Questionable Questing

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Bob is bob

Hope your having fun talking and it is stirring thoughts for Warlock's blade setting

Bob is bob

Long 8 hour shift. How your day?

Andy333

Kind of tired, just haven't been feeling that well. Really hoping I'm not coming down with anything.

Bob is bob

Dang. What ya want to talk for ya writing ideas? Or other shit

Andy333

Been rereading and trying to work a little on my two quests. Just been a little stuck on the smut scenes, so if you have any advice on that would love it. lol.

Bob is bob

Describe the issue with the smut scene

Andy333

Sounds stupid, but I'm looking for more words to describe different parts. Since I've been rereading my old stuff, I'm really noticing out often I use certain words over and over again. Stuff like calling pussy her lower lips, moaned desperately, rod, throbbed, groaned loudly, ecetera. lol. I'm noticing almost tropes in the porn I write and I'm not liking it.

Bob is bob

Try more explicit physical shape detail and poetic similie and colorful erotic creative language.

Andy333

You have any stories, visual novels, or any suggestions? As stupid as it sounds one of the best writing advice I was ever given was just read a lot. lol And when ever I get writers block it does actually help.

Bob is bob

Let me try one.

Bob is bob

https://www.literotica.com/s/nora-in-the-sun-pt-01 Good story but not sure how useful it is for what ya want

Andy333

I'm liking it already, thanks. How about you any stuff your working on or writing right now?

Bob is bob

I talking with a friend in voice and would talk about your stuff as it takes less brain power

Andy333

You know I've been sitting here for the past ten minutes trying to think of any new idea's, since I've at this point told you all of my snippets and scraps I've accumulated when I suddenly remembered a quest idea I had a while back.

Andy333

You know the whole slut life thing, where there's the evil inter-dimensional business that goes around cloning various heroines and selling them off as slaves to self inserts so they can take over various settings?

Andy333

Don't worry this isn't a waifu catalog story. I despise those. No this is a story where one of their cloning facilities had some sort of malfunction and there's now an army of thousands maybe tens of thousands of some of the most dangerous woman in existence all cloned with a sex drive that would literally kill a man from dehydration.

Andy333

And your a standard clone solider that was made by a team of scientist who want to keep the base, which is a sprawling space station that's falling apart and is filled with miles of stupid and destructive experiments that are all unleashed as well, from self destructing or crash landing what ever happens first.

Bob is bob

Train degrade and dominate them bitches

Andy333

Basically what I'm thinking is it's a rogue lite, where each time the main character dies either from something violent or a literal horde of bitches. lol. The player can vote for new traits, new training, different cybernetic stuff, and over time either get stronger or change their build to do different stuff.

Bob is bob

Oh I like this