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  1. Flightless Man

    One Positive Change at a Time (ASOIAF: Viserys SI) Dead.

    I basically wanted humans to be thought of as labrats by the Deep Ones and they keep us at a tech level that we never get the chance to fight back. The Merlings are a species of individual experiments that can somehow breed with each other still. Rocky chitin/skin and large compound eyes...
  2. Flightless Man

    One Positive Change at a Time (ASOIAF: Viserys SI) Dead.

    Thank you, lots of my ideas may have been iffy, but I don't ever want to just write the same thing everyone has already seen a dozen or more times. I tried to find a new angle for all the big things like Rhaegar/Lyanna. I don't get inspired reading the same thing, so hopefully some of these...
  3. Flightless Man

    One Positive Change at a Time (ASOIAF: Viserys SI) Dead.

    Thanks for discussing it with me, it really will help me craft my next story once I'm ready. With the Deep Ones, I'm glad that was interesting. I really wanted to avoid the Others being the bad guys and explore some of the other mythos. Aegon was going to organize his own little band of 7...
  4. Flightless Man

    One Positive Change at a Time (ASOIAF: Viserys SI) Dead.

    But see, right their is all I ask for. You acknowledge you would hate it, not that it's objectively a bad/uninteresting idea. I'd honestly be interested in knowing which parts you really didn't like in the outline, so I can potentially improve in the future. Is it Viserys turning evil, with...
  5. Flightless Man

    One Positive Change at a Time (ASOIAF: Viserys SI) Dead.
    Extras: Outline

    I keep trying to write more of this story, but I can’t do it. I’m completly burned out and have spent at least 15 hours staring at a blank page. So this is my outline for the rest of the story. Book 2: Was going to go back and edit/retcon every mention of Robb dying, to his younger brother Jon...
  6. Flightless Man

    One Positive Change at a Time (ASOIAF: Viserys SI) Dead.

    The Wildlings/Free Folk, will be splitting up once they get to northern Essos. Between Lorath, The Forest of Ifeqeveren, the Bone Mountains, and and the upper Dothrakki Sea (good thing it just saw some upheaval). In Canon, Mance finds about 500-1'000 (and it's a year later). So somewhere in...
  7. Flightless Man

    One Positive Change at a Time (ASOIAF: Viserys SI) Dead.

    - Summer Island Prince - Technically King of the Basilisk Island Pirates -Stealer of Songs -Vizier of the Burning/Flaming Legion(I like it, but I may want to go with a reference instead of a direct rip off. Flaming also lets me have secret gay puns.). Lord Commander would be the leader of the 14...
  8. Flightless Man

    One Positive Change at a Time (ASOIAF: Viserys SI) Dead.
    Threadmarks: Chapter 40: Rehearsal (Viserys)

    Chapter 40: Rehearsal Viserys Ashtar “I only made a few proclamations when I was King of Westeros.” My contented smile darts back and forth between Tyrion and my niece. “I made the offer when I was six, so this has been a long time coming.” “It’s really such a simple ceremony?” Tyrion frowns...
  9. Flightless Man

    One Positive Change at a Time (ASOIAF: Viserys SI) Dead.
    Threadmarks: Chapter 39: Travel Plans (Jennelyn)

    Chapter 39: Travel Plans Jennelyn Baratheon As we circle the keep and give every in Winterfell time to prepare somewhere for us to land, Mance tenses up more than he has the entire flight. “It’s going to be fine, no one is going to do anything to you today.” They’ll be too happy you brought me...
  10. Flightless Man

    One Positive Change at a Time (ASOIAF: Viserys SI) Dead.
    Threadmarks: Chapter 38: The Pursuit Of Knowledge Is a Pain In The Ass (Joffrey)

    Chapter 38: The Pursuit Of Knowledge Is a Pain In The Ass Joffrey Baratheon “Good luck,” Dany scowls at the citadel behind me, making our host Asha Tyrell grunt in amusement. “You’re the one who doesn’t trust us with your dragon.” She pats the disguised Sand girl on the head and shrugs...
  11. Flightless Man

    One Positive Change at a Time (ASOIAF: Viserys SI) Dead.

    you're welcome, thanks for sticking with me the whole way. I'm legitimately running out of easy science is magic tricks. I think I have magnesium being flammable and sodium/potassium exploding on contact with water left. If anyone has anything like the lava lamp or easily replicatable science...
  12. Flightless Man

    One Positive Change at a Time (ASOIAF: Viserys SI) Dead.
    Threadmarks: Chapter 37: Get Over It (Rhaenys)

    Chapter 37: Get Over It Rhaenys Targaryen “Is every battle truly so simple for you?” The elated voice of Tyrion brings a small smile to my lips as we soar away from the relieved Ar Noy. “No need to unleash the worst of cruelties to break your foe’s will?” “Against so few?” Which means the...
  13. Flightless Man

    One Positive Change at a Time (ASOIAF: Viserys SI) Dead.
    Threadmarks: Chapter 36: The Dragon Knight And The Darkstar (Daemon)

    Chapter 36: The Dragon Knight And The Darkstar Daemon Blackfyre Khal Drogo’s entire force of forty thousand once assembled, has finally made it’s push to cross the river. Each bridge acts as a funnel but one with far more going in than it was designed to handle. I’ve been forced to recruit...
  14. Flightless Man

    One Positive Change at a Time (ASOIAF: Viserys SI) Dead.
    Threadmarks: Chapter 35: Back Where It Began (Duncan)

    Chapter 35: Back Where It Began Duncan Selmy When the sun starts to come up in the East, Meera finally realizes how high up we are and stiffens in the saddle barely big enough the two of us. Really going to need a new one once we reach Starfall, or I don’t think I’ll be flying her back. Not...
  15. Flightless Man

    One Positive Change at a Time (ASOIAF: Viserys SI) Dead.

    Thanks, I think I can finally start doing them once a day now. I'm hoping to have another out tommorow.
  16. Flightless Man

    One Positive Change at a Time (ASOIAF: Viserys SI) Dead.
    Threadmarks: Chapter 34: Build-a-Boat (Theon)

    Chapter 34: Build-a-Boat Theon Greyjoy By my second week in Hardhome, I’ve stopped expecting someone to call me out on being a member of the Watch. Once I saw how ramshackle the boats the wildlings managed to cobble together really are, it was clear I had an easy path to privilege once more...
  17. Flightless Man

    One Positive Change at a Time (ASOIAF: Viserys SI) Dead.

    I told you a mer-girl was on her way. Patchface said he was taking Renly's place. Brienne will kind of be the Bronn to Shireen's Tyrion. He might. He really believes in the Seven.
  18. Flightless Man

    One Positive Change at a Time (ASOIAF: Viserys SI) Dead.
    Threadmarks: Chapter 33: Something Fishy (Aegon)

    Chapter 33: Something Fishy Aegon Ashtar The waters around the island of Tarth are as crystal blue as they say, with calm sapphire waves around it meeting the angry black water of Shipbreaker Bay. A nearly solid line separates the different parts of the sea, like a barrier created by the Storm...
  19. Flightless Man

    One Positive Change at a Time (ASOIAF: Viserys SI) Dead.

    My computer finally died will be a few days before I get a new one and have a word doc installed.
  20. Flightless Man

    One Positive Change at a Time (ASOIAF: Viserys SI) Dead.

    Weirdly, if the curse Viserys is yelling about is real, Joffrey is the only candidate with no dragon blood. He may be safe, though Dany wouldn't be.. You have no idea how often I picture this scene.
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