Gregory Johnson is a young boy from the small town of New Bark Town, living there with both his...
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Thanks for the feedback! I'll try to be more cognizant of big blocks of text in the future!I like it so far but you should consider breaking up the largest chunks of texts for readability.
Cool website by the way, thanks for sharing.
What's wrong with the thread marks? I'm still new to the site.Threadmarks are messed up. Also great story so far. Hope he gets a Teddiursa and it evolves into BM Ursaluna.
Listed as 1,4,5,3,2What's wrong with the thread marks? I'm still new to the site.
Fixed, thanks for pointing that out!
I don't think bugs ever get the love they deserve
Its probably cause most writers try to go for a semi realistic setting and well most critters Bug types are based on dont have a long lifespan. And therefore it must apply to the Pokemon they are modeled from. Of course there are ways around it such as using the females but most just dont bother.
Yeah, I'll have to give that some thought, I was mostly just thinking ninja spiderMaybe he can use the Spinarak/Ariados Silk for something useful.
Yeah that's true, though I personally don't think you must copy all biological realities of the insects to give them a realistic feeling, I mean it still is a Pokémon lol. Only so much realism you can doIts probably cause most writers try to go for a semi realistic setting and well most critters Bug types are based on dont have a long lifespan. And therefore it must apply to the Pokemon they are modeled from. Of course there are ways around it such as using the females but most just dont bother.
An awesome chapter. And looks like hes had his standard Spearow encounter. Hope he wins the tournament. Also were do we submit ocs? In a pm?
Thanks for reading, I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it! But yeah a Pokémon fitness gym just made sense in my opinion especially with the existence of the fighting type.An awesome chapter. Loved the inclusion of a Pokemon fitness gym. Glad Vulpix decided to join her.
I kinda have a general idea already for what Pokémon the first 6 for both Nora and Gregory are gonna be. After that though I'll probably open it up for readers to vote on, still unsure though as that's way far in the stories future.An awesome chapter. Nice to see things from others perspective on occasion. Also do you take recommendations for future captures and if so are they limited to Johto? Cause Kitakami is nearby.