Be funny if nothing else. Though I think the evolution method needs to be smoothed out a bit before its made known to anyone. Cause well if anyone else did what he did then all they would do is have a very pissed Ghost after them.
Counterpoint let her think she's "killed his dream" then go off and train some place secluded until your pokemon are capable of beating her for her title and go run your gym, instead he's let a spy into his camp so Agatha can leach his secrets off of him like a parasite to make herself stronger.
.I don't think Agatha wants to push him towards a life of crime and trying to press gang somebody is the best way to make them do things they would never consider.
And with a Pidgeot he can move pretty fast.
That's true she's obviously very powerful although not powerful enough to stop a 10 year old from steamrolling her. Agatha's power and influence should be limited to kanto and Johto so simply leave the region. I heard the Newmoon Island in Sinnoh are nice this time of year
I don't think Agatha wants to push him towards a life of crime and trying to press gang somebody is the best way to make them do things they would never consider.
no I'd perform the Saotome secret technique
That was me referencing Red from the game where you as Red start your journey as a preteen and apparently beat all the gyms leaders and the elite four and the champion before your even a teenager.
The Sinnoh was me suggesting he go pick up the full dark type legendary (darkrai) pokemon. there are also several ghost type legendary such as Marshadow, Lunala, and Giratina. Since the oc seems perfectly happy using his knowledge of the games and series it's confused me why he doesn't use it in this application
. Furthermore he doesn't have to be the one getting involved technlcally what Agatha was demanding information on are proprietary secrets and no smart dictator demands corporate secrets from an international company thay can and will pull out of the region if their corporate interests are under threat, and yes well the league might be omnipresent the elite four members are region specific. Besides I'm not sure the league would do anything as Ezra is participating in the gym battles since in the games the whole point of getting the gym badges was to earn the right to face the elite four and the regional champion to take there place. that means if Agatha made a fuss about a rising star it would look more like she's trying to preemptively remove her replacement thus interfering in their system of government.isn't that the point of fanfiction, you watch or read a story and wonder how you could have done it differently or what would happen if this character was inserted into the reality? don't get me wrong I'm not critcizing your writing or character I find your fanfiction to be some of the best written on this site (Hammer Time is one of my all-time favorite
) I was just confused that your oc didn't seem to take shit from anyone including other regional champions where he "capitulated" by humiliating them. The way it was written it seemed like Ezra met he's match. I was hoping for at least an aura clash after Agatha pointed out she knew about Ezra's and she tried to use her own aura to intimidate him. I was expecting him to hide the training methods not outright show them off to the spy in his camp, although if anyone else did the same Primeape training methods they probabliy end up dead. have I just not let you cook long enough?