Prince Charon
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So, do you have these already written and are posting them at a pace we can keep up with, or are you just that fast a writer?
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I assure you, to me, it is Flash levels of quick.I write them every day. At the beginning I had a chapter in advance but from I think the sixth or seventh part I lost that advance and so the chapter goes freshly written on the internet.
It takes me 1h30 to 2h to write them.I have no idea if this is quick or no.
God. This is really well writen.Episode 1: Kneeling Day part 11
THE HALL OF JUSTICE, WASHINGTON D.C
June,22,2010 09:45 AM
My choice is made, defend rather than attack support from the shadows rather than attack. Diana eyes me warily as she signals me I'm allowed to use my powers. Katar seems rather curious as he squeezes his mace's guard while his wings beat quickly in impatience.
"Sister of Magic whispered by many names. Sister of Fertility cut short by a brother's blade. Sister of Storms humbled by a son's revenge. Daughter of Earth trod upon by his own father. Daughter of Sky whose stars are like raiment on her skin. Mother of the Jackal that roams between this life and the next.
I saw you at the side of the Lord of Duat weeping for him. Your tears brought him back to life, your compassion back to health. Princess of Magic whose name is a knife howling in darkness. I invoke your name and your power Nephthys who stands alone, of a brother by a husband bereft, of a husband by a nephew bereft. By the tears you've shed, by the love you shared, by the power you wield I summon you to my help."
How much these gods differ from each other. This time I feel wormy darkness seek the way to my heart judging his flame at his taste, growing then encompassing the whole of my being. I feel the soft touch of healing flowing down my veins, a fierce protectiveness awakening beyond my eyes. I feel ancient words not uttered since the great house by the Nile was deserted dance and shiver on my tongue. My clothes don't change but under them I feel the cold kiss of bracelets and pectorals and necklaces of silver and bronze and tin and gold. Without looking at them I recognize them for what they are: The heart, the spine, the scarab and the knot. Potent symbols but where is my weapon? I needed not to ask for in my hand rests now a knotted cross, the cross of life wrought in amethyst.
Something must have changed for Diana and Katar' eyes are now appreciative. The Amazon Princess takes the time to indicate me the location of the accident, to the west of the Hall of Justice and order me to take no offensive action whatever I find there if not agreed by her. There's no need she says to risk my life if two heroes are in difficulty.
I have no intention to risk my hide if I can help it but I'm nearly sure it will come to that. It always does in these stories and I entered a world held in part by narrative laws. I know that because I see the connections now. Fate is real in this world it seems. At least I can fell his push and pull on me and them and even the mortals who stood in our presence. Each the hero of his own story, each dragging other characters along, all these stories making the great tragedy of life, death and rebirth.
What am I saying? It must be the influence of a goddess of magic doing something to my perceptions. I ask Vergil how to use my new gifts and he indicates me a way. While Diana and Katar fly away I turn away and hum a slow song in a tongue I don't understand while thinking upon them.
While Nephthys is not a goddess who leads the dead to their appointed place, she's proficient with magic and all sorcery works on connections. I've entered the story of the Justice League by meeting Batman and by my own desire to see them and serve them. I'm also in the story of the war of the Titans and the Gods and this incident could bear their mark. I go into a dark corner of the Hall.
The shadows docile and bidden open to let me step through them and rejoin the heroes.
The ecstasy of the joining quickly fades while I run across a bridge of living darkness towards the light. The ankh is still in my hand, even if I don't exactly understand what powers it can contain. An increased connection to magic is nice but can't replace the lore I haven't learned. Still fragments of spells, some I learned in my parallel knowing too well they didn't work, some I just heard whispered in my thoughts. Still I hope I won't have to use them. I hate using something without knowing all the rules.
I reemerge in front of the river, what it is named? I think I knew it once, read it in the Blue Tunics' comics. Not important. The stench of death is overflowing, coming from the two bridges I'm standing between. No obvious damage to the bridge themselves but even from here I see burning cars and bodies drifting beneath the water. I feel there are still people alive. I must go heal them and drag as many as I can out of here. I'm not seeing the two heroes though. Where are they?
My question is answered when I hear a body strike the water and Hawkman dive towards him, mace raised and ready to fall. Diana is pursuing another enemy in the sky, an enemy I don't see save as a silhouette of strange distorted angles.
