DeAnno
Power over Versatility
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I think you're overselling the crap factor of pre-Levi Brockton Bay. It was bad but no worse than any other major city.
I'd feel safer walking on the streets of RL Baltimore.
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I think you're overselling the crap factor of pre-Levi Brockton Bay. It was bad but no worse than any other major city.
That's because you have a warped view of both places. Nothing pre-Levi seems to suggest that Brockton Bay is anything worse than a lot of major American cities. There are some places that are in fact dangerous to go out at night, but it's not a warzone.
Do you mean RL (in which case Taylor's own situation screams that it's worse), or in-setting (which I'd want to see proof of, but wouldn't really need much, because Worm).That's because you have a warped view of both places. Nothing pre-Levi seems to suggest that Brockton Bay is anything worse than a lot of major American cities.
RL. Brockton Bay pre-Levi is no worse than Detroit or LA in the 90s. It's crime ridden but it's not a war zone.Do you mean RL (in which case Taylor's own situation screams that it's worse),
Except when parahumans get to fighting. Then the collateral damage gets real, fast.RL. Brockton Bay pre-Levi is no worse than Detroit or LA in the 90s. It's crime ridden but it's not a war zone.
Like SWAT teams.There's a reason the PRT wear body armour and carry heavy weapons, even though they're there to deal with one percent of one percent of the population
Only, you know, more so.
SWAT teams staffed by people with training to make the military special forces look like rank amateurs.
Exactly. BB was unusually shitty compared to an average RL US city.Pre-Leviathan BB was a shithole. The boatyard had shut down local shipping, large chunks of the city were abandoned, the gangs were larger than the local Protectorate, law enforcement was generally ineffective and the whole thing was on a hair's edge of blowing up into a massive gang-war. The national guard was called in (or was going to be called in) to help deal with the extreme crime rate.
Leviathan's attack just wrecked the physical situation to match the social situation.
Don't worry,where one door closes.... another one opens...
I do like Taylor's canon set quite a bit. I am hoping this isn't just a mundane Taylor story, since what's the fun of joining E88 if you aren't even a cape.
Oh, most definitely.
Turning, I took two steps away from her. That was when something smashed into the back of my head, sent me sprawling forward on to the linoleum, head ringing. My glasses had gone somewhere, I didn't know where. Waves of blackness came and went. I heard shouts, screaming, bellows from Bronson.
"Sophia Hess hit me in the back of the head," I stated grimly. "I hit my jaw on the ground."
She stared at me. "Sophia Hess? The girl who does track?"
"What happened to Sophia Hess?" insisted the nurse.
"I didn't see," I told her honestly. "I was flat on my face, and my glasses were being trod on at the time." I indicated my obviously-bent glasses on the tray next to me.
"Oh." She didn't ask me any more questions.
So Sophia just attacks Taylor from behind, and no one in authority asks a single question about the fact that Sophia attacked Taylor, focusing solely on the 'attack' on Sophia -- which, btw, is legally 100% self-defense (defense of another is considered the same as self-defense, legally) -- Now making the POLICE accessories, through negligence, to the illegal behavior of Sophia."Hey, kid, this is a serious matter," the male officer snapped. "She was seriously injured."
"Good," I mumbled.
"Good?" He was on his feet, shouting. "GOOD?"
I raised my head. "Yeah. Good. Because I'm the one she punched in the back of the fucking head and gave a concussion to, just before she got the shit kicked out of her. Now fuck off and call my Dad before I choose to sue the school, the police department and everyone in between."
Closing my eyes, I laid my head back down on my arms.
They didn't ask me any questions after that, either.
And now Sophia, herself, is guilty of an outright hate crime, in front of dozens of witnesses. A hate crime is in a whole different league than a "prank gone wrong." And it's fully possible some of the witnesses were E88 (oh yea, btw, Sophia and Emma just became E88 enemy #1 with THIS stunt; even if it wasn't on someone they were protecting or involved with, this was an outright attack on E88, and requires a response)."What the fuck?" I gasped.
Plastered all over my locker, with some having drifted to the floor, were dozens and dozens of photos; Nazi flags, pictures of emaciated people staring through barbed wire, tanks rolling across rivers. Pictures of Hitler giving speeches.
And over it all, a stench, as of something rotten.
