Questionable Questing

Oh, speaking of nations do you have any you've created yet or a basic map in your head, or are you still working on those/

No clue. There is a nation that is invaded and the protag group comes from there and they are being attacked by another nation. Simple as.

Need particular magic powers or ideas for the Avantaie and Shavaide

Whoop's sorry, for some reason their was an error and i had to wait a few minutes for qq to start working again. I don't know what's wrong with chat but its being really finicky.

I too felt that error

And if you have problems with coming up with nations, one of the best piece of advice i've heard is first start by figuring out the technology level and what kind of populations can be supported. Basically the more food you have, the easier it is for people to do more than farming as a living, and the more specialized your society gets.

If you have magic that could imiate something like refrigeration or magic that could be used for transporting large amounts of stuff, not only is that really fun world building but it also a handy excuse for why a medival technology level can support millions of people easily.

View: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ilPEKb_59q0

Ah, somewhat helpful but not great for culture building. Refegerator magic sounds semi easy to craft.
Not essential but useful background.

And guess what with refigerator magic, you have a handy excuse for why ice cream exists in your story now. lol. But really since a huge part of the story is centered around the two goddesses and their eternal conflict, the best place to start when coming up with a society is exploring what human's relationship with the goddesses is and how their could be different interpratations of her words.

Anyway it's getting late, so night. Talk tommorow. Hopefully there's less issues with qq.

Sleep well. The fucking comment boxes are still stacking. GODDDDD

And bud, the Shavadie and Avanataie are mage women.

More my thing tonight?
Comments still fucking borked.
And David and his bully talk for Cyberpunk fic and more on the demons and Gloria's plot?

Damn it, I hope this comment thing isn't permanent. But how was your day? Anything going on? I'm currently doing some laundry and writing a little more on My therapist.

Going to edit for Jackal and not too bad. Late shift but extra tips for it.

Using Katsuo as they are corrupted and dominated by David to give a corpo perspective?

And what's in the writing

I'm currently working on momo's section for the next update. its actually kind of hard to write manipulative characters, you need what their saying to sound reasonable enough or it'll make anyone who falls for it look stupid, but at the same time you need at least a couple alarm bells to go off in the readers heads or else then the character isn't gray anymore.

And the contect for this is Robin is trying to convince Momo to try a sneaky way of being a class president, an underhanded way to help people in other words, since the readers want Momo to slowly get trained to be Robin's little background manager for the harem, and its a little tough balancing it.

Have the duality of Robin doing this for herself but also thinking it will help Momo and Robin is growing attached and wants Robin as a harem slave like she used to have. Old hungers and dreams returning