Who are these guys? I don't remember seeing anything like them in the main D.C universe. Hawkman's enemy emerge from the water. What a ridiculous costume he's wearing. Skintight blue costume marked with a skull transpierced by a lightning bolt. He tries to join the bank but Katar strikes him before he does before dragging him on dry earth.
Wonder Woman is faring as well against her own enemy, fists finding weaknesses even in the deformed proportions of her opponent. She shows a violence that surprises me before I see her breaking what seems to be the creature's head with a kick. The bodies fall to pieces into the light. An illusion? And what would these clowns cause a massacre at the city's entrance?
"They didn't cause it, they were there as scapegoats." says Vergil in my thoughts
What, how can you say something like that? You don't even know this guy and his "companion"! Perhaps they are simply madmen like the Joker. What am I not seeing? I focus my eyes on the bodies in the river, hoping to see something beyond the ordinary. I feel the living, the dead and the… The dead!
I see them crawling from ruined cars, floating above broken bodies. They don't want to go. They don't understand they are gone. Some of them are trying to move their corpses and some will succeed, then their hunger will consume some other livings.
And among them, emerging from the water I see her. What she is I don't know but a single gaze makes me sure as Vergil she's responsible for this. Her skin is broken steel, with open wounds weeping burning oil. Her hair is ablaze, her tears blood. She could pass for human from a distance, neither ugly nor fair but up close her inhumanity is unmistakable. I know what she is. I know because I feel it. She's a thing of accidents, a younger sister of those who cause houses to crumble on their inhabitants and lightning to strike random. Vergil names her Druj, one of the lesser demons of Persian lore, daughter to the line of Ahriman.
At her side I see a man clad in green bearing… A triangle? A burning triangle he uses to warp space. This one is mortal, just carefully hidden by the twisting of the light on his flesh. An ingenious means of invisibility but one that does not conceal the flame of his life.
The druj turns her gaze to the fallen villain at Hawkman's feet as Katar flies to help Diana disperse another illusion. The blue-clad one rises soon pointing his hands to the Thanagarian and emitting a withering ray of energy striking home.
I know what's must be done. It was foolish to think it could have happened otherwise. Vergil breathes as I begin to intone the song that unlock my deeper powers. This time I'm rested and full so it shouldn't put me in a coma. My clothes fall off as my skin is covered with a tunic of fine linen and a leopard skin. My eyes are underlined by a trait of kohl and two feathered wings hang from my arms. I feel devotion to a land of opposites, of desolation and growth. I see great cities and statues swallowed by the sand. I hear the names of the judges of Duat for I'm one who stands with them in the hall where the dead are heard.
My hands are sheathed in energy as I run against my enemy for I'm part of Nephthys who loved her brother so much she weeps to raise him to his dark throne beneath the sands. My power surrounds Katar and Diana, not only healing them of the minor and major scrapes of the fight but shielding them in enchantments, twisting their story to make them impervious to harm. As a curtesy I destroy the complex bending of light that protects Wonder-woman from her gaze.
But my enemy is the druj and against a daemon I let power flow without restraint. The ankh in my hand is surrounded by shadow until is a perfectly serviceable sword. My mouth let pass words of powers as my eyes ever-discerning try to pick the secret of her essence. I'm going to cut her and destroy her. I have the power to do this, the right to do this.
She doesn't flee. Indeed, she counter-charges me, dodging my blade and let her own power loose, speaking to my lungs to let them be filled with scalding smoke, she lies to my bones to let them be broken, she lies to my eyes to let see her as slender as a willow wand, as inoffensive as one of the corpses she created.
She lies to my flesh and my flesh believes it. Even with the joining, with the power I got, I'm still hurt at the mercy of her embrace. She is strong. Stronger than she looks and with efforts she cast me in the river to drift before speaking orders and letting me drift among corpses.
I cling to consciousness despite the pain, despite the lies, despite the wounds. I try to reach the two senior heroes and for a moment I contend with the druj in this field, incantation against incantation, spell against spell, healing against healing and protections against protections. I don't even know if any of my armors really add anything to their already formidable protections but I still try. Corpses are all around me now as we flow downstream. I call the power a last time, trying to affect the outcome of the fight that continues above me.
Then the dead close their hands on my limbs and drag me beneath the surface.