfic author rather than a professional I understand that it's perfectly reasonable if you prefer to stay as you are now. You are already better than many authors out there and as I pointed out this...
  15. Spelloyal

    Shirou, Blade of Emiya

    Thanks for the chapter! That wasn't a very smart decision on Shirou's part. Even in Magecraft the incarnation of the sword can be a benefit rather than a disadvantage as long as it is used well. Instead of following traditional magecraft he could have forged swords to serve as the focal...
  16. Spelloyal

    Shirou, Blade of Emiya

    It's a good story? It's worth reading?
  17. Spelloyal

    Sneaking His Way into the Multiverse (RWBY Jaune, WC-lite mechanics)

    Great fic, but starting with worm, losing all the loot and to make matters worse taking a canonical Tattletale with him is a really shitty start. At that point he might as well have gone to Doom or 40k.
  18. Spelloyal

    Shirou, Blade of Emiya

    So there are more reincarnated people running around? I really don't like it... As for the sealing designation, it is mainly given when the Magus achieves something that is not replicable, if the domain expansion was well documented and any magus can learn there is no reason to issue a sealing...
  19. Spelloyal

    Shirou, Blade of Emiya

    Thanks for the chapters! It's a great fic, I really hope to see Shirou focusing more on the sacred arts since it's very rare to find a fate fic that uses them. It will be incredible if he summons someone who can teach him Jacob Limbs. Shirou could summon Martha due to being a Saint and lend...
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    Soliciting style requests

    After years of using the old default style I will be happy if you can add it to the new system.
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