Personally, I'm expecting Taylor to run into a succubus or incubus while with the Magical Girl owner. Taylor locked down all the paths that will force her to have sex, but nothing is stopping SL from throwing temptation after temptation at her. I'm sure that SL has some employees or contacts that are really experienced at making the thought of sex sound very, VERY tempting.
Well, shit, now I really need to get cracking on writing mine. I want to give it the title "Take Three", which is both a reference to how it would be the third fic to use the premise of Taylor in Slut Life and an oblique reference to certain plot events. But that really only works if I hurry up and write it before someone else does...
Oh don't give me that medical condition BS. My whole problem is the sole fact that her cheating is being blamed on a "medical condition". Its horribly contrived.
I don't. At least not yet. Unless I'm forgetting something I don't think we've even met them. Until then no opinion?
It's in the NSFW section.
I want to point out that my problem isn't with the inclusion of Raffle herself, but rather the execution of it. With Annette trying to rationalize it away as not being cheating because it's with a woman is completely contradicted when she has sex with a futa, because they have dicks. The whole idea of it not being cheating because it's with a woman is the fact that there won't be any real dick going in there. Which btw is ridiculous, but that's neither here nor there. If it was established that Annette and Danny were swingers before hand, or even better yet, had them bring in Danny before hand, before Taylor even woke up, it wouldn't have been such an irritating development. Even better yet, if you are actually aiming for the whole Swingers route, which that doesn't seem to be the case, what you could do is simply drop the hormone fuck up plot point, and instead when they offer Annette the chance to be on the show, have her counter offer by suggesting that they bring Danny on as well. That would completely blindside Taylor, and when Annette explains that she and Danny were Swingers but left that life behind when Taylor was born, it would offer an interesting conundrum for Taylor with out it being "Taylor is suffering" and neatly avoiding the "Annette is a cheating slut trying to rationalize it away" bit. You could even add in that Annette and Danny have been with Futa's before, (tinker tech). That way literally everyone wins.
Ohhhh it was. It was... you can go read through the thread, this one and the nsfw one, to get an idea of what it was like before. It is a massive improvement, I will say that, but still has some major things that keep me personally from enjoying it.
In the original version Taylor was tricked into thinking she had been entrapped into a different contract, and then watched her mother get gangraped for 20~ hours.
The majority of the ones you replied to aren't even invalidated by the rewrite.
Hormones don't change that much. Even more, if they did why would Annette feel so guilty, and lie about it to Taylor?
I'm also now wondering what, if any, safeguards or contingencies Slut Life has for accidentally pissing off an ROB.
Right now her only conviction is "I was willing to fuck random strangers to get mom back, but then they tried to screw me over with that, so I'm gonna take them for everything they're worth, without giving them the one thing that they obviously want (Taylor having lots of sex on screen), while making sure I get what they originally promised me."
Hmm... And in the Annon Must Die difficulty you are forced to "take three" owners...
In the original version:
