Questionable Questing

Using this we can build up the immigrant family's demon traits

Talk later. I'm going to bed early, hope I feel better tomorrow.

I hope you do too

How ya feeling? Saw you posted, read tonight

Still sick, but a little bit better. Was kind of irritated this morning. What happened is since I haven't worked this job thirty days yet I wasn't allowed to take a paid day off, and I assumed that if you take a day off that isn't paid you get written up for it, but when I arrive at work, my manger was like no its totally fine. If your sick, your sick, just don't do it all the time.

So I got up took the thirty minute drive there for nothing.

Dang. Want to talk Immigrant family and demon powers?
How was your update?

The update was good, came out a lot more emotional and a lot less slutty then I intended but sometimes character interactions just seem to sneak up on you.

How do you write smut without feeling awkward and distracted?

For immigrant family, any particular demon themes you want, ergo not me injecting my ideas into things. Want your creativity

How do I write smut? I have lots of little tricks. first up read. read. read. It sound stupid, but one of the best pieces of writing advice I've ever received along with always finish your shit. But really read a lot of different kinds of smut. read some written by woman, by men, some light tasteful romance you will find at the dollar story, some hard core rape fics.

Really try to get as wide of a net of different smut stories and start to pay attention to the words the use, find new and better ways to say dick and pussy, because those too words kill any sort of fun in a story. Think manhood, lower lips, rose bud. Also keep in mind the time period and mindset of the characters. If your doing fantasy describing a penis like a sword or a weapon works.

I also learn to describe fruit and eating because a lot of the sensory stuff carries over. I think describing the colors and the mood also work pretty well. Stuff like if its on a beach, mention a cool salty wave splashing against their sweaty bodies. Basically find ways to include the environment into the sex, to give the readers a time and place.

One thing I notice in subpar sex scenes is that it feels floaty and dream like. Which is either because the author is inexperienced with writing sex scenes, uncomfortable with it, or doesn't know how to integrate the feelings of the character, with the the physical sensations and tie in the environment all together cohesively.

And holy crap I just realized I could probably write a college theisis on writing smut. lol. Really though if you practice anything enough times you'll get better at it.

Noted. Environment as part of it is a great idea.

I had a thought.
Son=Demonic transformation and monster powers
Bimbo demon mother=Hell manipulation
Sister and Daddy boi=Unsure
Thoughts on how to use each of the family to worldbuild demon combat. Son can do Hell manipulation and mother demon forms, but they have their talents

The dads turning into a femboy, so maybe transformations and illusions of some kind? And the sister I also thought she would go into magic to compensate for the fact she's not that physically intimidating.

Father and son power transformations with concepts and elemental abilities
Sister and mother different kinds of Hell Manipulation?

I'm thinking the mom does more large scale stuff like the whole jungle thing you were talking about, while the sister specializes in smaller stuff like creating hell fire or rituals.

Hell manipulation as personal spells vs domain shaping

basically. The mom's more powerful, but it takes longer for her to get set up and her powers are less useful in a one on one battle. So in a straight fight the sister would win, but over all the mom's stronger. Since she can shape hell itself, build armies, castles, land, from basically thin air.