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The Ringing of a Forge of Stars [Warhammer 40k/ Celestial forge V3||OC...ish]

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Slider Zero, Apr 14, 2021.

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  1. Bear_Mint

    Bear_Mint The LewdBringer. The Ass Ponderer.

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    Probably overthinking himself into a conspiracy theory about the force being evil and that it is tricking him into letting his guard down. Emperor Alex Jones over here.
     
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  2. Slider Zero

    Slider Zero Know what you're doing yet?

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    Oh, Look!! Stuff I can answer without spoilers!!

    The Emperor, as well as certain high-level Chaos adepts/practitioners, were unaffected by the blackout. That being said, Emps Definitely knows that the Force is a thing now, and is observing the effects.

    I need to point this out again: the Force is Life. It runs through everything that lives, and is a part of the world. It operates on the principles of life, and thrives in those who allow themselves to actually live. This is the great secret of the force, and an extremely large reason why the Sith Ideology is a curse upon the galaxy far, far away. (the Sith Code is fine, and is emblematic of a very specific interpretation of the force that is very much not the Dark Side, as much as the Sith would like to think otherwise.)

    It is for this reason that the Force absolutely fucking HATES the mess that the Warp is right now, because the Immaterium is currently a perversion of life, granting only false choices and poisoned ideals, all the while acting as if it is the only concept that matters. The tumors devour souls while onlookers watch helpless to stop them. More than anything, the Force as it is here exists to offer those trapped in the not-choice of dealing with the warp solely for being a psyker, something that they would otherwise not have: A choice. a legit, and TRUE choice, not simply between death and damnation.

    as for how the Force would have reacted to a quiet warp? I see it as being less antagonistic and more symbiotic in that case, adding it's own powers and concepts to the greater whole.

    Peace is a lie. There is only Passion.
    Through Passion, I gain Strength.
    Through Strength, I gain Power.
    Through Power, I gain Victory.
    Through Victory my chains are Broken.
    The Force shall free me.


    The Code of the Sith actually has some really good insights on life and living, if you ignore everything else that comes with it.
    As for Emp's Face...well, let's just say that the camera that took the picture is now worth incalculable sums to the right beings...

    This is, sadly, an accurate assessment. The Emperor, for all of his strengths, has the most glaring weakness of all: The complete inability to recognize his own flaws. This is an instance where it is going to bite him in the ass through his own actions.
     
  3. Morkail

    Morkail I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    I’m still surprised everyone including the emperor acted to try and get a copy of the STC but the emperor completely failed to notice the one human pulling tech out his ass that humanity at it’s height couldn’t make.

    So did the prey version of the Sol system get dumped whole sale into 40k? Or is he in a separate dimension?
     
  4. Trieze

    Trieze The man from Nowhere, next stop Anywhere.

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    Beyond anything else, Slider Zero, an ironically unironic utterance of the phrase, "I feel a disturbance in the Force" should be mandatory on the Emperor's part. AlexJones!Emperor or not, that line's fuckin' memetic.

    Not only is it a literal description for what just happened, there's no way that, before the Cybernetic Revolt and then the Age of Strife, the original and prequel STAR WARS trilogies were NOT remade countless times over the millennia across a variety of different mediums.

    It's my headcanon that even at the height of the old Federation of Man, the STAR WARS saga/hexalogy is essentially held with the same sort of reverence and significance as the Shakespearean Henriad.
     
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  5. Slider Zero

    Slider Zero Know what you're doing yet?

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    [​IMG]

    We'll get to it in due time, don't worry.
     
  6. prussian-granadier

    prussian-granadier I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    will force abilities to become more common like both settings have powers associated with them, and although 90% of powers are similar there are some differences

    most noticeably how the warp is a dimension and can be used offensively as one

    it's possible that the warp with giving knowledge of hyperspace to its wielders but a lot of techs still requires the warp in some capacity

    and I don't think that the force can take the souls of people

    this will lead to a situation where its harder for cults and rogue players to destroy stuff but easier for chaos to consolidate

    I can see force daemons and warp daemons combine forces

    plus we have necrons and the Tyranids, both of which are similar to galaxy ending treats in star wars
     
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  7. prussian-granadier

    prussian-granadier I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    the force would hate the emperor, it would look down on him as an enemy of life amd thus fight against him

    and since the astro-navigators no longer need the astronomical there is no reason for them not to go out of the galaxy, like the large mangellan cloud and the halo stars
     
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  8. Ajlove

    Ajlove Not too sore, are you?

