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This is... umm. "Id," "Ego," and "Superego" aren't real things in psychology. Nobody competent is going to say anything like that in an assessment, and putting that line in there breaks SoD rather strongly.

Beyond that... well, it's a concept. I'll see where you're going with it before commenting further.

 

Why is she calling Danny Daniel? At first I thought she was in a bad place in her relationship with him but they seem fine. Better than canon even.

 

Interesting (and I caught the slight AU with Canary going for a retrial) but you seem to have problems with third-person pronouns becoming first-person.

Also, interesting Master power. Total control of one person, access to their active thought process while doing it, and mental invisibility. Regent will be supplanting Clockblocker in screaming "BULLSHIT!" to the skies.

 

It occurs to me that the means by which Taylor locates the subjects she controls hasn't been made explicit. If she can sense people in a two block radius, even if she only can control and mind-read one at a time, that's a decent thinker power on its own merits.

If Taylor has to see the person, OTOH, that's a serious limitation that'll push her closer to the frontlines. Also, can she implant commands to be followed later or is all her control instantaneous?

 

i guess, while controlling parahumans there may arise some difference

 

Wouldn't be surprised if she mastered him, that Daniel is both a persona and a way to distance her current father with the depressed houseplant Danny was.