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From Naruto onwards, I Control Time
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Reborn into the world of Naruto with a mysterious ability to manipulate time, Hatake Kaede, Kakashi's older brother awakens a power that defies the very laws of reality. While others train their bodies and master jutsu, he breaks the boundaries of time itself; slowing it, accelerating it, and even stopping it entirely.

Starting as Kakashi's older brother, Hatake Kaede flies under the radar; quiet, unassuming… and dangerously overpowered. From surviving brutal ninja missions to dominating the Chūnin Exams, he charts a course that will rewrite the fate of the ninja world.

As rival villages plot and Akatsuki begins to stir in the shadows, Hatake Kaede rise is inevitable. With each battle, he inches closer to the realm of gods; unbound by time, unshaken by destiny.

But can someone who controls time remain untouched by it?
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Does he age faster when he used time acceleration? Or does he have the "Required Secondary Powers" and is immune to aging from his time manipulation?

Either way, watched.
 
Pretty distinctive Chinese fanfiction style writing. The writing style is pretty distinctive of Chinese web novels. its okay, but the translation quality itself is surprisingly good. better than even the best AI translators.
 
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Does he age faster when he used time acceleration? Or does he have the "Required Secondary Powers" and is immune to aging from his time manipulation?

Either way, watched.

Yes, because time was accelerating for him, he experienced everything including aging faster. That's why he became a teenager more quickly than normal.
 
edit: Why was kurenai watching the exams? she is an academy student, and you added her so many times in the reactions, its like this is a translated story, very suspicious

hmmm, looks up chapter 15 from webnovel from other story

Chapter 15: **Chapter 15: The Doubtful Kakashi**

Ryo had clearly only wanted to quietly train to the level of a jōnin, but he was forced to kill, disrupting his training rhythm. For a moment, he was speechless.
Should he destroy the body and erase all traces?
It was probably too late for that now.
Whoosh!
Without checking the body of Lin Qin Yu, Ryo leaped up, grabbed his belongings, and quickly fled into the distance.
He could guess that the Konoha Anbu would likely be arriving soon, and he didn't want to run into them.
Almost immediately after Ryo left...
Whoosh! Whoosh!!
Several ninja figures appeared at the site of the battle, all wearing various animal masks—these were none other than Anbu ninjas directly under the command of the Third Hokage, Sarutobi Hiruzen.
"Over there!"
One of the sensory ninjas blinked and spotted Lin Qin Yu's body. Instead of approaching directly, he swiftly threw a shuriken that pinned the body to the ground, confirming that the opponent was indeed dead.
The other two Anbu ninjas closed in from the sides.
"He's dead."
One of them crouched down. After confirming Lin Qin Yu's death, he turned the body over, revealing the forehead protector with the symbol of the Hidden Mist Village.
The three Anbu ninjas exchanged glances, surprise flashing in their eyes. They had initially thought that a Konoha ninja had been attacked and killed, but it turned out to be a ninja from the enemy village—probably a scout. They just didn't know who had killed him.
"This guy must be an elite chunin from the Mist."
The crouching ninja quickly examined the body. A hint of uncertainty crossed his eyes, and he turned to his companions, saying, "You sensed the battle here less than a minute ago, right?"
"Yeah..."
The sensory ninja frowned. "To be able to eliminate an elite scout from the Mist in such a short time, it must have been a jōnin from our village. But I have no recollection of that chakra, and after killing the Mist ninja, they just left? It seems like they didn't want to meet us."
The one examining the body was also deep in thought, but then he suddenly froze, staring closely at the wound on the back of Lin Qin Yu's head, a look of astonishment in his eyes. "This wound..."
"What's wrong?"
The two others looked over.
The Anbu ninja who had been examining the body hesitated for a few seconds before speaking, "I've seen this kind of wound before... It should be a mark left by Lord Sakumo's sword technique."
"Impossible!"
"Lord Sakumo died two years ago..."
The other two Anbu ninjas reacted almost in unison.
The examining ninja also couldn't believe it. After confirming the wound several more times, he said, "This wound was definitely caused by Lord Sakumo's sword technique, but it couldn't have been Lord Sakumo himself—otherwise, the forehead protector would have been cut through as well."
Upon hearing this, the three Anbu ninjas exchanged looks.
The Mist ninja had been killed by the Hatake sword technique, but only a select few would still be capable of using it. After Sakumo's death, there were hardly any left.
"...Let's clean up and report this to the Hokage."
"Understood."
After making their judgment, the Anbu ninjas quickly returned to the village.
The death of an enemy scout wasn't a big deal, especially in such tense times. It wasn't serious enough to wake Sarutobi Hiruzen in the middle of the night. So, it wasn't until the next morning that Hiruzen learned about the previous night's events when he arrived at the Hokage's office.
"A Mist elite scout... killed by the Hatake sword technique, and the entire battle took less than a minute?"
Upon hearing the Anbu's report, Hiruzen was surprised.
To have a Mist elite scout infiltrating near Konoha, at the very least, he must have been an elite chunin. And to eliminate such a ninja in under a minute would require a jōnin, but there should be no jōnin in Konoha capable of using Hatake sword technique.
"Could it be him?"
Hiruzen's mind flashed to Kakashi's image.
He was shaken.
To kill a Mist scout in under a minute... When did Kakashi grow this much? He's still not even eight years old!
Though it was hard to believe, upon further reflection, no other candidate fit the description. Hiruzen sighed, "Where's Kakashi? Find him, I have something to ask him."
"Yes."
The Anbu ninja responded and quickly disappeared.
A moment later, Kakashi appeared outside the Hokage's office. After walking in, he saluted Hiruzen, saying, "Hokage-sama, you called for me?"
Hiruzen stood up and walked over to Kakashi, smiling kindly. His eyes filled with admiration, "You've made a lot of progress in your training lately. I didn't expect that at your age, you'd have mastered Sakumo's sword technique to this extent."
"?"
Kakashi froze.
Hiruzen patted Kakashi's shoulder and smiled, "Seeing you is like seeing Sakumo when he was young... Don't you have something to report to me?"
Kakashi looked at Hiruzen in confusion, unsure of what he meant. After hesitating for a moment, he asked, "Hokage-sama, what do you mean?"
Hiruzen looked slightly surprised, then smiled again.
He hadn't expected that young and impetuous Kakashi would learn to hide things. It seemed like Kakashi had truly grown up. Perhaps it wouldn't be long before he could take on the responsibilities of a jōnin. Had he known this, he wouldn't have asked Minato to guide Kakashi in the first place.
*Thud!*
Hiruzen raised his hand and tossed something toward Kakashi.
Kakashi reached out to catch it, and found that it was a Mist village forehead protector, with bloodstains on the top and a white line in the middle, as though it had been slashed by a sharp blade.
Confused by the sudden toss of the forehead protector, Kakashi became even more puzzled, his mind sinking into confusion as he looked at Hiruzen.
"...You still haven't remembered?"
Hiruzen took a sip of tea.
It's good to know how to hide things, but since he already knew, Kakashi should now report everything clearly.
Upon hearing Hiruzen's words, Kakashi's mind raced, but he couldn't remember anything related to the forehead protector. After a long pause, he finally couldn't help but ask, "Hokage-sama, what exactly is this forehead protector..."
Hiruzen's brows furrowed slightly, surprised that Kakashi was still concealing something, and he said lightly, "The battle last night—you should report the details to me now."
"Last night?"
Kakashi was stunned for a moment, then his expression became serious, "Hokage-sama, I was at home last night, I didn't participate in any battle..."
(End of Chapter)
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An: You can read 30+ advanced chapters on patre-on
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Tn: plus extra 2 chapters if we reach 500 power stone mark

