Taylor Hebert is a ruthless strategist, wields absolute mastery over insects, instilling fear...
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interesting start"So?" Victoria asked, leaning closer to Amy. "What's her name?"
Amy paused for a good half minute then huffed with a shrug. "I forgot…"
I'm sorry, I just can't get past that first scene, where a PRT agent blatantly just throws out the Unwritten Rules entirely by asking Panacea to verify if someone is a parahuman (which is likely a breach of patient confidentiality and would require a court order), and then tells Panacea her name.
If that got out, the PRT would be toast, and Panacea's reputation would be mud, and *Amy knows this*. You trust the healer because they will keep your secrets. That's why patient confidentiality is the bedrock of health care, and while Amy isn't licensed, she was said to be holding herself to that standard, hence why she had her reputation.
The rest of the story can be as fluffy as a freshly bathed Samoyed, but it doesn't get me over that the first scene takes a boulder to my suspension of disbelief.
But Victoria didn't corner Skitter during school. No, she cornered Taylor Hebert. And Taylor is a useless lesbian who stood no chance.
T/W: Mild Suicidal Ideation
Like the earlier chapter. Very mild, one off line but just a heads up for those it may bother.
Kind of lost interest with the Omake I was writing, mostly as it doesn't particularly line up with OP's interpretation of Emma (notably, Gowonzu's Emma is far less of a mess and far more sane).
Should I still finish and post it, or is there no interest?
Carol coming home to find that is a bigger reason to do it than Amy's angst.Taylor should just work that harem protagonist charm and grab PanPan too. Leaving her out, is like priming a nuke and walking away. Plus, I want to see Carol's face when she finds out that a villain charmed and slept with both her daughters.