Murder in Paradise
by Ack
[Author's Note: this is a standalone story. It's very loosely...
by Ack
[Author's Note: this is a standalone story. It's very loosely...
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Thank you.There's a very nice mood to this piece. Like I can feel the place. The location.
Thank you. I tried. (Great fan of Holmes, myself).Of everything you've written this has instantly become my favorite. I am actually reminded of the original Sherlock Holmes short stories though the prose is pleasantly lighter and has an equally pleasing lack of Holmes himself.
I did notice this, but I also noticed that Alvarez is notably more human than Holmes. Holmes was rather sociopathic and lived only for his next adventure, he's interesting but very inhuman in some of his workings, one of the reasons we see the stories from Watson's perspective. Alvarez is more understandable and relatable in his motivations and the way he relates to people.Thank you. I tried. (Great fan of Holmes, myself).
Note that Alvarez more or less figured it out, but chose not to do anything about it.
"Are we sure it was a staff member or a guest?" asked Rosario. "If a guest let someone else in -"
Martel inclined his head. "A salient point, Detective. However, our security cameras cover every entrance. I have been over the tapes already; I will be supplying them to you for scrutiny, of course, but no-one has been in or out in the last twenty-four hours who was neither staff nor guest."
Tramante scratched his chin. "Would those cameras cover other areas of the hotel? Such as the corridor outside the victim's room?"
Martel shook his head regretfully. "Alas, our guests prefer discretion over oppressive security, and so there are no cameras in the guest areas, merely the public areas."
Alvarez nodded; he already knew this.