Questionable Questing

Yep. He was meant to be a reflection of Charlie Morningstar herself, by acting as the more naive innocent version of her that existed before her couple hundred year exile on earth, but he's kind of become his own character at this point. Still keeping the naming convention because it fits very well and I love how he calls her Miss Morningstar since it reveals a lot about his character.

And avoids saying his own name again

Exactly, but how was the small snippet? I had to edit out a decent chunk of it and it's obviously in need of a lot more editing, but for a general feel for their voices what did you think?

Let me read it

I really like the difference of romancing compared to seducing and her placing the orange delicately in her drink

Nice. I hope the older style of talking isn't too distracting. I had open Robin Crusoe and some Dickenson the entire time I was writing comparing the two and deliberately trying to make my stuff sound less modern.

While she's obviously a very different character, a couple hundred years would do that to anyone, I hope I was able to include at least a little bit of the Original Charlie's personality bleeding through.

The older style is fine and Charlie feels unique here. Your own design

Thanks. She's an interesting character to write and that's what's important. But I sleep. You too. It'll help you feel better. Hopefully it all passes pretty quick. Night.

Sleep

Editing talk later

Have fun. Hope you feel better.

Pregnant one piece girls and I do

That's pretty great. Will look for one Piece girls, but found a fun game you need to check out. Don't know how you feel about deck builders or rogue lites, but having a blast with the demo for this game Get Yoked.

The body types you can achieve once you get good at the game. it's something else. lol.

This pictures pretty great.

I hate everything about this portrayal of bodybuilding. It is everything grotesque of the practice. Those pecs are man ass boobs

Sexy in art, doubtful if sexy in real life. More and let's see talk Charlie or Warring Paths

That's kind of the point of the game. lol. It's parodying how external and out of touch body building has become. Like any rouge like there's a goal or number you have to surpass each "week" and if you don't you lose.

But if you succeed early you get a reward, right? Well one of them is an event where your mom is in the hospital and you can choose to cut your training short this week for no gain or ignore her and keep chasing gains. which do you think people choose?