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Questionable Questing

Andy333
Andy333
Anyway, where as Lucy had no clue, Himeno had a pretty good idea that something weird was going on. Her back story is a police officer that was involved in a bloody shootout against a villain and lost her unit. Spent a couple years bouncing around alcoholism and trying to get revenge until she met Miss Robinson and the two slowly healed together.
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Who's Himeno? So many die on that manga.
Andy333
Andy333
Himeno like Lucy fell in love because of the loyalty and trust the mc shared, but more importantly the mc never looked down at her as something damaged like everyone else did. For the mc, Himeno was a fun stress free fling at first that was a break from the assassin lifestyle, that slowly evolved into love for both of them.
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Bob is bob
And than she finds out her wife is a hired killer
Andy333
Andy333
Now for the big contrast between Himeno and Lucy, and what makes her unique out of the three options. When Himeno found out the truth about the mc, she was pissed sure and hurt that she lied, but Himeno unlike the other two option never considered leaving the mc. For Himeno she's ride or die. Her whole life basically revolves around the mc and the idea of leaving is so terrifying she would rather kill herself.
Andy333
Andy333
Unlike the other two love interest, Himeno never really developed a backbone against the mc and despite wanting a normal relationship for the mc a lot of the master/slave mentality she had with her other loves founds it way into her relationship with Himeno.
Andy333
Andy333
himeno's character arc will be less about the mc trying to refall in love with her and more about the two reconciling and trying to figure out what exactly their relationship is. Either Himeno goes all in on the slave mentality and just become another faceless member of the harem or the mc builds her up and helps her deal with her trauma and become an equal.
Andy333
Andy333
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
The faceless sounds like a bad boring ending to avoid
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Bob is bob
So Himeno stuck with?
And what you got for a femboy body and face Denji
Andy333
Andy333
I don't typically like bad ends either, but some bad ends can be fun and I like to give the readers the freedom and opportunity even if nine times out of ten they don't ever go for it.
Andy333
Andy333
its hilarious, I've seen GM's that wanted a story to be about some orc or barbarian that goes around raping and looting everything and then a couple chapter's in the reader had some how found a way to tease a tsundere elf into asking them out on a date.
Andy333
Andy333
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Ever read Crowned Conquest? Great smut. Vile main characters. It's a terrible quest on Fiction Live for mood
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Bob is bob
Could use more variations but I like. I imagine Miss Robbinson would want to both fuck her femboy sons and have them fuck and impregnate her wife and daughter
Andy333
Andy333
I've heard of Crowned Conquest and I've tried to read a couple times, but its just not my thing. I don't really like characters that are cruel for no reason. I like exploring the minds and emotions of characters and mindless sadism doesn't have any of that.
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Bob is bob
The Crowned are wretched. Complete assholes the lot of them. For Robbinson,make a point of from her Pov not having an issue with sharing her bitches with her femboys. Remove the false dichotomy of treating subs like shit. What's the last family?. Yor?
Andy333
Andy333
I'm debating between a couple characters from spiderman or batman.
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Bob is bob
Do tell
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Bob is bob
What kind of characters
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