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There was a facility devoted to researching the creation of artificial life.
One of its creations escaped—quietly, without anyone noticing.

For the first time, he breathed the open air, savoring its sweetness.
Then came the ambush.

Goblins—failed prototypes from that very same facility—swarmed him. They tore him apart and left him dead. As they gathered to feast on the body, something impossible happened.

The homunculus woke up.

Fire exploded outward in a violent surge, erasing every goblin in an instant.
But the being that rose from the ashes was no longer what it had been before.

It wasn't a homunculus at all.
It was something entirely new.

After reducing the facility to ruins, it set off into the world. The first life it saved belonged to a runaway princess. Cliché, I know.
But one event led to another… and then another… until, somehow, both the princess and her guard ended up owing him ten million gold coins.

Unfortunately, the princess had no gold.

He was generous, though.

So he simply made them his slaves.

Muahahaha—what an interesting turn of events.



There will be some mistakes, so please point them out and I'll correct them.

I'm still writing it on Patreon, so visit there to see the early drafts.

AN: This is an AI-assisted project.
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In a far-flung realm, shrouded in the mists of a world not our own, a creature staggered in a tangled forest, his breath ragged, his heart pounding like a war drum.

This was no ordinary man—his skull had just been cracked open by the crude, splintered club of a snarling goblin. Blood trickled down his temple, matting his unkempt hair, and yet, there was something peculiar about him.

Something that made the very air around him hum with an heaviness.

Who was this being, stumbling through the underbrush, his tattered cloak snagging on thorns? He was no hero, no warrior clad in gleaming armor. He was no human either, He was a homunculus—a wretched, artificial creation born from the twisted ambitions of alchemists in a clandestine laboratory.

Crafted to be a vessel for a *****, a ***** spark meant to ignite within his frail form. But he was deemed a failure.

His makers sneered at his imperfections: his uneven gait, his too-human eyes that flickered with something dangerously close to a soul. They called him a mistake, a taboo, a mockery of life itself.

Why did they call him a mockery when they were the ones to create it to begin with?

Yet, despite their scorn, one truth burned brighter than their cruel words: he had escaped. And that, by all the stars in this alien sky, was fucking glorious.

The facility he fled was a nightmare of cold stone and flickering alchemical flames, hidden deep within a mountain's belly. Its walls echoed with the screams of other failed experiments, others like him their voices taunting and haunting his dreams as he plotted his escape.

He was tired, so one moonless night, he slipped through the shadows, past guards drunk on mead and arrogance, and out into the wild unknown.

The forest greeted him with a chorus of nocturnal whispers—crickets, owls, and the rustle of leaves like secrets being shared. Freedom tasted sharp, like iron and pine, but it was his.

He hadn't been free for long when the goblin ambushed him. The creature was a wiry, foul thing, its skin like moldy leather, its eyes glinting with malice under the moonlight. It wasn't alone—two others lurked behind it, their jagged teeth bared in grotesque grins.

The homunculus froze, his breath catching as he met the leader's gaze. In those hideous, green eyes, he saw a hunger that mirrored his own—a raw, gnawing need, not for food, but for something deeper.

Anger. Vengeance. A primal urge to lash out at a world that had starved them in cruelty. The goblin saw a reflection of its own torment in the homunculus, and it drove the creature into a frenzy.

The homunculus, though no warrior, felt a spark of defiance flare within him. He was no vessel for a *****, but he was alive, damn it, and he would not go quietly.

He raised his fists, trembling yet resolute, ready to fight for his fleeting taste of freedom. But the goblins were faster, their movements feral and precise. As he dodged a swipe from the leader's claw, he was too slow to notice the second goblin circling behind.

A sharp, searing pain exploded at the back of his skull. The world tilted, colors bleeding into a dizzying blur. He crumpled to the forest floor, leaves crunching beneath his weight, his vision swimming with stars.

The last thing he saw was the goblin's club raised high, its crude wood stained with his blood, descending like a guillotine. Darkness swallowed him, and he plummeted into oblivion, the echo of his own heartbeat fading into the void.

Yet, even as he fell, a single thought burned in his fading consciousness: he had tasted freedom, if only for a moment, and no goblin, no alchemist, nor god could take that from him.

Just as the goblin, its jagged maw dripping with anticipation, leaned to tear into the lifeless prey it had felled, something stirred in the shadowed air. A ripple, unseen, unnatural, coiled through the forest's heart.

A scream—raw, unearthly—shattered the silence, not from the goblin's throat but from the broken form at its feet.

The homunculus's body twitched, then thrashed, as if seized by some vengeful spirit clawing free. Its limbs jerked in a grotesque dance. As if rearranging themselves.

And by the time the goblin came into its senses, it was already too late.

Then a fire came —wild, searing, alive. It erupted from nowhere, from everywhere, a blue-white inferno that devoured the goblin's snarl and turned its hunger to shrieks.

Fire and fire and fire, relentless, spiraling, consuming everything—flesh, bone, the very darkness of the night itself. The forest groaned, its ancient boughs curling to cinders, the ground scorched to a whispering wasteland.

And when the flames faded, only darkness remained.

…………………………….

Sequence Initiated: Reconstruction Protocol Alpha-7

……………….

This was no ordinary corpse, but a bioengineered shit.

Its heart, torn open, twitched with faint alchemical isotopes.

The brain, revealed by the cracked skull, pulsed with fading activity.

Bite marks—serrated, inhuman—oozed bioluminescent ichor on his limbs.

Syringe punctures glittered like stardust, remnants of experimental serums. This homunculus….

………

A being watching the data scroll with curiosity. "This body's perfect." And decided to take over. WHY? YOU ASK? Because he was driven more by boredom than by desire.
 
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