now lets look at the chapter 15 of this story:

He had only wanted to quietly train until he reached the level of Jōnin, but now he had been forced to kill someone, disrupting the rhythm of his training. For a moment, Kaede was at a loss for words.

Should he destroy the body to cover it up...?

There probably wasn't enough time.

Whoosh!

Without even checking Rin Kinyuuya's corpse, Kaede leapt up, grabbed his belongings, and quickly fled into the distance.

He could easily guess that Konoha's Anbu were likely rushing to the scene. Kaede had no intention of running into them.

Almost immediately after Kaede left—

Whoosh! Whoosh!

Several shinobi appeared at the location where the fight had taken place. They all wore animal masks, clearly members of the Anbu directly under the Third Hokage, Hiruzen Sarutobi.

"over there!"

one of them, a sensory-type ninja, caught a flash of something and saw Lin Qingyu Yuuya's corpse. He didn't approach directly, instead hurling a shuriken that struck the body, confirming that the target was dead.

The other two Anbu quickly approached from both sides.

"He's dead."

one of them crouched down to confirm the death, then flipped the corpse over so the face was up, revealing the forehead protector of Kirigakure.

The three Anbu looked at each other, a flicker of surprise passing through their eyes. They had expected to find a fallen Konoha shinobi, only to discover it was an enemy ninja instead. Judging by his gear, he was likely a scout, though it was unclear who had taken him out.

"This guy should be a Kirigakure elite Chūnin."

The crouching ninja swiftly inspected the body. A flicker of doubt appeared in his eyes as he turned to his companion.

"It's been less than a minute since you sensed the battle here, right?"

"Yeah..."

The sensory ninja furrowed his brow. "To take out an elite scout from Kirigakure that quickly, it'd have to be one of our Jōnin. But I don't recognize that chakra signature at all. And after killing the enemy, they just left? Seems they didn't want to encounter us."

