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One of my pet peeves as a reader is that when a new guy comes in town, everyone and their mother be friendly to them. I mean, Mia just slapped a 7 feet hyena with no fear! —And I'm noticing how Damnachi author's make Mia as a God fearing person. Please, please no— I mean, people are still...
You busy saying he sad. His brain was/is rewired, non? It is possible that he doesn't think like a human at this point. You can't stare at reality in the face and come out fine. His perspective is distorted and warped. Perhaps....
The story is exceptional. The only thing lacking is what the above commenters advised. There's no depth to your story. We don't know the description of the Mc or anything else, really.
And, for the love of god, please don't make him a wimp. The way he died saving the girl is dreadful enough...
Interesting story. Does the Cog really see darkness when it closes it's eyes? Does it's brain really can't comprehend the vastness of the universe?
Continue to suprise me, dear author.