AbenSur
I trust you know where the happy button is?
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Dear god that's diabolical lol, I hope they have enough gold put together for a few skills cause he's gonna have a much smaller crew after this lol.
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You'll have to keep reading to know that hehe.Very nice story so far i wonder in what direction you plan on taking it
That could certainly pose a problem. Thanks for the reminder. I'll think of something.I like the concept but maybe don't have the cost of rolls be a constant amount.
I can see the problem coming that for him at some point those 10 gold are going to become trivial
Is my man actually aura farming here ? The sitting on the tree, the looking coldly at men fighting for their lives.Just then, a calm, faintly teasing voice drifted from nearby.
"I told you not to play the hero, Ser Jaime Lannister."
Both men froze.
A few paces away from them, Ronin Graves stood with hands in the pockets. Beside him stood Iggo, the silent Dothraki who had once been on Vargo's side.
That could certainly pose a problem. Thanks for the reminder. I'll think of something.
I didn't think he would have gold for a draw. But I should have. Time to climb the ranks, one gatcha pull at a time.On the way to Harrenhal, he had invested a full hundred gold dragons—almost half of the wealth he had looted from the Brave Companions—into the System for a Veteran-level draw, obtaining a rather formidable skill—
So…this is what this story is gonna be about huh?He stared at Ronin in disbelief, astonished to find that the aura emanating from the man was rising at an alarming rate—almost becoming palpable.
It began pressing down on him, making the Lord of the Dreadfort's heart race wildly.
Roose Bolton recognized it now. This was the aura born from possessing power, cultivated over time.
But how could a mere commoner possess it—and even subtly suppress him?
This was impossible!
Roose Bolton's heart was racing with shock, but after three silent breaths, he managed to force a calm expression. Only his pale pupils contracted uncontrollably.
Not really. Although the skill might seem overpowered at a glance, It can only play an auxiliary role in negotiations at best. And sometimes even be counterproductive, which you'll see in the next chapter.
Got itVery nice also definitely show rolls of skills in chapters it's important to continuity in my opinion also small talk while on the road with companions is also nice
Its alright. I was already planning to show his next draw. It'll be a big one.Just to be clear I'm i no way trying to influence the way you write i am very much enjoying the story so far and just giving suggestions and at the end of the day this is your story you tell it they way you want
Everything will be made clear as the story progresses. I don't want to give any spoilers.Jaime returned to Kings Landing just after the death of Joffrey, right? So after the Red Wedding.
How much time was there in between the RW and his return? Because Bolton might already be in talks with Tywin.
Also how does he explain his knowledge on the happenings in Robb's camp? The only explanation would be him being a deserter that used to be close to the higher-ups. I highly doubt the common rabble knew about the Frey marriage falling through or the Karstarks. Things like supply lines are not words peasants would know.
I like the maneuvering, but Ronin is sus as hell.
He's also yet to establish a goal here - outside survival. Ultimately the Starks "won" with Bran. The Lannisters are annihilated with the exception of Tyrion. Jaime will turn against Ronin if Cersei asks it.
Aside from Lannister gold, earning him power, there is very little to be gained from allying with them. And he's making a lot of northern enemies by helping Jaime. Instead of preventing the Gold Wedding, helping the good guys.
The Freys are wealthy - warn Robb, kill the Freys, secure the war and get money through the Frey vault. They'll be able to save Winterfell, march to Kings landing and the North is victorious. While Robb is a political buffoon he's at least morally a lot better than fucking Joffrey and Cersei.
Just asking what's Ronin's morality/motivation because siding with Lannisters just for power is not my cup of tea. He's in a hard place right now but also free to bolt for Robb's camp