you really just cannot restrain yourself can you?
who wants this? Who has been demanding to know exactly how big the SI's dick is? You love writing about the Mando sex culture and how everyone's having sex and it's great, but why, in the name of everything under the stars, did you feel the need to halt the narration to remark on the perfect protagonists enormous cock? What's the point? I just don't get it
apart from that, I felt this chapter was an unnecessarily dark and extreme series of events, which were therefore rather jarring. I thought Voss was a silly villain more appropriate for moustache twirling than actual menace, bur whatver, those are subjective
But why the dick description? A prediction for naboo:
'Cam ran down the corridor at Theed palace, trying to get to Natalie Portman to bang her and become the Space King he was born to be, but a strange clanging noise alerted all the guards and droids around to his presence
"watch out cam" said one of the mandalorian fluffers, "you have such enormous balls that you're scraping the corridor and we can't get through to kiss your arse while you defeat the enemy"
"don't worry dumbasses" said the Space King-designate, "I'll use my 'lightsaber'"
amazed, the Mandos grovelled on the floor, "he means his dick right?" Whispered one of them who was new at this sort of thing