Questionable Questing

I am, something pretty noticeable right off the back is that Semens. Lol. I'm sorry I couldn't help myself. I'm so childish sometimes. Seamus is a lot less rough around the edges than Hurrik. I mean he still has that need to prove himself, a bit of an ego, and will shank some people if need be. But Hurrik had a pack of dogs fuck his woman and all he could think about is how hot it was to see her crawling around.

Hurrik was an edgy boy. A lot angrier, a lot more vicious. A lot more outwardly confrontational. Don't know if it's from the switch to NSFW to SFW. If it's the removal from the inherent edginess of ASOIAF. Or what. But there's a definite change in the characters.

It is the switch from hardcore porn but did you read the one where he gouged out a guy's neck?

I got to that point, and again it was edgy but it wasn't as edgy as it once was. I blame the lack of details. During fights you would see the blood, guts, and gore in some pretty vivid details, all of which Hurrik narrated with zero emotion so it felt like he could go full on Bolton flaying and not feel a thing.

But I also feel like once you get out of the prologue and get some real fights again rather than passing mentions, we'll probably see some of that edge and bloody guts return.

Oh you want gore? That I can do. I can do very eagerly

But how you liking update?

Well it was more the juxtaposition of extreme gore/debauchery with zero emotion from Hurrik that made it special. The guy could step on someone's brains and get more annoyed at dirtying his shoes than where that brain came from. Which was also a nice juxtaposition with how loving and tender he could be very rarely with certain people.

Just constant extremes in all angles. But with the update, the explanation of how Investments work was cool but it's still a lot of ground work and world building so not the most interesting stuff. But still incredibly essential.

Was this update the one with the argument with Sergant Lousis?

Ah this is the latest. How was Lucan's pov? Fun to read and Bel and Seamus's argument?
Update before this

That was the last update. I'm pretty sure. It ended with Seamus saying something how I hope we never meet again like this or I'll have to kill you.

You Ninja'ed me. But Lucan made me hungry, while Bel's fight revealed that Seamus is shockingly a little insecure about his love/family life.

The link I just sent is him stabbing a dude in the neck I think

I'll be back, going to go make me some dinner.

How dinner and update link I sent the new one has Seamus making a guy bleed from the throat

I am back. Had some grilled cheese, also cooked some for my aunt and then helped settle the dogs in. Feed them, take them out, that kind of stuff. They should be good for the rest of the night now.

So what were we talking about again? Lol. I kind of got a little lost in the links and references.

https://forums.sufficientvelocity.c...ettlement-building-quest.144467/post-35559167 This update

Okay. So the update before the one I just read a little while ago. What are you wondering about this one? Just a general review or any character specific stuff?