Emma and Sophia stood off to the side, smugly satisfied. Oddly, I didn't see Madison anywhere.
"What the fuck is this?" I demanded, looking at Sophia. It was her, of course. It couldn't be anyone else.
But it was Emma who spoke.
"Looks like someone gave you a change in décor, Hebert," she sneered. "Given that you're in the Empire Eighty-Eight. There's your cultural background, right there."
I turned away from her, ripped some of the photos down, threw them to the ground. "I'm not in the Empire," I snapped. "I just want to be left -"
As I spoke, I was unlocking my locker, wanting to see what they'd done to cause the godawful smell.
I saw.
It was a third full of … garbage. Rotting garbage. Food scraps, dirty diapers, sour vomit, and everything else that could possibly cause a distressing smell. There might not have been a dead skunk in there, but I would never have been able to prove it. The smell hit me then, full on, and I bent over to throw up.
That was when Sophia grabbed me by the hair and shoved me into the locker.
The door banged shut, bruising my legs, and I heard the lock click.
I was locked in with the stench and the garbage.
And then I heard a voice outside. Peter's voice. Blessed, blessed Peter.
"Taylor!" he called. "Taylor! What's the combination?"
"HELP! GET ME OUT!" I screamed, near hysteria.
"The lock!" he bellowed. "The combination!"
He wanted the combination to the lock. The lock that would let me out.
The combination is …
Come on, it's …
My mind was a blank, all logical thought chased out by the incredible stench.
"I DON'T KNOW!"
"Taylor! I believe in you! You can do it!"
My mind snapped into focus. I screamed the combination so loudly that my ears rang. Then I retched again.
An interminable time later, the lock clicked open. The door swung wide.
I fell out of the locker, into Peter's arms. Despite the fact that I was covered in vomit and with various noisome substances, he held me tightly.
I clung to him. I never wanted to let him go.
The PRT was contacted, and they told the cops to find out who attacked Sophia as their main priority.So Sophia just attacks Taylor from behind, and no one in authority asks a single question about the fact that Sophia attacked Taylor, focusing solely on the 'attack' on Sophia -- which, btw, is legally 100% self-defense (defense of another is considered the same as self-defense, legally) -- Now making the POLICE accessories, through negligence, to the illegal behavior of Sophia.
And do the police's stance seem to scream that they know Sophia's a Ward? The police aren't supposed to have that info, if they find out a cape's involved in any capacity the PRT's called in.
One thing I'm noticing is everyone assuming that Sophia should be punished for the fight, one angel I'm not sure has been looked at is would they reward her? Crazy right, but hear me out.
From an outside perspective the Black Ward was beaten up by E88 members to the point where she had broken bones. The people saying she attacked first were E88.
If I just heard that story with no context I'd say the Racists jumped her. Now we haven't heard what the other whitenesses have said, but it wouldn't be outlandish if Emma and co's story was to the effect of "the Big White Racist was about to attack Emma and Sophia jumped in." Throw in a comment about Taylor getting hit on back swing and to an outside perspective the narrative becomes "the Black Ward jumped in to save her friend from the racists, getting injured in the process. The Gang members say she started it, but they also used Racial slurs in their statements. The suspect also fled from the scene so he seems guilty already. If he was really in the right why would he run? That other girl was hurt but she's the weird loner who has been causing trouble lately."
With that as the narrative and with no context I'm hearing "rush that hero to Panecea and get her a medal. She's a real hero in and out of costume"
Of course this all goes out the window with the locker, but that's still how I see the outside perpsective on the fight going and why Sophia was likely not punished and was even fast tracked for healing
The interview would have gone through, and Taylor would have told the cops that she thought Sophia was the culprit, but as she didn't see her (and as the above story was making the rounds) nothing would have come of it.There should have been an interview set up for Taylor after the concussion healed, especially given the fact that she was injured to begin with. Any detective worth their salt would be sure to get an interview from EVERYONE who was injured in the incident.
This is Winslow. They paid off Danny just enough to get out of a lawsuit, in canon. They don't care.Also, the school SERIOUSLY fucked up by not sending Taylor to the hospital as well. That one could potentially cost the school nurse her job (if any complications arose from the concussion). ANY head injury that has a potential effect on the brain requires the school to send the student to the hospital, even a minor concussion requires the school to send the student to the hospital for tests. This one may not actually be written out as a law, but it is a liability thing required by the insurance companies, which in some ways makes it MORE important to follow, lol.
