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Banana Storage (Snippets, Drafts, Ideas, etc)

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[Zakaria]



12th, Verdant Rain, 1167
You are so stupid.

I didn't...
Commentary: Neurological Control
This one is relatively old piece of work. Planned and written in late 2019 - early 2020.

As you can infer from the work, the unnamed protagonist's main motivation is to prove his detractors wrong. That his non-flashy Quirk doesn't mean that he is weak and he sought to prove it by joining the Pro-Hero Industry. I planned him to have an underlying obsession with strength, which manifest as Blood-Knight tendencies and a berserk button revolving 'undeserved claim to strength'. This, in my planning, will set up confrontation with Monoma and Shinsho.

Of course, I stepped away from this project after only this chapter due to RL concerns (namely work, uni, and COVID). Then MHA started losing me and this project become buried in my hard-drive.
 
Commentary: Naga Klinting
So. I finally gathered enough courage to show off what I've been writing lately.

Background for the Naga Klinting:

It's essentially a whim. I want to write an SI with cheat power. Said cheat is the legendary Naga Baru Klinting spear of Javanese Myth. A naga transformed into a spear that grant its wielder magical powers. The first draft of the story is just the standard SI shenanigans. Then my self-hatred kick in when I reread the chapters around new year.

So, I scrapped everything I've worked out so far and restarted. This time, the story will focus on the grandson of the SI.

As of now, work on this story has pretty much stopped. I'm still working out the timeline for the story and researching on how to properly portray the inhuman mindset of Naga Klinting.
 
Commentary: Shark [Demon]
This story was written a while back. Back when the Lantern YJ SI was just beginning to catch on.

The story itself was planned to be the bog-standard 'SI join Young Justice Team'. The 'fun' however, come mostly from the research. The mess that is DC universe aside, Gash Bell has a very vague but simultaneously well-defined magic system. The spells the character used may seem gibberish, but there is a rather strict rule of nomenclature that dictates what spells does what based on stem, prefixes, suffixes, and spell category.

I confess that out of the snips I unearthed, this one held a rather special place in my heart. I may just continue it one day if I need a break from my current project.
 
Commentary: Snippet: Fight Scene
Just a little snippet I wrote to practice my fight scene writing.

Panji Tengkorak (Skull Panji), also known as Pengemis Iblis dari Kidul (Demonic Beggar from Kidul) is a rather popular character in Indonesia. The brain child of the venerable Hans Jaladara, who also created Walet Merah (Red Swallow). Alongside Si Buta dari Gua Hantu (The Blind Man from the Ghost Cave) by Ganes T. H., the three character essentially created the genre of martial art comics in Indonesia.

The character itself, in the source material, are driven by revenge. This little snippet takes place after Panji has finished his revenge. If I ever expand it, it'd probably be a story about how a man who based most of his existence of vengeance live on after he achieve it.

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Commentary: Deck of Berserkers
And here we go. The last of the presentable snippets I unearthed from my hard-drive. This was written around the time I got into FGO. Back then, I was but a casual fan of Nasuverse (still am now), and I'm betting my left kidney that it showed in my writing.

The plan here, as one could tell from the title, is to give Tsukune nothing but Berserkers. And since Tsukune was such a weak-willed kid at the start of the R+V, he'll succumb to the Madness Enhancement the moment he invoke them. Over the course of the story, he'll progressively get better control while also unlocking 'saner' Berserker.
 
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