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    I wonder how the Chaos Gods feel about this
     
  9. Acolyte

    Acolyte Know what you're doing yet?

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    Ok nice chapter but i am confused.

    Because the memories thing doesn't make any sense. Becaues it couldn’t have happened in the past, because the MC has a perk for preventing that from happening. The only explanation with that in mind is that he has been given false memories to help with the perk, but that doesn't make any sense because others are reacting as if his memories are true.

    There is a problem here that means wither his perk failed. Is his forge broken or something it doesn't seem to be working properly. Seriously his perks aren't working properly, especially how his ships were fucked up when he got them and how his hanger isn't working properly.
     
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  10. souvikkundu

    souvikkundu I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Does introduction of force impacted warp Tears like maelstrom or Eye?
     
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  11. Lotor

    Lotor Prince of Planet Doom

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    Considering the Warp Tumors are atemporal and exist both in the past, present, AND future... they must be freaking the fuck out at being so diminished. Because they just lost... nearly every soul they could have taken in the future. That would be such a gigantic blow to their power base alone...

    ...Yeah. Shit is about to hit the fan.

    I really, really want an Emperor PoV right about now.

    Because he might be smiling. Especially if he remembers Star Wars.
     
  12. Bear_Mint

    Bear_Mint The LewdBringer. The Ass Ponderer.

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    Oh no. The Emperor's inability to recognize character flaws and empathy resulting in catastrophic failure? Sounds like Horus Heresy 2 is going to happen. :V
     
  13. Ghost in a Wall

    Ghost in a Wall Making the rounds.

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    It would be halarious if Emp's misunderstands things to the point of beliveing that Satori became a major Warp entity (the Force) in order to spite the 4, and help humanity.

    It'd be the best kind of misunderstanding and it'd be halarious.​
     
  14. ImmortalEmperor34

    ImmortalEmperor34 Getting out there.

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    Another excellent chapter thank you
     
  15. Toguro

    Toguro Not too sore, are you?

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    I would only be mildly surprised if the switch killed Big E :confused:
     
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  16. Unravenan

    Unravenan Not too sore, are you?

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    Trazyn the Infinite would love to buy/take it from you at all costs!
     
  17. ImmortalEmperor34

    ImmortalEmperor34 Getting out there.

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    When reading this I can’t help but wonder if the random jumps will send them to horror worlds
     
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  18. ImmortalEmperor34

    ImmortalEmperor34 Getting out there.

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    If so I approve
     
  19. caspian1a

    caspian1a I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    I hope the author expands more on Aura(TGWP version) and the Soul in general.
     
  20. prussian-granadier

    prussian-granadier I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    few horror worlds are a challenge to satori now

    like what is Jason going to do against someone who can fly into space
     
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  21. Slider Zero

    Slider Zero Know what you're doing yet?

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    TGWP Aura is a bit more...complex than normal Aura. I'd have to do some research into the exact mechanics for it before implementation. Other than that, it's a good concept.
     
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  22. caspian1a

    caspian1a I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    I mean the MC has TGWP Aura because the perk he got that awakened his Aura was from there plus he said that the version he had was more complex to wield and control than the basic version from canon RWBY.
    Edit: Sorry my mistake. I checked which perk he got that awakened his aura and it was Tinkerer from the normal RWBY jump rather than a TGWP perk.
     
  23. ImmortalEmperor34

    ImmortalEmperor34 Getting out there.

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    I just had an interesting thought satori in dues ex
     
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  24. caspian1a

    caspian1a I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Slider Zero how does Aura interact with Psyker abilities and the Warp in general?
     
  25. Stormin5532

    Stormin5532 Getting out there.

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    Pfft, Emperor Alex Jones.

    "THERES CHEMICALS IN THE WARP TURNING MY SPACE MARINES GAY!"
     
  26. ImmortalEmperor34

    ImmortalEmperor34 Getting out there.

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    I wonder if satori will build a megastructure
     
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  27. ImmortalEmperor34

    ImmortalEmperor34 Getting out there.

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    Perhaps he can use Talos 1
     
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