Even a minor concussion comes with the possibility of a brain hemorrhage after all, and if they don't send the student to the hospital, and the student dies or suffers serious consequences as a result... The insurance won't cover the wrongful death lawsuit, and no school has the millions of dollars to spare to handle that themselves.
The main job of an insurance policy, in the insurance company's mind, is to make sure someone else is responsible for anything that happens that they might need pay for. This means businesses and ESPECIALLY government institutions (like a public school) do everything they can to follow them to the letter... and this is stuff enforced from MUCH higher on the food chain than Blackwell.
Also, any EMT, nurse, or even primary care physician, that waves a a flashlight in your eyes to check for a concussion, and gets a positive response knows that it means to send them to the professionals; because they're not qualified to deal with brain injuries.
Yes. It does.And now Sophia, herself, is guilty of an outright hate crime, in front of dozens of witnesses. A hate crime is in a whole different league than a "prank gone wrong." And it's fully possible some of the witnesses were E88 (oh yea, btw, Sophia and Emma just became E88 enemy #1 with THIS stunt; even if it wasn't on someone they were protecting or involved with, this was an outright attack on E88, and requires a response).
Yeah, she went, "Empire Eighty-Eight? This isn't fun any more."And Madison herself seems to have not participated in this one; I'm curious whether this was because of the new content to the "prank," or her doing the smart thing and backing off after Sophia got beat down.
Shitstorm is coming in hard.I greatly look forward to Blackwell's response to THIS (is the shitstorm finally here? Please tell me the shitstorm's finally here). Also, please include an interlude where you show Piggot learning about everything. I wanna know what she knows and, more importantly, what she doesn't know... and her reaction to, I guess![]()
So, Taylor avoids the trigger (or does she? Possible Thinker Trigger there -- and it's got all the right elements -- but no disorientation, so I doubt it). I hope it's not going to be a Taylor without powers fic, and wait with baited breath (and mild horror) as to what Taylor's Trigger will be (perhaps finding out Peter's been playing her from the start).
Looks good.As a side note... I don't often use "--", did I use them correctly?
The police higher-ups were told to specifically find out about who hit Sophia. The terms "Empire Eighty-Eight" and "hate crime" were bandied about.*edit- tried spoilering the quote blocks, but it cut off the quotes and you couldn't expand them...
Also added in a fairly significant point about the police's attitude.
Good, good.
possibly one more than one front, and on that note:
Please tell me Quinn Calle is involved. Even better, Carol on Sohpia's side. Calle vs Carol with Calle on the side of 'truth and justice', oh the irony.
What we see and hear changes us. Even if we don't really approve of it or think about it. Peter showed approval of her using the word 'black' (note he did not use the word 'nigger' after the first time) and so it crops up when she thinks about Sophia. Because on some level, even though she still doesn't really approve of the E88's methods and goals, she likes Peter and wants his approval.Taylor would be more differentiated. She would omit the "black" in black bitch, at the very least in her inner monologue, maybe justify to herself, that she's making a deal with the devil out of simple pragmatism. maybe telling herself that peter is simply repeating what he grew up with, that he's a Nazi not out of hate, but out of tradition. That she can't fault him for helping his parents.
Taylor hates Sophia. Instead of having to feel self conscious when she voices it, she gets back positive feedback. This happens for months. Without noticing she starts using harsher language. Meaner slurs.
Note that Taylor has not yet triggered. We never get a first-hand look at Taylor pre-trigger. Her trigger changed her. Her shard began to influence her thoughts from day one, and a corollary of this is that her thoughts were less able to be molded by outside influences. This Taylor here? Even more desperate to be accepted somewhere, by someone.Yeah, but there are many people who can do it and even more can learn. I never bought a Pokemon Card or smoked a cigarette or drank any alcohol.(Apart from one time when I turned 16 as a conscious decision to try.) Sure, there were always negative social reactions, but I knew what they were and ignored them. Lost some friends that way, in that a third of our social group disliked me, but I always preferred it.
Taylor wouldn't. She needs those relationships, she's starved for companionship.
Taylor could easily become an E88 member in this way. But her inner monologue wouldn't be like that. Falling in line with him in her own thoughts this way is... unlike Taylor.