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Fate/Great War I
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Disclaimer: I do not own the Fate series, it is own by Type-Moon and Nasu himself.
This thread is dedicated by a fanfic called "Fate Great War" by General Ironox, I do not recommended reading that if you don't like grammar errors that is as bad as open can of baby food.
The Holy Grail War of Fuyuki.
Also known as Heaven's Feels, it is a ritual created by the three founding family: Einzburn, Tohsaka and Makiri families. Its original intention was to open the ways to Akasha. It has been ongoing for two hundred years all due to a single fact:
The Grail can only grant a single wish.
Because of the, it has become a competition between the seven magi, who grant the ability to summon what everyone called "Heroic Spirit" as servant. However, it original intention was to use the servant as a fuel to open the ways from the root, by using seven different class to conceal their true identity:
Saber, Servant of Swords
Archer, Servant of the Bows
Lancer, Servant of Spears
Rider, Servant of Mount.
Caster, Servant of Mages.
Assassin, Servant of the Shadow.
And Berserker, Servant of Madness.
With these Servants, surely they can create the doorstep of the Akasha and learn it secrets.
It didn't.
In the first two war, both the Einzburn and the Makiri has change due to greed and immortality respectively.
And then the third war happen.
The Einzburn, who has lost in both war, decided to tweaking the grail, in a desperate attempt to claim the Holy Grail by summoning a Servant Avenger, who is unfortunately the first servant to be defeated.
Avenger, however, is not a hero, nor a innocent soul that was sweep upon the Holy Grail War.
No.
What it is... what it was...
It is Sin.
It is Evil.
It is the World of All the Sin and Evil.
Angra Mainyu, the God of Evil.
It is everything mankind hate, loathed and abhor itself. All and much more has been pour into the holy grail, corrupting it until what once was is no longer. There was no holiness about the blackened Grail, the hellish monstrosity summoned forth by Avenger see it to that quite well.
However, even in the deepest darkness... there can be a spark.
A single spark that can end the corruption that is Angra Mainyu. It is a soul, a soul of a person who has sacrifice herself willingly so that a share dream can be realize.
The Grail has been corrupted, controlled by the World of all Evil.
But there is enough of the original core of her original self.
That retain...
That remember...
That she know that the Grail has to be destroyed.
However, after the event of the fourth grail war, something unexpected has happened.
She knew that she need a help, a outside help, in order to stop the Grail from giving birth of Angra Mainyu itself. However, she no longer has access to the servants, everything being taken over by Angra Mainyu.
So in the last gamble, she decided to use one thing she has dreaded to uses.
She going to use the sub classes.
Even if someone summon a dangerous servant from a certain class, she has no choice but to use it if she want to destroy the Grail and Angra Mainyu.
[Ten years later]
[Prologue quest choice]
[ ]Leaving the death behind(Totsuka)
[ ]The Warrior Queen and the young Mercenary(Akuseru)
[ ]The Legendary Thief(Zenka)
[ ]The four men on duty
This thread is dedicated by a fanfic called "Fate Great War" by General Ironox, I do not recommended reading that if you don't like grammar errors that is as bad as open can of baby food.
The Holy Grail War of Fuyuki.
Also known as Heaven's Feels, it is a ritual created by the three founding family: Einzburn, Tohsaka and Makiri families. Its original intention was to open the ways to Akasha. It has been ongoing for two hundred years all due to a single fact:
The Grail can only grant a single wish.
Because of the, it has become a competition between the seven magi, who grant the ability to summon what everyone called "Heroic Spirit" as servant. However, it original intention was to use the servant as a fuel to open the ways from the root, by using seven different class to conceal their true identity:
Saber, Servant of Swords
Archer, Servant of the Bows
Lancer, Servant of Spears
Rider, Servant of Mount.
Caster, Servant of Mages.
Assassin, Servant of the Shadow.
And Berserker, Servant of Madness.
With these Servants, surely they can create the doorstep of the Akasha and learn it secrets.
It didn't.
In the first two war, both the Einzburn and the Makiri has change due to greed and immortality respectively.
And then the third war happen.
The Einzburn, who has lost in both war, decided to tweaking the grail, in a desperate attempt to claim the Holy Grail by summoning a Servant Avenger, who is unfortunately the first servant to be defeated.
Avenger, however, is not a hero, nor a innocent soul that was sweep upon the Holy Grail War.
No.
What it is... what it was...
It is Sin.
It is Evil.
It is the World of All the Sin and Evil.
Angra Mainyu, the God of Evil.
It is everything mankind hate, loathed and abhor itself. All and much more has been pour into the holy grail, corrupting it until what once was is no longer. There was no holiness about the blackened Grail, the hellish monstrosity summoned forth by Avenger see it to that quite well.
However, even in the deepest darkness... there can be a spark.
A single spark that can end the corruption that is Angra Mainyu. It is a soul, a soul of a person who has sacrifice herself willingly so that a share dream can be realize.
The Grail has been corrupted, controlled by the World of all Evil.
But there is enough of the original core of her original self.
That retain...
That remember...
That she know that the Grail has to be destroyed.
However, after the event of the fourth grail war, something unexpected has happened.
She knew that she need a help, a outside help, in order to stop the Grail from giving birth of Angra Mainyu itself. However, she no longer has access to the servants, everything being taken over by Angra Mainyu.
So in the last gamble, she decided to use one thing she has dreaded to uses.
She going to use the sub classes.
Even if someone summon a dangerous servant from a certain class, she has no choice but to use it if she want to destroy the Grail and Angra Mainyu.
