So, before we get started, I figure I'll explain something real quick.
When I first started I...
When I first started I...
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Big Steve | 75 |
Your thread marks are screwed up. You have chapter one's ending coming before the beginning, and the beginning of chapter one coming after the beginning of chapter two.
I didn't see them talking about modifying the internal forcefield emitters anywhere in the chapter, just the ship's external emitters. If this is an oversight, you might want to add a blurb about it. If they didn't modify the internal emitters then you have a plot hole large enough to fly a starship through and Scotty died in that scene — Jem'hadar personal weapons are polaron-based.