Aight, welcome to my second story, HP and the Seven Deadly Sins.
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Hmm, now that does sound interesting. To be honest, I didn't think much about it as I mostly prepared some aspects of World Building and how to differentiate different forms of magic across other regions. But a friend did recommend me this idea, and it did caught my attention and it does now. I can think of some ideas for techomancy but would still need more fuel in the think tank, don't want make something basic but rather unique that can serve the MC well. I'm open to suggestions/ideas on any field, as I do plan on expanding the world greatly, might as well have fun with this one.dude this is pretty good .... will you introduce technomancy or maybe technopathy i just really like techno magic's even though not many people write harry potter fanfiction caring about it?
But yes, Patrick did do what the rest of the family found unrepeatable.
"If it wasn't for you, I would have never have managed to get this far if it wasn't for your support."
While you will be learning about Transfiguration and Animagus',
The first Chapter consisted of information that was already known to the Wizarding World about being an Animagi,
*Diricawls
Given how Muggles believe he lived in the 5th century, you have to wonder who the other guy was.
I'm pretty sure the Ministry didn't exist back then. There was no need for the magicals to have a separate government prior to the Statute of Secrecy, which was hundreds of years later.
Not sure what word you were going for here, but unrepeatable makes no sense in context.
Any animal breeder knows how deeply stupid keeping your family pureblood truly is.
*meter
*studios
Redundant sentence is redundant.
You have singular and plural reversed. Animagi means more than one animagus, animagus is just one. An animagi is an oxymoron. Likewise, if you're studying to be an animagus, you're studying animagi not animagus.
Thanks so much for the input! I'll change and edit the mistakes you pointed out by tonight, hope it didn't cause too big of a problem while reading the rest of the Chapter. As for the Animagus one, I was confused as I remember watching a video about them and I believe I got them mixed up. Still, thanks for the help. Hopefully, if you still plan on reading, Chapter 2 will have fewer errors this time around.
Another thing, the HP wiki states that King Arthur was born in 10th century or later. I was mixed on using real-life legends or how some of the HP lore has it. So just a slight clarification on that point and how in this world Muggles have a different time period in mind. If it is that important in the grand scheme of things, I'll change it as well.
or you can just be like "F*CK IT WERE DOIN IT THIS WAY" and most will say "well SH*T this IS fanfiction sweet ..... more chappy"
Hahaha true true, I could have I even stated that its an AU. I respect the source material and make sure I get my facts straight. But this would only apply to Arthur and Morgana/her family as there was a lot of blank spaces left to fill so I decided to get creative with how the family works. I might a little "crazy" down the line when I add more stuff but we'll cross that bridge when we come it xD
Slightly shifting my position to look at my "Father", looming over us with a sheepish smile while the man's focus changed between me and the woman holding me. He had short blonde hair that swayed to the left, some kind of form of jewelry sticking on his hair from the same side, his eyes a clear chocolate brown. Closer observing his facial features, he had a goatee and a mustache that were well-trimmed, not a hair out of line.
maybe mention the occlumency earlier in the chapter? cuz I was seriously worried about MC's intelligence before he mentioned learning it. Aside from that, looking forward to more! Maybe MC can become a phoenix animagus, or at least have one for one of his likely many forms. Maybe MC can learn/discover a way to become a metamorph. Activate that gift, or find a way to induce it? Maybe figure out various methods for immortality, as all true munchkins should, before they are out of their prime (18-21). Maybe some ritual with phoenix ingredients, blood, tears, etc. Maybe a phylosophers stone. Though probably need to refine/improve that, since it was supposedly made in the 12-1300's and flamel looks like death warmed over, while also have to take regular doses of his elixer. Neither of which is good. Maybe MC is in harry's year, OR maybe he will arrive earlier. Maybe he is in Tonks year!?!?! Regardless I hope he hooks up with Tonks, she's my favourite. Followed by Fluer/Hermione, then by the patil twins. both of them. Hopefully MC does not restrict himself to the boring, limited, restricted classes/education of hogwarts, and those classes deemed his year. Learning Transfiguration, Charms, Herbology, Astronomy, Potions, Alchemy, Runes, Wards, Enchanting, CoMC, DADA, Dark Arts, Sex Magic, Soul Magic, Mind Magic (not just occlumency and legillimency), Elementalism, Druidism, Shamanism, Voodoo, Cultivation?, Technopathy?, Telepathy(advancing legillimency enough)?, Telekinesis(advancing charms enough)?, etc. Soo many ideas. Soo much to munchkin.
Gah. People keep getting this wrong in SI stories.
Babies are effectively extremely shortsighted at birth.
There's other issues (like tracking) that are at least in part related to brain development, so I can understand handwaving all those away, but there's no reason to believe a reincarnate should be able to see farther than what's right in front of his face any more than any other baby.
well sounds good. So long as this story does not try and do too much. I like mulit-cross stories. But only when they involve literally traveling to a new world/reality. not so much when one world has everything. Like an author having an ADHD fit. I mean, I like Harry Potter. I like D&D. I like FATE(sometimes). but I do not like stories that start as one, then suddenly have them all. Like, HP stories suddenly having FATE Servants, DxD devils, etc. too muchRight you are my friend, so many options to choose from. Initially, I was thinking on most of the stuff you mentioned is explored across the world during each summer when traveling, as each region should have a different form of magic on its own, something the MC will deffinely learn. It was that, and slightly improving the Hogwarts educational system to include more classes such as that, or the ones who aren't mentioned in the book as advanced courses.
He won't get it all on the first try, but he will use some of the more useful ones he can master right away and expand on it later. Runes will come Ch2 as it will explore Norway with their folklore through their history and some Norse mythology bits that keep the things grounded in that world (note, not Gods that exist at the current day but things that are named after them and such, need to be creative now).
As for the pairings, Fluer and Hermione are on my list, not sure for Fluer atm but might include her. As I was thinking of Hermione and Luna to be the main two, but we'll see.
Thanks for the suggestions!
YES! Finally caught on lmao! Well done, good lad, well done (I've been waiting for someone to figure it out xd)
Thats totally understandable. I know authors who completely drift away from their original vision for God knows why. Just know, while I did promise all these things, it won't make the story shift in that kind of way where it becomes unrecognisable. Stuff will be added to enhance and improve the world, and give a new take with the already established lore.well sounds good. So long as this story does not try and do too much. I like mulit-cross stories. But only when they involve literally traveling to a new world/reality. not so much when one world has everything. Like an author having an ADHD fit. I mean, I like Harry Potter. I like D&D. I like FATE(sometimes). but I do not like stories that start as one, then suddenly have them all. Like, HP stories suddenly having FATE Servants, DxD devils, etc. too much
Found it funny as a Easter egg for the name, as it sounded cool in my head and to make that joke with a Russian Wizard.I literally couldn't stop laughing when someone named Mudak was a serious character.