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Kind of wish this had more of an explanation. Harry's a vampire now?Harry felt his fangs shifting longer before he bit into the man's throat, allowing his blood to flow down his throat while he slipped into his mind.
I've always had a bit of a soft spot for these Super Harry Isekai stories. The first chapter basically being a summary of his power-ups is a trend I could do without, though. Generally better to keep to the action and hint at the past as a relevant ability is used than go through it all at once like a shopping list. I think you still did better than the average there.
I quite like the idea of Harry being a minor lord in practice, with his lands and peoples on a chain around his neck.
Kind of wish this had more of an explanation. Harry's a vampire now?
I'm really enjoying the depth you've put into your expanded skyrim setting, though the minutia of currency (while realistic in its disorderliness) seems distracting. Without a solid idea of the purchasing power of the currency the exact amount of his income and expenses are meaningless. Even with a solid grasp of its value it doesn't really add anything to the story.