Questionable Questing

Pretty good, I thought you were busy since I'm used to you messaging around seven o'clock on my end.

Its Friday tomorrow!!! Whoo!!

I got distracted. I am going to bed around 1 while it is 12:21 here. Want to hear me talk about Moniker Bloodlines? A sadly weakned by its terrible pacing and porn visuals awesome premise porn VN

Sure, random VN's you can find on steam are always super fun. No matter how terrible they are.

Porn game hub. Vampire bimbos and alpha chads spread through a town and take it over. A guy makes a deal with some Serpent god to become a Master vampire and starts turning people into horny vampire sluts.

What's interesting is characters say they are evil with sucking the souls out of people but people stick together. Families stay close, friends stay friends. The vampires are hyper sexed and have potential for horror, but overall aren't bad.

Lots of incest happens when the super hot vampires turn near their family like a mom having the blood milk sucked out of her tits by her son and daughter or a girl working to become the main harem wife of her daddy . The premise is great as guys are turned into vampires too and get to fuck bitches but the kinks suck.

No great dirty talk, well there is some but not enough, no domination or power play, no foreplay, its very bad at being sexy . Super busty and curvy vampire bimbos but no getting into that mindset. I think a vampire bimbo is a super interesting concept

Sounds like the Author had good idea's, but he lacked the experience, writing ability, or nerve to take it as far as it needed. Kinds of sucks that happens, but you shouldn't let a good idea go to waste.

So the bimbo vampires take over the town and have things like two wives who offer blood wine to corrupt people or a coffe store owner turning a employe and offering to turn her sister. There are these surreal acting like they are offering a gift interactions between the vampire bimbo sluts and the normal people that are great.

So much potential but the porn is shite, and the fucking switching between renders is too much. I do not need a new render image that is slightly different every time someone talks. And the writing, oh fuck the writing. I can't get a paragraph worth a damn of concentrated thought, and this has good Pov writing here and there so it sucks. The idea of Vampire slut bimbos taking over a town is great

One of my favorite tropes from porn is the characters treating really surreal and unrealistic events like their normal. its kind of sucks that everything else didn't work. Really sounds like the writer needs a good editor to knock some sense into him about proper formatting.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d_V-BQ-FSlI

Like this. This is some of the funniest shit ever. You can literally see the actors looking at the script in between scenes, but since its a porn it works.

He doesn't write the scenes sexy enough, and honestly the horror elements of the Vampires aren't really that great. Which is good. It is nice to not have absolute monster s for characers but it does make the Vampires stand out less as sexual predators, needs more domination and mind fuckery

It can be hard balancing horror with wholesome. Making really fucked up character sympathetic is not nearly as easy as it sounds. See the last decade of Harley Quinn's writing, if you want an example of easy it is to screw up.

This scene made me laugh pretty hard too.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mtx1u8n_zpI

Ma'm, this is a bathtub.
Gets me. I'm thinking you'd want to keep the chad vampires but also include femboys and have the vampires treat people as sex toys and pets and slaves, even if it is fun there is a level of power difference here between lesser and greater vampires and how they treat each ohter

I'm wondering how the politics's and power struggles between the different groups in the town will look like after everyone gets bimbofied.

I'm just imaging a school board meeting filled with screaming Karen's and their annoying kids, devolving into a huge lesbian and incestuous orgy. Lol