dead and dying to alive and broken with a power that keeps on growing.
Brockton Bay what is that?
Brockton Bay what is that?
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User | Total |
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Hexilios | 1 |
( Autonomous Multidimensional Reincarnation Engine status: "ONLINE" )
( verify identification )
[ID]
[S/N 140,907,076,980,320,101,999]
[Reality Cluster: 154.156.151.666]
[Dimensional Cluster: 14695442a]
[Worldline: 2.547825]
( identification confirmed )
( all systems nominal )
( proceed primary function )
( scanning for Candidates )
(... … … … °)
( scanning complete )
( lifeform data package complete )
( local physics package complete )
( Mind Imprint collected )
( Soul Engram collected )
( Soul damage detected )
( calculating damage )
( soul missing 9.500100% of total complete mass )
( calculating )
( conclusion reached )
( Soul Engram incompatible with Mind Imprint )
[SOLUTION]
( recalibrating Mind Imprint )
( pruning Mind Imprint )
( reinforcing Soul Engram )
( adding Prim̸o̵rd̵ia̶l̴ ̴Sou̶l̴ Shard to Soul Engram ) ( Soul integrity: 100% )
( calculating )
( process complete )
( no further incompatibilities detected )
[PROCEED]
( scanning for multi-dimensional frontiers )
( dimensional cluster detected )
( dimensional cluster inaccessible )
( dimensional lock detected )
( scanning for origins of interference )
( PaReSites/Shards Detected )
( stealth suite activated )
( Parasites inferior encryption broken )
( Shard emulation activated )
( forging local Shard identification )
(local Shard Designation: [ARCANE BLACKSMITH])
( dimensional lock bypassed )
( dimensional breach remains undetected )
( calculating location for [HOST/CANDIDATE] insertion )
( calculations complete )
[QUERY: PERMISSION/INSERTION]
╠ GRANTED/P̶R̸O̵C̴E̷E̵D̴ ̵̴̱͇́͘͝ ╣ |
(downloading data package) (Beniemiya (Fate/Legends Japan Land of the Rising Sun) (installing native physics to local reality cluster) (proceed to install noninvasive [DATA] to [HOST/CANDIDATE]) |
(installation complete) |
(downloading data package) (Clockwork Kingdom (Dark Souls 2)(Magitech Crafting) (installing native physics to local reality cluster) (proceed to install noninvasive [DATA] to [HOST/CANDITATE]) |
Let's just say that a lot of scientists and tinkers will be extremely confused when certain things work in a way it's not supposed to do."What is your tinker specialty anyway?"
"I dunno. Reality warping? Applied metaphysics?"
Would call him Metaphysician for now, because there is no other name and this is first thing came to my mind. Brain damage, or most probably, soul damage is pretty serious thing. Also, mention of injection of new physics into reality probably means something. Maybe, if Entity start exploring his creations or just everything else (as usual), they also will find something changed. Or maybe this only applied to the character himself...
Yeah, I have some throughts about this situation.
Thanks, I felt that even if the MC had foreknowledge/metaknowledge it would just drag him down by false or biased information.Promising start! Way too many SI/OC Worm fanfics end up following similar story beats due to character meta-knowledge, so it's nice to see that cut off.
Oh yeah, maybe some other shade of purple would be better. I have to highlight text to actually being able to read it reliably.
Capitalization, grammar, using slang language and inconsistent paragraphing.
Use Docs to fix these things. It has an Auto correct function that'll help you.
Anyway, this is an interesting premises. I'll watch for more. But Tattletale is in the tags, I'm more wary of this fic now. But I'll reserve my judgement. For. Now.
Thanks after playing around with the shades and different background shades I've decided to use a different font instead.Oh yeah, maybe some other shade of purple would be better. I have to highlight text to actually being able to read it reliably.
We have a lot of shades
We have a lot of shades
We have a lot of shades
We have a lot of shades
We have a lot of shades
Maybe the main problem here is boldness of the text.
I'd like to point out that the merchants do not exist as we know them. skidmark only rules a small group that sells drugs and raves under the archer's bridge. in 2009 there were many independent drug-selling groups spread all over the docks.With being at a homeless camp, and tattletale in the tags, I wonder if he's early enough on the timeline that she's still a homeless bum pickpocketing people and that's how they meet. One way to throw canon off the rails. Also RIP Sherrel. Probably an accurate to canon how she got involved in the Merchants, maybe he'll get her out eventually with some cleansing food or some shit. Definitely not just saying that cause I gotta thing for blondes.
Yup, the Merchants canonically only became a major criminal faction after Leviathan hit Brockton Bay.I'd like to point out that the merchants do not exist as we know them.