When I said vulgarity it wasn't just smut. It was also saying curse words like fuck, or toning down the blood/guts stuff like that. Going from an R rating to a PG-13 if you want a different analogy. But I like the build up and tension. The laying out of battlelines mixed in with a brief overview of the geography and forces arms. Makes a skirmish against Brigands feel epic.
You read the part where it talks about how the Queen has to balance the spirts she invokes?
And what you like about update?