[Ten years later]
[Prologue quest choice]
[ ]Leaving the death behind(Totsuka)
[ ]The Warrior Queen and the young Mercenary(Akuseru)
[ ]The Legendary Thief(Zenka)
[ ]The four men on duty
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[London street, 8:15 PM]
The street of London is not like a empty street. The people walk by the town, car passing the street and guard patrolling the night. It is a street where peaceful day arrive in London.
Not that it mattered to a thief like him.
A person, obscure by a shadow, run along the rooftop from a building to another building, heading for his destination.
Then he stop on the edge of the rooftop, in front of him a clock tower. This person is a boy, at sixteen at best, his face is hidden from his black long hooded cloak with a piece of a black cloth covering his mouth and nose. Under his cloak is a black shirt underneath the bulletproof vest and black long pant with legging on it.
Despite the peaceful day in London, it fall prey, like other city around the world, to a thieve in the dark night.
The most notorious is the infamous criminal that has appeared since before the Sengoku Era. The legendary Black Thief the XX.
You see, in every generation, there would always be a person, clothed with black cloak, skirmish around the city to steal the most valuable of the city. This people is nicknamed Black Thiefs, known for their unpredictable scheming, uncatchableuncatchable and always get away without a trace.
If Jack the Ripper is the ultimate killer, then the Black Thiefs is the ultimate thief.
And now, Black Thief the XX is once again planning to steal something valuable, something that would be worth it....
.... something that would, without a doubt, invoke the Queen's wrath....
[Unknown Dungeon, London]
The dungeon is a dangerous place to be, even for someone like him. It crawling with thing he shouldn't discover, thing that wouldn't be possible in this modern era.
"Damn it, why did I decided to use this route again?" the Black Thief ask himself as he is surrounded by Golem, with him carrying a katana on his hand, which is surrounded with a black lighting.
"This just going to be a pretty damn long night." he said as he make a stances.
[ ]Fight the Golem
-[ ]Stunt
[ ]Create a diversion in order to escape
-[ ]Stunt
QM's note: Black Thief is not a self-insert, it is a actual OC I name it even before register.
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You'll be amaze once you find out about him.
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[X]Create a diversion in order to escape
-[X]Attempt to blind the golems and slip past before they can recover.
The Black Thief look around himself, knowing the he's surrounded by Golems with no way to escape.
Well, to anyone who isn't prepare.
He smirk as he pull out something from his coat, then with his eyes clothes, pull the pin out and throw into the air.
Instantly, the area is been covered with white as the flashbang detonated, forcing the golems to cover their eyes. At that moment, he sprint through, able to escape them.
As he keep running, he pull out a grappling hook before aiming at the air vent and fire. The hook snatch at the air duck, which is pulled out of it, before he jump toward the vent and enter.
"Whew, that was a close call." the thief said in relief as he crawl through the vent, looking for a place.
Black Thief grunted as he kick the vent open, allowing him to get out of the air vent he's in.
As he got up, he look around to see where he's at. "Bingo." he muttered quietly as he finally found the places he's looking.
Catalyst.
A room full of Catalyst.
He been hire by too many people who want him to steal a certain catalyst they needed for the upcoming grail war.
He smirk as he pull out the list of artifacts he'll be stealing.
Which is a total of 23 of them.
"This could be a long night."
Some time later...
"And that the last one." the thief said as he found the last catalyst he need to steal. He nodded to himself as he look around...
And then the door burst open.
"There the thief!" one of the guard yelled as they went into him, who sighed as he pull out his bo-staff. "And I were wondering when will you be coming."
[ ]Knock them down each and single one of them.
-[ ]Stunt
[ ]Look for a escape route
-[ ]User the gears should a situation arrive
-[X]Attempt to blind the golems and slip past before they can recover.
The Black Thief look around himself, knowing the he's surrounded by Golems with no way to escape.
Well, to anyone who isn't prepare.
He smirk as he pull out something from his coat, then with his eyes clothes, pull the pin out and throw into the air.
Instantly, the area is been covered with white as the flashbang detonated, forcing the golems to cover their eyes. At that moment, he sprint through, able to escape them.
As he keep running, he pull out a grappling hook before aiming at the air vent and fire. The hook snatch at the air duck, which is pulled out of it, before he jump toward the vent and enter.
"Whew, that was a close call." the thief said in relief as he crawl through the vent, looking for a place.
Black Thief grunted as he kick the vent open, allowing him to get out of the air vent he's in.
As he got up, he look around to see where he's at. "Bingo." he muttered quietly as he finally found the places he's looking.
Catalyst.
A room full of Catalyst.
He been hire by too many people who want him to steal a certain catalyst they needed for the upcoming grail war.
He smirk as he pull out the list of artifacts he'll be stealing.
Which is a total of 23 of them.
"This could be a long night."
Some time later...
"And that the last one." the thief said as he found the last catalyst he need to steal. He nodded to himself as he look around...
And then the door burst open.
"There the thief!" one of the guard yelled as they went into him, who sighed as he pull out his bo-staff. "And I were wondering when will you be coming."
[ ]Knock them down each and single one of them.
-[ ]Stunt
[ ]Look for a escape route
-[ ]User the gears should a situation arrive
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[X]Look for a escape route
I assume knocking them down would simply lead to an escape on our part anyway. Also, grammar could use some improvements. Also, someone's in trouble if they're relying on us to steal every catalyst for the Grail War from a single location.
I assume knocking them down would simply lead to an escape on our part anyway. Also, grammar could use some improvements. Also, someone's in trouble if they're relying on us to steal every catalyst for the Grail War from a single location.
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Yep, and getting a XP too.
Yeah, sorry for the error, I'm looking for someone who can point out some grammar errors.
Unfortunately yes, although I don't want to spoiler alert as to who.