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Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Ah this is the latest. How was Lucan's pov? Fun to read and Bel and Seamus's argument?
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Heir of the Shattered Kingdom - Original Fantasy Adventure and Settlement Building Quest Original

“Look at what the wind blew in!” Six chairs all moved as one as the heavy set boy pushed himself back, five guards rising to join their Lord as Seamus walked into the well-kept tavern. All around them curious eyes looked on, local merchants or well-off laborers who could afford to pay the...
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Update before this
Andy333
Andy333
That was the last update. I'm pretty sure. It ended with Seamus saying something how I hope we never meet again like this or I'll have to kill you.
Andy333
Andy333
You Ninja'ed me. But Lucan made me hungry, while Bel's fight revealed that Seamus is shockingly a little insecure about his love/family life.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
The link I just sent is him stabbing a dude in the neck I think
Andy333
Andy333
I'll be back, going to go make me some dinner.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
How dinner and update link I sent the new one has Seamus making a guy bleed from the throat
Andy333
Andy333
I am back. Had some grilled cheese, also cooked some for my aunt and then helped settle the dogs in. Feed them, take them out, that kind of stuff. They should be good for the rest of the night now.
Andy333
Andy333
So what were we talking about again? Lol. I kind of got a little lost in the links and references.
Andy333
Andy333
Okay. So the update before the one I just read a little while ago. What are you wondering about this one? Just a general review or any character specific stuff?
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
General review and what you think of Seamus edge here and is the character interaction more entertaining then the magic talk of the latest update?
Andy333
Andy333
Just finished, the drunk guy was an asshole and I was shocked nobody interfered sooner. If for nothing else it was obvious he was squaring up for a fight that very easily could've escalated and the wedding was literally tomorrow. lol. But he did suffer for it. Not only got the shit kicked out of him, publically humiliated in front of everyone, but he called a very popular queen a whore.
Andy333
Andy333
Not going to have a fun time. Probably cost him a lot of honor and respect with that move. He probably spent a lot of his Invested too, keeping himself from dying. Don't know how that all works or how expensive that could be. But I stand by it. Hurrik would've probably killed the guy, but then again Hurrik had a lot of character growth behind him and had move on from his daddy issues a lot.
Andy333
Andy333
It kind of feels like Seamus is right at the beginning of his daddy issues character arc.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Oh he avoided calling her one. Stopped himself from saying it and getting fedual justice done to him
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
You can't spend Investment. Its a investing of the spirits influence into you. You don't have a limited amount you run out of. Hurik also wasn't just off a kingdoms ruining war where his dad commited magical war crimes. I'll note what you said for edge.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
That is a fun part of characters I like to play with but it has to be done in a way that feels good to the readers. Do it willy nilly and its bad, doesn't add to the story. Pushing Seamus to the breaking point or having a moment where honor agrees he should crush someone will be a goal now.
Andy333
Andy333
He said enough that people know what he meant. But he didn't technically, so he'll probably get a stern talking too from his leige in terms of punishment, but the loss of respect is going to be the real bitch.
Andy333
Andy333
So if you can't spend investment, what's the limit of how much spirits will give you?
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Investment is spirits like you. Cheer you on. They support your skills and physical talents or your memorable ability. A sport teams cheer does not equal the Deep Magic where spirits alter the world around you
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