Questionable Questing

I did. I am finally free and also got some dinner. I'm free of the furry menace.

And sure I think putting it there would be a pretty good idea. Means you would get not just feedback from me but a bunch of other people too. Which since sounds a really good for your case, since it sounds like you're still building a lot of the mechanics for your world and it's magic.

Are you there? Are we moving to the discord?

I sent things

I sent it there for ease of reading

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Heyo

Hello. How is your day? Mine's been quiet, not much really noteworthy to be honest.

Above update for you and got out of work early

Nice. Early days are always nice.

Indeed. Reading update?

I am, something pretty noticeable right off the back is that Semens. Lol. I'm sorry I couldn't help myself. I'm so childish sometimes. Seamus is a lot less rough around the edges than Hurrik. I mean he still has that need to prove himself, a bit of an ego, and will shank some people if need be. But Hurrik had a pack of dogs fuck his woman and all he could think about is how hot it was to see her crawling around.

Hurrik was an edgy boy. A lot angrier, a lot more vicious. A lot more outwardly confrontational. Don't know if it's from the switch to NSFW to SFW. If it's the removal from the inherent edginess of ASOIAF. Or what. But there's a definite change in the characters.

It is the switch from hardcore porn but did you read the one where he gouged out a guy's neck?

I got to that point, and again it was edgy but it wasn't as edgy as it once was. I blame the lack of details. During fights you would see the blood, guts, and gore in some pretty vivid details, all of which Hurrik narrated with zero emotion so it felt like he could go full on Bolton flaying and not feel a thing.

But I also feel like once you get out of the prologue and get some real fights again rather than passing mentions, we'll probably see some of that edge and bloody guts return.

Oh you want gore? That I can do. I can do very eagerly

But how you liking update?