The ninja inspecting the body looked thoughtful for a moment, then suddenly froze. He stared closely at the wound on Rin Kinyuuya's head, his expression turning to surprise.

"This wound…"

"What about it?"

The other two turned their attention to him.

After hesitating for several seconds, the inspecting Anbu spoke, sounding unsure.

"This kind of wound... I've seen it before. It looks like something caused by Lord Sakumo's sword technique."

"No way!"

"Lord Sakumo died two years ago…"

The two were almost in sync with their reaction.

The inspecting ninja also looked uncertain, but after double-checking, he finally said:

"This kind of cut is definitely the result of Lord Sakumo's blade technique. But it likely wasn't him. If it were, this forehead protector would've been cleaved right through too."

Hearing this, the three Anbu exchanged glances.

The Hatake Sword Technique was a secret art passed down only within the Hatake clan, just like the Nara Clan's Shadow Jutsu or the Yamanaka Clan's Mind Techniques. Ever since Sakumo's death, very few people could use it.

"…Compile a report for the Hokage."

"understood."

After coming to a decision, the Anbu returned to the village.

The death of a scout from an enemy village wasn't exactly a major incident given the current tension between the villages, so there was no need to wake Hiruzen Sarutobi in the middle of the night. It wasn't until the next morning, when Hiruzen entered his office, that he was informed of what had happened.

"A Kirigakure elite scout, killed by the Hatake Sword Technique? And the fight lasted no more than a minute?"

Hearing the Anbu's report, Hiruzen was a little taken aback.

An elite Kirigakure scout capable of sneaking near Konoha would at the very least be a high-level Chūnin. To take such a person out in under a minute would require a Jōnin-level shinobi. But there shouldn't be any Jōnin in the village currently proficient in the Hatake Sword Technique.

"Could it be… him?"

A figure flashed through Hiruzen's mind—Kakashi.

His heart trembled slightly.

Killing a Kirigakure scout in under a minute… Had Kakashi already grown that powerful? He wasn't even eight years old yet!

Though it was hard to believe, no one else seemed to fit the profile. Hiruzen took a deep breath.

"Kakashi... Bring him here. I have questions."

"Yes, sir."

The nearby Anbu vanished instantly.

A short while later—

Kakashi arrived outside the Hokage's office and walked in. He bowed respectfully.

"You summoned me, Lord Hokage?"

Hiruzen stood up, approached Kakashi, and gave him a warm smile, his eyes full of admiration.

"Your training has progressed quite a bit recently, hasn't it? I didn't expect you to already master Sakumo's blade techniques at your age."

"...?"

Kakashi froze.

Hiruzen patted Kakashi's shoulder and said with a smile, "Seeing you now reminds me of Sakumo in his youth... Don't you have something you want to report to me?"

Kakashi looked at Hiruzen, utterly puzzled. After hesitating, he asked,

"Lord Hokage, what exactly are you referring to?"

Hiruzen was slightly surprised, but then smiled again.

He hadn't expected the proud and impulsive Kakashi to have learned how to hide things. It seemed the boy had truly grown up. Maybe it wouldn't be long before Kakashi could truly take on the duties of a Jōnin. If he'd known this earlier, there might have been no need to have Minato guide him.

Clack.

Hiruzen raised his hand and tossed something toward Kakashi.

Kakashi caught it and saw that it was a Kirigakure forehead protector, stained with dried blood and marked by a clean cut across the middle—as though it had been sliced by a sharp blade.

utterly baffled by the Hokage's gesture, Kakashi looked even more confused, lost in thought as he turned to Hiruzen.

"...Still not remembering?"

Hiruzen took a sip of tea, his expression calm.

Knowing how to hide was a good quality, but once the Hokage knew, it was time to report the full situation.

Kakashi's mind raced, but he truly couldn't recall anything involving the forehead protector. After a long silence, he finally asked,

"Lord Hokage… this forehead protector... what exactly—?"

Hiruzen frowned slightly, surprised that Kakashi was still denying it. His tone turned colder.

"The battle last night. I want you to explain it."

"Last night?"

Kakashi was stunned, and his expression turned serious.

"Lord Hokage, I was home all night. I wasn't involved in any battle…"

Yep, you changed the name of the characters, and the stolen story was a translation of someone else, found the source in webnovel

Ryo's soul, having traveled to the world of Naruto as Kakashi elder brother, merged with a clock that could control time. He traversed through endless worlds just to master time!

Fellow him on his journey to master time

[Worlds Traveled Through] Naruto - One Piece - One Punch Man - Bleach - Fairy Tail - Demon Slayer


An: This is a translation

Original work: 从火影开始掌控时间

You can read 30+ advanced chapters on my patreon

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And this is the original Chinese chapter 15 you both copy from.


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Yeah, you not only failed to inform us this is a translation, a bunch of other guys with different patreons are already milking this one, pretty forbidden on the site as you can see above.
 
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