Author Note: I've finally succumbed to the lure of the guilty pleasure that are multicrossover...
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I do try.Wow you didn't just take the train off the rails you sent it off a cliff... into the sea....
Oops... the name should have been Charles Gordon. Great, now I have to fix than on four different websites.A strange man who everyone thinks just petrified a cat and left a threat on a wall appears in the Gryffindor dorms. And only Harry and the Weasley twins try to stop him. House of the brave indeed.
Interesting that Flamel differentiates the Gods and the Void Pretenders. Then again Wizard history dates back pretty far.
? is Charles Brown from 1965 Charlie Brown? WTF is this a Harry Potter/SG-1/Peanuts crossover?
Then it rebooted. "You got robbed, they'd have sold me for a bag of Walker crisps, any flavor, and still consider themselves ahead.""Custody papers, at least until the end of the year, signed and filed. You aunt and uncle aren't the worst of people but they're down there, they sold you for a bar of gold."
Harry's brain stopped working.
Not untrueThen it rebooted. "You got robbed, they'd have sold me for a bag of Walker crisps, any flavor, and still consider themselves ahead."
Well, maybe not that far. Vernon did invest in a rundown island somewhere, and he apparently went through the rigmarole that is the British gun acquisition hell, so he's not quite that cheap.Then it rebooted. "You got robbed, they'd have sold me for a bag of Walker crisps, any flavor, and still consider themselves ahead."
This a very cool concept and I am VERY MUCH down to see where this goes.
I love the story so far. It is also very unique compared to others I have read before. The writing is excellent.
Thanks. I'm not exactly keeping a chart of 'cliches to avoid' but I wouldn't have bothered writing this at all if I didn't have new roads to tread, so it's nice to know I succeeded.The story is still dodging all the cliche scenes, and the 12 year old are fully mature adult tropes. Not to mention showing straight out mistakes by characters. Awesome. Hope we see Harry grow and start trusting his friends with his secrets.
That was certainly the idea. Also, the 'poor almighty house elves' trope has been done to death.Interesting origin for House-elves Merlin pulled Fey irony off perfectly.
"Cursed pucks," Nicolas explained anyway. "Hobgoblins. They went around doing chores for people just so they could pretend offense at the spooked residents, whom they would then torment viciously and without end, often to injurious or outright fatal consequences. A fair few people they even drove to suicide. They eventually switched one too many babies with their changelings – their glamored offspring – so Merlin worked together with the ancestor spirits of all the British Isles to give them a place in man's household like they always wanted. Now they go suicidally mad if left alone, which is precisely the sort of ironic fairy logic that made the curse work on them to begin with. Well, unless they earn their freedom by human standards. Merlin was harsh, not heartless. All the same, though, don't give them clothes unless you're absolutely convinced they'll be better off. Or you want to punish them, spirits know plenty of them continue to earn it to this day."
She was worried Harry might be stuck as a twelve year-old.The Golden Trio eats mayo well now I'm rooting for the villains. I might not be following quite right but if I am Collin plays dnd and was arguing with someone about the spheres? Wonder what was up with Hermione's panic, is the Elixir of Life said to be addictive or something?
Okay, no one older except her and any leftovers from the same generation, my bad.Wasn't one of the exam proctors the same woman that supervised Dumbledore's exams or am I getting confused ?
Yeah, that's the one from the movie-only props. I'm inclined to go with a long lifespan, but only for really powerful wizards, and never enough to eclipse the Elixir of Life. Otherwise the family trees we see in canon wouldn't have so many generations and changes of leadership over time. The natural deaths and power changeovers don't happen nearly rarely enough for multi-century lifespans to be credibly considered standard. Hell, the Black and Potters seem to advance and expire generationally at a rate pretty much similar to normal people, even when murder isn't involved.In addition, there are newspapers that have stated that a wizard is over 700 years old (older than the Flamels... though not sure if we were supposed to believe it or not).