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Questionable Questing

Andy333
Andy333
But another big thing for the characters is that they are going to want to start having children as soon as possible and as many as possible, and it'll be because they have so many memories of these past children that it's an attempt to fill that void and try not to ask themselves if any of them are alive in this world or how many of them our dead just from the effects of time.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Your really exploring the implications of this high concept, I like it and feel free to check out and talk in my discord server when you got the time. Everyone a writing nerd there
Andy333
Andy333
I think especially with self inserts, just how unatural it would be to see a supposed kid having this much maturity and intellect is a woefully under utilized concept. Anyway night. I'm going to go chill my aunt and watch more 90 days.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Sleep well. Talk later
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
How was your day?
Andy333
Andy333
Pretty good. I finally got some of those broken ac's running and a coworker brought in some Shwarma. How was your day?
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Got tiny writing done before work. Waking up at 9 tomorrow for writing before work and playing Dead Cells now while listening to Spotify. What you reading or watching and you got anything in ya brain writing wise?
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Could talk the Resort idea more how you'd use it.
Andy333
Andy333
The resort idea? I would move away from the demon summing part. Not necessarily getting rid of it but hiding it more, really play up the horror and make it this big mystery the protagonist have to figure out as they explore this town. Make the more supernatural stuff a little more subtle so you almost trick the readers into wondering how much of it is real.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Draw more on Silent Hill but sexy?
Andy333
Andy333
Although if I was going to write this idea, I wouldn't do a resort at all. I would probably do a treatment facility for some kind of drug addiction or some kind of mental issues, not just because I work at one but I don't know if I ever mentioned this too you. But when I was a teenager I got sent to a pretty rough military school that was later shut down for doing some pretty bad stuff.
Andy333
Andy333
And I guess you could say I know very well the kind of scary stuff that happens at these kind of places.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Yikes man. You recover okay?
And bimbofication doctors?
Andy333
Andy333
I made it out fine. They weren't too physically abusive like some other horror stories I read about. The worst that happened there was kids getting locked in a concrete room about the size of closet for a couple days and getting body slammed a couple times if they tried fighting or resisting. It took a couple years to fully get over all that.
Andy333
Andy333
I think the worst part was that if you wanted to talk you needed to get permission, and I know that sounds really stupid. But I remembered getting yelled at because I asked someone for paper on my second or third day there and that kind of set the tone for the rest of my stay. lol.
Andy333
Andy333
You couldn't talk unless you raised your hand and got permission from the staff, and only in designated areas and times where someone was listening. Anyway enough about that. Too depressing. lol. I was thinking femdom nurses in sexy suits. Clean and sleek enough to look professional and yet revealing enough skin to make you feel indecent, really straddle the line between making the MC wonder if its deliberate or not.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
That sounds wretched. Not okay.
And not conductive to making kids better.
How you making this Silent Hill incest cult place better:V
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
A key aspect I imagine is the staff would gladly coach and encourage someone who wanted to be dominant and add to the corruption. No forced submission, all choices with helpful guides
Andy333
Andy333
Well first off all the staff members are milfs's looking to spoil these kids. lol, And more importantly all these kids were specifically chosen for this "treatment" because each and everyone of them has some sort of repressed urge or quirk to their sexuality their hiding.
Andy333
Andy333
Kind of like how silent hill draws in tortured souls looking for punishment or redemption, the series wasn't clear on that, the resort brings in deviants looking for the freedom to express themselves.
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